ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 13

This was such a beautiful yet heartbreaking read Maahi 💔.

I'm really excited to see how you're going to give us a happier epilogue after this...

P. S. I'm a sucker for tragedies and heartbreaks in fiction so keep coming with more such or even sadder shots(love reading your happy ones too) .

Originally posted by: Oeindrila

This was such a beautiful yet heartbreaking read Maahi 💔.

I'm really excited to see how you're going to give us a happier epilogue after this...

P. S. I'm a sucker for tragedies and heartbreaks in fiction so keep coming with more such or even sadder shots(love reading your happy ones too) .

Thank you so muchhhhhhh🖤

I love that u loved this tragedy

I peeped, shamelessly so. It was an amazing work. I've always loved the madness to their love, you know. That scene where Raavi says that at least Shiva kam se kam dushmani ki rishte ko shiddhat se nibhaata hai uske saath, it's one of my favorites. It was a work that gave me goosebumps though😘.

What's your name, by the way?

Hello Mahi, nice to meet you. My name's Sathya.

Maahii❤️

I had kept this as the last OS to read as I knew I wouldn't be able to handle this. This was heart breaking Maahii. When I started reading it, I told myself I should not cry but I could not hold my tears. I cried reading this. The angst, the heart break and the pain....Maahiiii you are an amazing writer...I salute you for bringing all these emotions to life....I felt so heavy as I read this and am still not come to terms....This comment might not be best one..I still have a huge lump in my heart as I write this.

“Itna ki tere liye zindagi ke baad bhi tere sang reh jaaun.”

The last line...The end was painful💔

This story is a master piece...You are best in bringing out deep emotions..Thank you for writing this...It was painful but I loved reading it❤️

I really need some more time to process this...

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

It was beyond everything which I read till now💔

Heartbreakingly beautiful❤️

I can't stop crying dear😭💔

My heart 🥺😭

I read all the comments and decided to skip this..but here I am..couldn't resist any longer..

this was really heartbreaking💔 The moment I read his picture from her wedding day...I knew I am in for an emotional roller coaster..but didn't know it is gonna be this intense.

I am sucker for happy endings but still I loveeeed this...the pain,the angst every emotion was perfectly described..U write beautifully❤️

Waiting for the epilogue.

Don't have words to describe it.

It was amazing though.

Maahi you are a fantastic writer 💜

This was intense, emotional but so beautiful 💜