ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 12

Mahi!!

I'm a glutton for punishment since I've read this twice, but still unable to process the whole thing so I'll read it again later.

I cannot imagine a world for Raavi without Shiva and you've done that but you haven't. The stages of her grief are so painful, she's died a thousand times over and will die a thousand times more.

Hats off for writing such an intense piece of art!! Please make the next one happy 😘

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

My feeling

She feels emotionally strong then many of the readers.

Make sense?

Or am I sounding like a lunatic??

Strong hoon par emotionless toh nahi🤷‍♀️

Yes I didn't sob or cry over it.. but did have heaviness in my heart and some palpitations which are still here since I read it in the afternoon. Got reminded of a friend who lost her sister in a similar accident and she saw her sister die in front of her eyes and is still not able to recover from that loss completely even after more than 10 years. So yeah it was heart breaking.

Anyway, on the writing front, beautifully written.. you have an amazing way with words.❤

As always beautiful but hurtful 💔

“Itna ki tere liye zindagi ke baad bhi tere sang reh jaaun.” this broke my heart

Such an amazing piece of writing

Maahi🤗...This is beautifully heart breaking🥺...Lemme go and watch Friends...I need it

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

U wanted his accident and her feelings

Did u find it ok??

Yeah I wanted it, and I loved it! I didn't want Shiva to die though! I wish he would have lived!

But his pain, strength, will power and his love was beautifully expressed, followed by raavi's pain, grief and love ❤️

I don't know what to write..my guess was correct and I feel numb right now

Tears are not stopping..it literally broke my heart..It's strange how we don't value things till we have them..Raavi's realisation was way too late.. Shiva's madness has passed on to Raavi..Her lunacy was scary

The last line though💔I got goosebumps!!

Take a bow girl!!

Originally posted by: ForeverForU

I don't know what to write..my guess was correct and I feel numb right now

Tears are not stopping..it literally broke my heart..It's strange how we don't value things till we have them..Raavi's realisation was way too late.. Shiva's madness has passed on to Raavi..Her lunacy was scary

The last line though💔I got goosebumps!!

Take a bow girl!!

Thank you sooo much🖤🖤

Originally posted by: Popzzzz

Maahi🤗...This is beautifully heart breaking🥺...Lemme go and watch Friends...I need it

Aww Paro!

Thank you🖤

Omg 😲

This was so well written, that u actually cried while reading, raavi 's pain as the stages passes was described so beautifully .