ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 11

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

So that might mean she’ll not cry. But I don’t think she’ll outright laugh at it, cause you’ve written it really well. Only laugh that’s possible is a hysterical one, but I don’t think that’ll happen either 😆❤️

Actual mein when I said that yesterday I had not yet typed the OS at all. Just some lines. And I didn’t think ki itna emotional hoga. And I din think that I would actually kill him off last mein. Happy ending socha tha, But then it just suited the storyline. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Actual mein when I said that yesterday I had not yet typed the OS at all. Just some lines. And I didn’t think ki itna emotional hoga. And I din think that I would actually kill him off last mein. Happy ending socha tha, But then it just suited the storyline. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Okay if you had made it a happy ending, Saksh might have laughed. Even I’d have laughed in relief 😂

You typed out that whole thing in a few hours? 😱 Kaise kar leti ho?

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Okay if you had made it a happy ending, Saksh might have laughed. Even I’d have laughed in relief 😂

You typed out that whole thing in a few hours? 😱 Kaise kar leti ho?

Original ending epilogue mein dene ka soch rahi hoon but lets see. This one suits it more but every one ended up being upset n I don’t like everyone upset. So I will try. Sakshi might have liked that one. It had a kind of twist. Guess kar sakti hai to kar.

I typed it in three hours but with lots of breaks. I usually don’t take breaks while writing. But today in the morning I had to to leave tuping for various works. So itna late ho gaya😆

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Original ending epilogue mein dene ka soch rahi hoon but lets see. This one suits it more but every one ended up being upset n I don’t like everyone upset. So I will try. Sakshi might have liked that one. It had a kind of twist. Guess kar sakti hai to kar.

I typed it in three hours but with lots of breaks. I usually don’t take breaks while writing. But today in the morning I had to to leave tuping for various works. So itna late ho gaya😆

Omg omg omg yaaay yaaaay yaaaaaaay! 🥳This is the Mahi that I know and loveeeeeeee so muchhhhh 🤗

My guesses:

He’s not really dead? But is revived?

Or he pretends he’s dead, while he actually goes far away from her. Cause that’s the only way she can be completely free of him?

Or maybe someone else was hit by the truck but these people thought it was shiva

Wow! That too with toddlers 😲 Dont know how you manage ❤️

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Omg omg omg yaaay yaaaay yaaaaaaay! 🥳This is the Mahi that I know and loveeeeeeee so muchhhhh 🤗

My guesses:

He’s not really dead? But is revived?

Or he pretends he’s dead, while he actually goes far away from her. Cause that’s the only way she can be completely free of him?

Or maybe someone else was hit by the truck but these people thought it was shiva

Wow! That too with toddlers 😲 Dont know how you manage ❤️

I love u too Nivi

Kids sleep at that time so I can type

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I love u too Nivi

Kids sleep at that time so I can type

❤️

You didn’t tell me if my guesses were hot or cold 😆

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

❤️

You didn’t tell me if my guesses were hot or cold 😆

N I won’t either!!!

Jab likh loon tab padh lena❤️

Maahi🤗 read the teaser first but didn’t comment as I was waiting for the full OS. This is the saddest OS I have read on ShiVi in this forum. When you gave a clue in the EDT about an accident didn’t think it would result in death. I read this last night before going to bed, couldn’t muster my thoughts to comment on it. I like positive endings and to get this one off my mind looks like I have to read Ananya’s Deewani Bhabi ke nuske again😆

From the language pov and creativity you are on a different level👏.As for the concept, it did upset me.

From the teaser I got the idea that this os is tragic 😭

I was avoiding reading it as I don't like tragic stories😭

You are a terrific writer, the way you convey emotions and the characters was beautiful👏

Shiva is dead and Raavi has stopped living😭

Hoping you will write a story with a happy ending soon

I thought there would be a twist and he would come back😭