Originally posted by: Ps143
Caught up with the episode finally. God such a mood uplifter after an exhausting exam (yes exams can be exhausting, especially when Physics is the hardest and mostly your "favourite" subject) and never ending classes!
The episode, their soulful moment moved me and here i am penning down two lines (which'll increase maybe) each on that entire scene. Side affects of trying to learn haiku - have penned two liners using nature as backdrop. "Organic" is the show but soulful and grounded are Adilie. Couldn't help but pen this. Come lets dive deep and connect to their connect through my perspective. Would love to hear what you comprehend from these, would love to know your meaning. An immature and amateur attempt by a girl who just turned 18.
Petrichor-
barren lands light up with relief
a final push before the burst -
tranquillity floating as the silent breeze
the dust of the storm settles-
leaving behind a blissful calm
shackles clamour to the rhythms of love -
a freeing tune soothing his bound being
caged externally himself, he cages her in his embrace-
a quivering bud wrapped in warmth of sepals
she squeezes him back-
matching up being his other half, a dew drop sheltering the expanse of the leaf, sheltering it from flying dust.
that soothing kiss-
veils of rain droplets dropping down, draping them gently
time stills, no it forgets to run -
stands witness to a moment so enchanting and fulfilling
Irony is their fate -
surrounded by negativities of the world yet their love untouched and chaste
they walk back bathed in dust
yet sparkle bright in contrast -
eclipsed moon still presents a marvellous sight
collapsed castles-
built upon delusional foundations
noise and clatter -
lost, defeated retaliation
immaturity at its peak, a cheap show
silence suddenly dawned -
claims and expectations vanished in sorrow she herself called for
hiding in plain sight-
a concealed paradise
Is it concealed?
Or blinded sight cannot place
It's genuiness
An acceptance, a give-in
to the shout of conscience - the one he has been subduing
that which felt abrupt yet genuine!
These were the moments I loved, can't pen down for others coz I just FFed them.
Would have preferred better bgm for their hug scene.
Yet to catch up with the thread.
@Apsvenky - thanks for the lovely write up and thread🤗
@Whatever765 - amazing and rocking as always, your poems just make our day.😍❤️🤗
Precap -
Vile, disgusting and now she's crossed all levels of insanity in her craze for revenge. I don't know whats going to happen ahead. Just want her to face the consequences for her insane foolishness and evil ploy.