Shivi TS : My Minor Wife ❤️ Part 4 updated on page 13 - Page 5

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Hii dears I'm back with second part of My story

Do read it and let me know how was it

Please ignore grammatical errors and illogical things as I don't know what I have even wrote to be honest... maybe I have added so much drama on this part...but believe me it's needed for the story progression...

No chappals and tomatoes please...

So without wasting time....

My Minor Wife Part 2

Pandya Parivaar....

Dhara is seen roaming there and there and checking all the arrangements carefully as today is Shivi and Devta's engagement ceremony...

Suman comes to Dhara: Dhara jaldi kar, Shiva and Dev ko bulao Rishita aur Raavi aa rahe honge apne gharwalo ke sath...

Dhara: Ji Maa, sab tayaar hai, Dev and Shiva are getting ready at Shiva's room along with Krish...

Suman: Thik hai, aur Gombhi kahan hai?...

Dhara: Gombhi kuch saman lene bazaar gaya hai Kaka ke sath...

Suman nods and asks Dhara to take her to her room and they leave....

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In Shiva's room...

Krish excitedly helping Shiva fixing his tie while Dev is busy talking with Rishita outside the room...

Krish: Wah mere bhai, kitna handsome lag rahe ho...

Shiva: Jaldi se yeh tie fix kar aur ziyada bak bak karna band kar...Maa wait kar rahi hai hume...

Krish: Bas ho gaya bhai...

Dev comes there after finishing his talk wit Rishita and asks them to hurry up...

Dev: Hogaya tum logon ka? Aur kitne time lagega tayaar hone mein?...Jaldi kar naa... Rishita is almost reaching the home...

Krish teasingly: Kya bhai, Bhabhi ko dekhne ke liye itna description? Waise bhi woh toh humesha ke liye aapki hone wali hai na toh itni description ki kya zaroorat hai?...

Shiva hitting his head lightly: Chup kar, aur chalo sab log...

Krish rubbing his head: Kya bhai? Sach hi toh bola meine...Koi baat nahi aapke bhi time aayega ek din, tab mein achhe se tease karunga aapko...

Shiva just shakes his head on this while Dev gives a look to him before following Shiva and they went out of the room...

The trio reach the hall and Krish wen behind Suman and stood there while Siva and Dev took blessings from Suman while she blessed her sons happily...

After sometime Gombhi too joins them along with Dhara...

Guests starts arriving one by one and Gombhi with Dhara welcomed them...

While Dev excitedly waited for his lady love's arrival with Krish who was busy with his teasings...

Shiva was in dilemma about his decision to marry Raavi, as for him this was needed for His family and for his mother's happiness, but he was worried about Raavi, that little girl, he wanted to know what she thought about this marriage, is she really okay with this marriage or she is doing this under some pressure?... He needed to know answers to these questions....with those thoughts he decided to wait for Raavi and talk with her before engagement...

And Finally Rishita's family arrived and Suman along with Gaura welcomed them smiling while Dev, Shiva, Krish greeted them...Then Dev looked at Rishita all smiling and winked at her on which Rishita looks down blushing... Seeing this Krish giggles and pats Dev's back...

Krish: Sambhalo aapne aapko bhai, todhi dher ki toh baat hai...

Dev: Tu phir bola?...

Krish: Haan toh?...Mera muh, aapko issey kitya lena dena hai waise bhi...Jo mann chahe wohi bolungi...

Shiva: Bas kar tum dono!...

Dev and Krish looked at Shiva and was about to say something, but gets interrupted by Suman...

Suman: Dev wali Dulhan ka ghar wale aayi gayi hai, abh Shiva wali Dulhan ka intezaar hai...Motiben agar tujhe eitraaz na ho toh hum todhi dher aur wait kar skate hai?...woh log aa rahe honge...

Motiben smiling: Bhilkul, kyun nahi...

Before she could complete they hear...a voice...

"Suman Kaki!"

All turns to see the owner of the voice and gets shocked...as there was standing Anita with tears filled eyes...and breathing heavily as she come running all the way...She comes and falls in front of Suman....

Anita: Suman Kaki....Ra...Raavi ko bachalo... please...woh, Fui....Fui Raavi ko kamre mein band kar diya hai....

Shiva's heart skipped a bit hearing Raavi's name... and his hand formed into fist ...while everyone gasped in shock...

Shiva: MAAMI...I won't leave her...

With this Shiva rushes out followed by Krish and Dev....

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"Aye Maami bahar nikal!...Raavi!...Raavi!...

Shiva enters Maami's house furious....while Maami comes out of the room...

Maami: Awaz niche kar ghadere!...

Shiva: Bol...Kahan hai Raavi?...Agar tune usse kuch kiya toh....

Maami: Toh?...Kiya karega?...

Shiva: Jaan se mar dunga!...Bol Raavi kahan hai?...

Maami: Jahan hona chahiye, wahan... waise bhi tum kaun hai, Raavi ki chinta karne wala?...

Suman enters the scene along with Krish and Dev...

Suman: Uski hone wali Pati!...

Maami looks up at Suman and smirks: Wah...Bade chalak hai aap log...Mere ghar na hone ki faida utha kar Raavi ki rishta iss Shiva ke sath fix karwa di aapne, wah Suman behen wah...aur to aur Meri khud ki pati aap logon ke sath shamil bhi ho gaya hai...

Suman angrily: Haan karwa diye maine Shiva aur Raavi ki shaadi fix!...aur mein usse iss nark se leke jaun ga...samjhi tum...Bechari bachi ki zindagi barbaad kar di tumne, bachpan se usse ek naukar samaj ke ghar ki sab kam karwa di hai, usse thik se padhne nahi diya, uski Maa Papa ki na hone ka bada faida uthaya...bechari ladki ko chain se jeena nahi diya, ki bechari suicide karne wala tha... Woh achha hua ki Shiva vaqt pe aa kar bacha liya hai....Nahi toh...

Maami: Haan aap bhilkul thik kaha, meine Raavi ki zindagi nark bana di, maine usse naukar bana di, usse chain se jeena nahi diya...toh?...aap kiya karogi?...marengi mujhe?...Aap ko pata hai, maine aisa kyun kiya?...pata hai?...Kyun ki uski maa ne mujh se meri bachhi chin li, uski maa ke vajah se mein maa nahi ban payi...(tears rolling down her eyes)...

Suman: Arey kagdi!...woh sab ek accident tha, Sarla ne jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya, she didn't pushed you from strays...it was you, who walked around carelessly...Aur woh toh tujhe warning bhi ki thi naa....Aur kiya khud ki galti ki saza bechari bachhi ko degi kiya?...uski kiya galti hai?... Bakwas band kar apni...(turns to Shiva) ...Shiva jao, jaa ke Raavi ko dundh ke laa...

Shiva nods and immediately rushes to her room...after sometime he reaches her room and sees it's locked, he hears her sobbing...so starts banging on the door to confirm that She's okay....

Shiva: Raavi!... Raavi!... Mein yaha hoon...you don't worry everything is ok, mein aagaya hoon...bas ek minute rukh...mein...

Very next moment he pushes the door with his full strength multiple times and finally it breaks and he rushes inside...

Here Raavi is sitting hugging her knees and sobbing...She lifts her face and finally she sees Shiva coming to her slowly and sits on his knees...

Never...never...never in his wildest dreams he thought that he will meet her like this...She looked so scared...Is she really Raavi?...he thought for a moment...

Pale face, with traces of tears on her sheeks, red marks on her shoulder, hands, marks of fingers on her face clearly mentioned that Maami has beaten up her so badly...He keep on looking at her unmoved till he didn't sense a pair of hands around him and a body pressed against his shest hugging him really tightly...

Slowly Shiva lifted his hands and hugged her back and caressed her head assuring that he is here, with her, to protect her as always he did before...but this time something was different...and that is... before he protected her as her bhaiya, but now he's doing it as her would be husband, but he didn't realized yet, that their relationship is changing... Maybe he never meant to be her bhaiya as he thought... but her life partner...her husband...

Shiva: Raavi...tum thik ho na?...Gabrao matt mein yaha hoon, abh woh maami kuch nahi karegi tujhe...Raavi...Raavi...

He calls out without looking at her...after not getting any response he lifts her face and saw that she fall uncougnious... so he lifted her up and went out of the room...

Here Suman and Krish and Dev looks on at Shivi and gets shocked seeing Raavi's condition...while Maami stood without no explanation...

Suman: Raavi meri bachi...Kiya haal bana di hai,masum bachhi ki...(glaring at Maami angrily)... Isse liye tu kabhi maa nahi ban payi Prafulla...Kyun ki tu issi layak nahi hai...agar hoti toh...khair chhad do...tujhe kuch samjana bhi bekaar hai...(turning to Shiva): Shiva jaldi ghar chalte hai...

Everyone was about to leave but stopped as Maami come in front of them...

Maami: Suman behen, aap Raavi ko nahi le jaa sakte hai...koi haq nahi banta...

Shiva gives dead glares at Maami on which she looked scared for a moment but she brushes it out...

Suman: Achha aisa kyun?...Why can't I took her with me?...

Maami: Kyun ki Raavi ki custody mujhe diya gaya hai, qanooni dhor par woh meri zimmedari hai...Woh meri parvarish mein hai...

Shiva: Ohh really Maami?...aap ki zimmedari?...aap pehle zimmedari ka matlab jaan lo...aur phir bolo...badi aayi zimmedari nibhane wali...

Maami; Jo bhi hai, you can't take Raavi from me...did you get that?...

Shiva: Woh meri hone wali patni hai, mein uss haq se leke jaun ga Raavi ko, tujhe jo karna hai kar....

Suman, Krish, Dev nods their heads in agreement and looked up at Maami angrily....

Maami: Par hone wali hai hai, lekin hua nahi naa?... waise bhi engagement tak nahi hui hai tum dono ki, toh kaise?...

Shiva placed Raavi on the sofa and come in front of Maami looking dangerously...while Maami blinked at him scared... while everyone looked at Shiva confused as what he is going to do...

Shiva smirks: Waise baat toh aap bhilkul thik kaha...Qanooni dhor par woh Aapki zimmedari hai, aur meri toh koi haq nahi banta hai na maami?...

Only Krish noticed how Shiva took knife from the table after laying Raavi on the sofa while others were not aware of this...

Maami stammering: Ha..Haan...koi haq nahi banta...

Suddenly Shiva puts the knife on her neck while Maami gulped in fear...

Maami: Aye Shiva... kiya kar raha hai...hatao issey...

Shiva: Arey Maami, chill karo...mein aapko nahi marne wala, aapki death itni asani se nahi hogi...

Shiva wents back near Raavi and sits and looked up at her for a moment before asking quick sorry... while everyone looked at Shiva confused... wondering what he is up to now... Shiva's gaze shifted to Maami and within no time he cuts his finger it's starts to beed and he filled her forehead with it making everyone gasp in shock....exept Krish as he already predicted what his brother up to... and smiled widely...

Krish clapping: Wah, mere bhai...manna padega aapko...ekdum filmy heroes ki tarah shaadi ki hai Raavi bhabi se...

Shiva shook his head lightly at Krish before lifting up Raavi and heading to the door along with Suman and Dev...

Before leaving Shiva turns to Maami who stood there like a stone, registering what just happened....

Shiva: Aye Maami, abh aap azaad ho Raavi ki zimmedari se, abh uski Pati hai Shiva Pandya who will protect her and take care of her...Abh aapki koi haq nahi banti mujhe apni patni ko le jaane se... So bye Maami...aur haan, Shaadi mein aayega zaroor...

With this he went out of Maami's house along with Suman, Krish and Dev... who give Maami a proud look...

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Originally posted by: kayinat

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Really great update.

Mami is cruel to raavi but love Shiva.

Mami is cruel

But Shiva ne kyaast tabahi macha rakhi hain 😍