RaghVi FS - Your eyes don't lie (Part 2 updated on page 109) - Page 81

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please read, if you have some time❤💙

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Posted: 4 years ago

Woahhhh.

You scared me with the room mess for a bit.

I wonder who Aniket is 🤨.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Woahhhh.

You scared me with the room mess for a bit.

I wonder who Aniket is 🤨.

Thanks a ton for your feedback!❤️

Why?🤔

Aniket is the kabab mein haddi inspired from ghkkpm lmao😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks a ton for your feedback!❤️

Why?🤔

Aniket is the kabab mein haddi inspired from ghkkpm lmao😂😂

Are i forgot what happened in the first part toh i got scared for a second and then i remembered.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Are i forgot what happened in the first part toh i got scared for a second and then i remembered.

Can't blame you though. The difference between the first and second part is almost 100 pages 🤣🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Please read, if you have some time❤💙

good one. Agla part jara jldi daalna varna dusra thread hi na banana pd jaae🤭
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavita99

good one. Agla part jara jldi daalna varna dusra thread hi na banana pd jaae🤭

Thanks!❤️

Lmao sure, if time permits. If not, tab agla thread banne se koi nahi rok sakta😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

So finally... Great one posted.


Chapter was nice but kinda not my style of read. It felt it was too mild. Maybe because we didn't get any further inputs on our patient. So still sticking with patient is RR. But Re-read d first two and I m sure dere is secret on both ends. RR is patient but P is also involved in some OTT business. And the new character will be related to it.

Regarding writing, I felt u hv changed ur style a bit. It came up as a different read. Different in a good way. Even the transitions were swift and flow also seemed well put together. Really well penned.


It was good. Will see wt more unfolds when d chapter drops next year. Chao.

Edited by lateuser1234 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Roses are red,

Giraffes don't sit,

Here's it guys,

Before 12:00 AM, I did it!😎

Violets are blue.

Honey is for bear.

Read this... it was nice,

Now will see u when chapter 3 drops next year.

Edited by lateuser1234 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Roses are red,

Giraffes don't sit,

Here's it guys,

Before 12:00 AM, I did it!😎

Someone have updated the next chapter after 90 pages 🥳🥳.


This one was was a good read. And as usual I am totally clueless, so no theories from my side.

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