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This part is long so I have divided it into three parts- A,B,C

Part - 2(A)

In the hospital

As Savitri gains consciousness, Ishqi and Maasi goes to meet her.

Savitri recognises Ishqi from the day of mental asylum and starts to shout.

Savitri- Tu ne kaha tha na mujhe apne bacho se milwagi , wada kiya tha na tune?

Ishqi- Kya maine? Kab?

Suddenly she remembers Ishqi in the resort and realised that Ishqi knows Daadi too and panics.

Savitri(in a shaky and panicked voice)- Nahi nahi tujhe usne bheja hai na? Phir se kidnap karwane? Mujhe phir se band kar degi na?

Ishqi- Nahi auntyki aap bilkhul safe hai. Mai koi kidnapping-widnapping nahi karwa rahi hu. Wo Kidnappers na accident mai upar pohoch gaye, rab ne use saja de d hai. Wo aap k gaari na mujhe v urane wali thi par mai baach gayi. Aur aap v .

Savitri- Tu mujhe phir se kidnap toh nahi karwayegi naa?

Ishqi- Nahi baba auntyji. Wese aapko kahi pehle dekha hai kya? Ya phir hum pisle janam k koi rishtedaar-wistedaar toh nahi hai?

Ishqi remembers her 1st meet with Savitri.

Ishqi - Haan, aapko toh wo Pagalkhane mai mile the. Aap apne baccho ko dhund rahe the ? Wo mil gaye?

Savitri- Wo dono mujhse nafrat karte hai. Meri shakal v dekhna pasand nahi karenge. Mai kya karu .

And she starts to cry

Ishqi- Ese kese nafrat karenge aapko? Ye koi baat hui ? Shakal nahi dekhegi apnihi maa ki? Aap sirf uska naam batayiye. Mai v dekhti hu kaise nahi apnate aapko.

Savitri- Nahi nahi, usme undono ki koi galti nahi hai. Un dono ko pata hi nahi hai ki mere saath kya ho rahe hai. Mere bare mai pata nahi kya kya jhooth batakar unke man mai nafrat paida kiya gaya hai.

Ishqi- Kisne ki hai yeh sab?

Savitri- Baccho k daadi, meri saas nai. Usi ne mujhe kidnap karwayi thi.

Ishqi- Kaha rehte hai aapke bacche?

Savitri- Delhi mai

Ishqi- Toh phir thik hai. Mai v wahi rehti hu. Aap mere saath hi chalenge Delhi taak aur phir jab tak thik ho kar vaaga dori karne layak nahi banenge, aap mere saath hi rahenge 2-3 mahine.

Savitri (in a shaky voice)- Nahi wo Delhi mai phir se pakar legi mujhe. Nahi nahi. Aur mai kese tumhare saath jaa sakti hun?

Ishqi- Kyun nahi? Aur sirf thik hone tak toh aapko rehna hi parega. Sirf hair jaisa patla fracture hua hai aapka. Zoom krke dekhna parega itni choti fracture hai.

Savitri-Nahi nahi nahi.

Savitri starts to get a Panic attack.

Ishqi- Doctor doctor. Dekhiye auntyji ko kya hua hai achanak.

The doctor comes and instructs the nurse to do the necessary steps and an injection to make her drowsy.

Doctor- Unke mental condition bilkul naajuk hai. She has suffered from something very traumatic . Ishliye yeh halat hai.

Ishqi-Tromtic kya hota hai .

Doctor - Trom nahi trauma. Yani bara jhatka. Kuch bohot bura hua hai uske saath.

Ishqi- Jhatka toh lagi hai. Warna pagal khane mai kyun hoti? Aur apne bacchon se bicharne ka dukh v hai. Pata karna parega taaki mai unki madad kar sakun.

As she was lost into her thoughts, Maasi dragged her out and asked.

Maasi- Ese kese kisiko v apne saath bula li tune Ishqi?Abhi hamare khud ka hi thikana nahi hai aur to unhe v kyun?

Ishqi- Maasi maine uss aunty ko kuch din pehle waada kiya tha ki mai unki madad karungi. Aur wese v kaha puri umar rahegi hamare ghar? 3-4 mahine ki hi baat hai . Ek baar wo thik ho jaye phir mai unhe apne baacho se milwa dena hai bas.

Maasi- Thik hai Ishqi lekin uske baad usse jyada nahi thik hai?

Ishqi - Haan Maasi. Wese aapne hi toh sikhayi hai sab ko madad karna. Old age home kholne ka sapna hai mera takki zaroot mand logo k madad kar saku. Ab jab samne se mouka chalke aa rahe hai toh kyun jaane du haath se?

In the Malhotra house

Everyone was gathered in the living room of Malhotra Mansion.

Sarla-Aur kitni time legi ye larki? 20 minute se tyyar ho rahi hai. Sonu ko hi bahar aana hai, koi pari bankar nahi ana usse.Phata phat Bidaayi ho jaye phir mujhe apni beauty sleep ko v catch up karni hai. Warna meri glow chali gayi toh?

Kartik-Aap sinta mat kijiye Sarla aunty, Maa gaye hai madad k liye. Aur aapke nikhar to ekdom stars jaisa hai, kahan chalkar jayegi batayiye?

Sarla-Kya sach mai?. Lekin wo Sonu?Abhi v khud ready hona nahi aata? Mai toh keh deti huun baad mai kahi jaane k liye ready hona ho toh mere paas naa aaye.

Raj-Mom! Sonu khud ready ho sakti hai, wo ab dulhan hai toh madad legi hi naa.

Sarla- huh šŸ˜

Bhola- Yeh lijiye Aunty lassi pijiye. Dimag thanda hone se glow v aa jata hai.

Daadi-Chup Bhola! Sab ko serve kar.

Meanwhile Ahaan gets a call from Rohan. Rohan, Mayank and Ahaan were childhood Chuddy-buddies. Rohan went to US due to work for 5 months. Mayank's marriage was initally planned a year later, but due to Shekhar's (Mayank's dad) health condition, the marriage was preponed (as shown in one of the earlier episodes) and hence could not attend the wedding. (Rohan has one more role later)

Phone conversation-

Rohan- Hey Ahaan bro! Teri behan ki shaadi ho gayi?

Ahaan- Yes, abhi thore time pehle resort se waapas pohoch gaye. Bidaayi hone wali hai uski. Meri behan jaa rahi hai yaar Rohan.

Rohan- Areh toh tu mil lena usse. Same city mai hi toh rahegi. Phir kaheka tension bro? Aur haa, wo kesi hai?

Ahaan-Uss larki ka naam mat le Rohan. Usne jo kiya hai after that I hate her.

Rohan- Kya kar dia Rhea ne ab?

Ahaan- What? Kaun Rhea? Areh haan tu Rhea ki baat kar raha tha? Wo yahi Sonu ki bidaayi tak hai phir chali jayegi.

Rohan- Obviously bro. tere gf ki baat puch raha hu. Tu kiski baat kar raha tha?

Ahaan- Uss larki, Mayank k fiance ki.

Ahaan then narrates what happened in Mayank's marriage.

Rohan- What? maine toh usse call nahi kiya tha kahi wo apne wife k saath busy naa ho isliye.

Daadi- Ahaan puttar! Itthe aa, Sonu ready ho gayi.

Ahaan-Haan Daadi, aata hu. Rohan sun Mayank aur Suman aunty v Shekhar uncle k treatment k liye US jaa rahe hai. Wo US k kaha jaa rahe hai pata kar aur usse thori madad v kar dena. I will talk to you later.

Rohan- Bye bro.


Rest is continued in next post.

Edited by Physics_girl - 4 years ago
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(Continued from the previous post)

PART - 2(B)


In the hospital


Few hours later Savitri wakes up and the doctor discharges her. He explains Ishqi about her medicines, how to take care of her knee and also when and how to wear or open the knee splint. From Savitri, Ishqi also realizes that, there was one more kidnapper who must have escaped.

Ishqi- Doctor Suniye, ek aur kidnapper tha jo bhag gaya kamina. Toh wo aadmi ya phir jisne kidnap karwaya tha wo log Savitri aunty k bare mai punch sakte hai, isliye aap usse dead declare kar dijiyega aur body lene hospital bula lijiyega. Agar sach mai koi jaan- pehchan wale honge toh aa jayenge, unn kutto mai se koi hai toh nahi ayenga.

Doctor- Thik hai.

Ishqi, Maasi and Savitri books a taxi. Maasi takes the front seat while at the backseat, Savitri rests her injured leg on Ishqi's lap. They collect their luggage from the resort and drops at the railway station. The taxi driver being a kind man also helps them with the tickets and supports injured Savitri till the train, as Ishqi's one hand was injured while she and Maasi also had to carry their bags. They bought an extra ticket so that Savitri can freely extend her injured leg on the whole seat. The train exits the station.

Ishqi- Haye Rabba! Luggage k chakkar mai phir se aaloo puri aur aam ka acchar lena vul gayi.

Maasi- Woh sab chor aur acchi tarah bata ki kya hua tha. Kyun tune shaadi tori?

Ishqi narrates everything to Maasi and Savitri except she kept Sonu's identity a secret. However, Savitri understands that the girl Ishqi was talking about is Sonu, as she already saw her in the hotel room that night.

Maasi-Mayank essa niklega mujhe nahi pata thi. Maaf karde mujhe maine tere shaadi itni ghatiya aadmi se karani wali thi.

Ishqi - Issme aapki koi galti nahi thi, khud uske bestfriend AVM ko hi nahi pata aapko kaise pata chalega Maasi.

Maasi- Phir v Ishqi. Aur kounsi larki? Tune sabko batayi kyun nahi? Ahaan ko bata dena chahiye tha jab usne police bulaya tha.

Ishqi- Maasi nahi bata sakti, wo larki dar rahi thi, khudkhusi karne wali thi. Aur wo kharus AVM v kaunsa apne sarwagun sampanna dost k khilaf meri baat par yakeen karte. Wo mujhe aur uss larki ko hi doshi thehrate ,naam teen banda mean. Uske shakal nahi dekhni mujhe, huh. ( but her heart says otherwise). Wese auntyji aap apni baat batayiye.

Savitri- Ishqi beta, please uss larki k bare mai kisiko mat batana ha, kisiko maat batana, kisiko nahi, kisiko nahi.

(in her mind)-Tune meri beti Sonu k liye itna kuch kiya, hamesha khush reh. Lekin tu mere bete Ahaan ko itni napasand karti hai, mai tujhe meri baat bataungi bar bacchon k naam nahi. Delhi jaa kar Suraj bhaisahab ko contact karungi phir dekhlungi.

Ishqi- Thik hai aunty nahi bataungi


Chaai chaai chaai...

Badaam, badaam, badaam....

Nariyal Paani pi lijiye....

Pakore, Pakore, garam garam pakore.......

Ishqi- Maasi mujhe PAKORE aur CHAAI chahiye!


In the Malhotra Mansion

Sonu comes out of her room decked up. One by one she hugs all her family members with whom she spent all her life and they will no longer be in front of her eyes everyday just like always. Almost everyone had tears.

Sarla-Ab itna kya rona. Yaha toh teri maa v nahi hai. Ab Sasural jaake tujhe ek nayi maa milne wali hai. Areh mujheeeii. Jaldi drama khatam kar aur chal, mujhe rest karni hai.

Ginny- Haa mujhe v

Raj- MOM!(and gestures her to be quiet)

Sonu takes rice grains and throws them backwards and finally leaves her house. Then everyone sits for an early dinner as everyone was tired. Everyone was unusually quiet,sad that their loving daughter left. No one could eat properly.


(Remember, Savitri was kidnapped during Sonu's bidaayi in the show but here Daadi steathily kidnaps her when everyone was busy with the police during Ishqi's arrest and as Sonu's bidaayi did not happen there in the resort)


After dinner Ahaan and Kartik went to their adda and sat quietly. They were badly missing their dear sister and hence could not find any words to speak, while the elders returned to their room to sleep. Daadi was sleeping when she heard footsteps approaching her. She looked around and was suddenly shocked to find Savitri dangerously walking towards her.

Daadi(scared)- Tu..tu..tu toh mar gayi thi na? Phir kaha se prakat ho gayi?

Savitri(smirking)- Haan Mummyji, mai mar gayi. Ab bhoot banke aapse badla lungi.

Daadi(panicking)- Dur..dur..dur hat, paas mat aa, chali jaa yaha se, warna mai chillaungi.

Savitri(dangerously)- Jitna chillana hai chilla. Tune mere bacche chine mujhse, tujhe toh mai nahi chorungi.

Saying this Savitri grabs Daadi's ear tightly and twists it causing her pain.

Daadi- aaaah... Chor mujhe, aaaa....aaahh.

Daadi jerks up sitting realizing it was her nightmare, but her ear was actually paining badly and also she can hear 'khar khar' sound inside. Daadi gets scared that Savitri's bhoot did something to her ear and starts scratching it. Then a red colour ant comes out of her ear in all its glory, whose bite was causing her pain. Daadi takes the ant in her finger tips and makes its chutney out of anger.


Continued from the next post

Edited by Physics_girl - 4 years ago
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(Continued from the previous post)

PART - 2(C)


In the train

Ishqi- Auntyji aap dhire dhire karke aapke ateet k baare mai mujhe achhi tarah bata dijiye agar aap chaho to, taaki mai aapki madad kar saku. Subah train Delhi pohochne se pehle bohot time hai aapke paas.

Maasi- Haan behenji aaram se bata sakte hai.

Savitri- Mere husband VM, purra identity ab mai nahi bataungi, pehle accha khasa insaan hi tha. Usne ek construction business k start up shuru kiya tha. Unke do chote bhai ye the. Ek k shaadi ho chuka tha aur dusra college k hostel mai rehkar parhai kar raha tha. Phir hamara ek larka aur phir ek larki k janam huwe. Dewar ko v ek larka hua. Tab tak hum sab khush the. Bare dewar unko business mai madad v karte the.

Ishqi- Agar sab thik hi tha toh siyappa kaise shuru hua?

Savitri- Lekin pata nahi kaise mere husband ko sharab ki lat lag gayi. Unki company jo itni acchi chal rahi thi, acchanak losses start ho gayi. Nashe mai dhudh rehte rehte unke kaam se man uth gaya tha. Bare dewar ne v MBA karnka faisla liya aur apne family k saath do saal k liye Mumbai shift ho gaye the. Toh maine apni pati k madad krne k liye phir se usi company mai job join kar liya jaha shaadi se pehle ki thi. Wo company mere husband k dost ka tha. Shuru shuru mai usne hi mere pati ko projects de kar start up k progress mai madad krte the.

Ishqi- Aap shaadi se pehle job karte the toh phir kyun chori?

Savitri- Chorna para. Roj Roj saas k taane sun sun k thak gayi thi. Ghar k kaamon k saath kaam balance karna, har choti moti chizon mai Mummyji ka mere gaaltiyaan nikalne k bahane dhundna, mujhe asanskari keh k kosna. Thak kar chor d maine.Lekin isbar zaroorat thi isliye join kiya tha.

Maasi-Aapke phir job karne se v thik nahi hua?

Savitri- Nahi, tabhi toh asli bura waqt shuru hua. Ghar aur job dono sambhalne mai bohot difficult ho gaye the, isliye unke dost ne ghar lautte waqt mujhe roz drop krne laga taaki meri madad ho jaye. Toh Mummyji ne mere unko mere khilaf kaan bharna shuru kar diye. Dhire dhire unko v shak hone laga aur sharaab k nashe mai mujhe maar-pit v karna shuru kar diya. Company v dubne lagi. Mummyji ko sab pata tha phir v mera saath nahi dia usne, ulta jyada bharkate the unko taaki phirse mai job chor du. Meri saas ka manna tha ki aurotein job nahi kartein, sirf ghar chalatein. Aur to aur mard ko haq hai apni patni par haath uthana.

Ishqi- Kesi ghatiya soch hai unki. Kuch log maante hai ki mard chahe jo marji kar sakte hai aur hum auroton ka farz hai jhelna. Kyun? Unko pata hona chahiye ki wo galat hai. Hum jaise koi insaan nahi motor cycle ka shock absorber hai ki sab sehte rahe? Wese wo uncle ne aapki itni madad kyun ki?

Savitri- Wo tumhari tarah ek accha insaan tha aur ek guilt v the unke man mai. Reason phir kabhi bataungi. Tab v unhone meri madad ki toh shak aur barh gaya, aur saath hi attyachar barhte gaye. Jab mujhe aur saha nahi gaya , toh maine ek din mere bacchon ko lekar bhaag jaane ki koshish ki. Tabhi mere husband ko pata chal gaya tha aur gaari leke mere pichhe aane laga. Wo nashe mai tha toh unka accident ho gaya aur wo nahi bache. Mummyji ne maut ka zimma mere sar daal d.

Ishqi-Lekin isme aapki kya galti thi? Koi tuunn ho kar gaari chalayega toh accident toh hona hi tha.

Savitri- Haan, lekin wo baat Mummyji ko kaun samjhaye? Unko lagta hai ki unke bete ko maine unse chinliya. Isliye mai toh tab vaag nahi payi , phir Mummyji ne kidnap karke mujhe asylum mai daal d. Wah har roj mere khaane mai drugs milaya gaya tha jiske karan mujhe pagalpan k dohre parne lage. Mujhe pata thi par Bhukh mai khana para wahi khana. Tabse mai wahi band thi, baas lag vag 5-6 din pehle mai vaag gayi.

Ishqi- Kitne saal the aap waha?

Savitri-Mujhe toh waha waqt ka andaja v nahi tha, phir bahar aakar pata chala ki 20 saal bit gaye.

Ishqi- Haye Rabba! 20 saal? Kese patthar dil saas hai. Ekdam TV serial waali villain jesi. Ekbaar wo mili na, usse mai silbatte mai pis k chutney bana dena hai. This Ishqi is very very risky.

Next part- Suraj's entry

Ishqaan chotu meet.


I wanted to give equal time to Ahaan and Ishqi but this part of the story was such that it was not possible. Aur thora messy v , bohot saare pieces ko aapni jagah mai jo bithana tha. 😊





Edited by Physics_girl - 4 years ago
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Ishqi - Haan, aapko toh wo Pagalkhane mai mile the. Aap apne baccho ko dhund rahe the ? Wo mil gaye?

Sachi , no filter, hospital bol deti


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Savitri- Nahi nahi, usme undono ki koi galti nahi hai. Un dono ko pata hi nahi hai ki mere saath kya ho rahe hai. Mere bare mai pata nahi kya kya jhooth batakar unke man mai nafrat paida kiya gaya hai.


this bothers me in the show as well, she was in the mental assylum for so long but she knows that Ahaan and Rhea is under dadi’s influence and is well informed of the plan


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Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Savitri- Nahi nahi, usme undono ki koi galti nahi hai. Un dono ko pata hi nahi hai ki mere saath kya ho rahe hai. Mere bare mai pata nahi kya kya jhooth batakar unke man mai nafrat paida kiya gaya hai.


this bothers me in the show as well, she was in the mental assylum for so long but she knows that Ahaan and Rhea is under dadi’s influence and is well informed of the plan


Wo resort mai Savitri ko kuch kuch baate sun kar pata chala par purra nahi chala.

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Rest I will read tomorrow

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Thank you sooo much di for the update. I was waiting for the whole week🤭


Ahaan's Kaun Rhea? was very funny. Thank God mumma was sleeping.šŸ˜†


Daadi k kaan me chinti🤣🤣one episode's name was chinti k Parr and now it suits perfectly.


Sarla's expressions šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Excited for the role of Rohan😃😃

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Thank you sooo much di for the update. I was waiting for the whole week🤭


Ahaan's Kaun Rhea? was very funny. Thank God mumma was sleeping.šŸ˜†


Daadi k kaan me chinti🤣🤣one episode's name was chinti k Parr and now it suits perfectly.


Sarla's expressions šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Excited for the role of Rohan😃😃

Thank you. ā¤ļø

I hope this update was worth the wait. Because this one was a bit serious one.

Wo kaan mai cheeti mere saath v hua tha.šŸ˜‚. Baas nightmare nahi dekha tha toh bhoot nahi samjha mainešŸ˜‚. Aur chutney v nahi banayi🐵

Edited by Physics_girl - 4 years ago
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Loved it...I really like this story lineā¤ļø Cant wait for the next part😊

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