The unsolved topic- kachori *part-3*updated..*Completed*

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Hey you guys ...hope you all are doing well😇

I m back with my another imaginery thoughts 😅😂 Basically this is a throwback small shot which i personally wanted from the makers to elaborate...anyways

This will be a TS(2-3 parts)



Its 10:00am and still he hadn't have his breakfast as his dhara bhabhi don't served it to him today because the house is divided and with that work and responsibilities is also divided.

So raavi and shiva have each other responsibilities, they know it very well that they both care and have some affection but still manage to show more of rude side rather than lovely.

Raavi is not in a mood to make breakfast so she give him some money for food but stud shiva refuses and warned her that he will not change at all.

He left the haveli in rage and headed towards the restaurant and ordered breakfast special menu but today destiny has something more interesting...

Unfortunately he is too late for breakfast today so he couldn't get the order.

He decided to eat something from the stall.

He went in the market and started looking at the stalls, there were many but his eyes stopped on kachori stall.

"Raavi ko kachori kitni pasand h na" he blabbered with smile.

And suddenly noticed what he said few seconds ago. He throw the thought and went towards the stall.

"Bhaiya ek plate laga dena"

He agreed and make his plate first as he sense the hunger on shiva's face.

He give the plate to him..!!

Shiva is filled with joy and is all set to take his first bite, he brings his hand near the mouth and is about to eat suddenly something strike in his mind. He take a deep breath..

He wanted to finish it as fast as bullet but he couldn't something is there which makes him restless again and again

But what??

"Ra...Raavi, us mami ki behen ki beti ka khayal kyu aa raha h"

He shook off his head

"Shiva kachori par focus kar kabse toh bhuk se mara ja raha tha or ab jb yh samne h toh tujse khya nhi ja raha h"

He again try hard unfortunately failed...but this time he know the reason..

"Us chipkali ne khaya hoga kuch?"

His heart beamed fast once.

"Aals toh balti bharke bhara h us ldki mei, pata nhi khud k liye bhi kch bnaya hoga ya nahi??"

Ughh...he whisper in frustration

This chipkali always mess up things and make difficult for him.

He look up in the sky,close his eyes, breath deeply and smiles.

"Bhaiya ek kam karo 2plate pack krdo"

Soon he reach the haveli and found nobody roaming around the kitchen and corridor.

He found it as golden opportunity to place the kachori for his chipkali.

He sneak into the kitchen check all around so that nobody could watch him like this.

He struggle to find the utensils but soon succeed in it.

He took the plate serve the kachori and curd in a bowl.

He rushed out from the kitchen, and started looking at the perfect spot for placing the plate and finally he placed the plate on table with a note.

He check the plate twice thrice to satisfy himself that yes everything is okay..!

He hide behind the pillars to witness the whole scene from his eyes.

His happiness has no limit today..!!


Krish know the entire scene from the starting, he go and stand behind the shiva

"Kisi ka intezaar kar raha h"

"Haan"

"Kiska?"

"Voh chip..."

He turned and stunned to see krish there..

"Kahi is gadhede ne sb dekh toh nahi liya" shiva by himself

"Tu..tu yaha kya kar raha h 24gnte chaukidari krta rhta h sbki"

"Shiva, mera chod tu bta tu yaha kya..kr..rha..h?"

Krish said in mischievous tone

"Mei kya bs khada hu, ab mera dimag mt kharab kar or bhaag yaha se vrna dunga ek"

"Shiva rhne de jhoot tuje bolna aata nhi ...thk h chala jaunga pr sun acha hua tu na yh kachori lekr aa gya raavi..

"Aee bhabhi bol"

Ohooo...*in teasing manner*

Shiva give him a death glare look

"Hn thk h na raavi bhabhi unhone kuch khaya nahi aaj unhe bhuk toh lagi hi hogi pr batware ki wjh se kch bola nahi tu khila dena unhe thk h m jata hu"

Shiva (thinks about the aftermath of batwara) and stop krish

"Sun agr yh bt kisiko pta chali na toh!!"

"Haan haan nahi btauga khush tu dekh bhabhi aa gyi"

Shiva glare at him and he rush away.

His heartbeat fasten up as he see her walking in the corridor, just as she about to enter in kitchen, her eyes fall on the plate.

She slightly moves there.

"Yeh kachori?? Yha kisne rakkhi??"

She moves his head and eyes in search of the person who place it there!!

She moves in the corridor from starting to end and in kitchen too but find no one!!

She found herself in trouble.

"Yeh kachori meri favorite h par agr yh rishita ya krish ki hui toh hungama hojayega"

She thinks and found the note on table under the corner of plate.

She take it out, open and read and smiles

"Ghur kya rahi h ab

Tere liye hi hai khale"






I really hope you guys like it ...

Love

S_Verma ❤




Part2- page 2


Part3- page 4

Edited by S_Verma - 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So cute, The Note was the Best❤️😆

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Awh this was super cute ❤️❤️

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Here she is!!My partner in crime for ffs & writeups!!!Sakku take my hearttt❤️

Jaldi jaldi aage likh or else you know the ,ukka and thappaddddddddddd🤣❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was super cuteee ❤️

Even i wanted to see something on it ... thanks for writing this 🤗

Continue soon

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It was very cute and sweet update 😍

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Awwww.... Shiva is so cute and caring🤗❤️

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Awsome ❤❤❤❤

Loved it 😅

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Loved it. ❤️


The note he left for Raavi was cute.

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So sweet 😍😍 loved it ❤️

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