RaghVi FF : I WARS I *Update Chapter 4 - Page 30* - Page 24

Okhay..😲

The depth of emotions depicted in just these four chapters is commendable.

I have no words for the last sentence. Just one question - was the ending already planned?

Wow..👏was not expecting this. You must have been laughing when I said another soul for your last chapter..btw, RR ko maarna zaroori tha?😭

Originally posted by: Trista101

Okhay..😲

The depth of emotions depicted in just these four chapters is commendable.

I have no words for the last sentence. Just one question - was the ending already planned?

Thnx a lot.

Yes ending was planned and even that last sentence. But their r few modifications.

Originally posted by: MinervaMcG

Wow..👏was not expecting this. You must have been laughing when I said another soul for your last chapter..btw, RR ko maarna zaroori tha?😭

Thnx.

Not really. I sincerely had a thought of writing something supernatural in future after reading that. And yes RR ko maarna mere liye zaroori tha.

Wow 👏....I hv goosebump...

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx.

Not really. I sincerely had a thought of writing something supernatural in future after reading that. And yes RR ko maarna mere liye zaroori tha.

Thats nice.. thanks. wud love to read that. Why I had that thought of another soul was basically because of their thought processes that you had described..it looked like a discussion between two conscious minds.

Had read a futuristic story where the body is controlled by another soul and the persons soul is also trapped in the body and they talked to each other. The body is the host of two souls. Not like soul possessing body supernatural type. Third chapter reminded me of that story.

Would love to read what twist you will bring with supernatural. Looking forward.

You've left me wanting for more 🥺

I went from being scared for Pallavi to crying for Raghav and the twist at the end, oh my god!!!

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

Wow 👏....I hv goosebump...

Thnx... try yoga. It will help in calming down.

Originally posted by: MinervaMcG

Thats nice.. thanks. wud love to read that. Why I had that thought of another soul was basically because of their thought processes that you had described..it looked like a discussion between two conscious minds.

Had read a futuristic story where the body is controlled by another soul and the persons soul is also trapped in the body and they talked to each other. The body is the host of two souls. Not like soul possessing body supernatural type. Third chapter reminded me of that story.

Would love to read what twist you will bring with supernatural. Looking forward.

Seems interesting read. Will definitely try if something interesting comes up with that concept. I usually hate writing sci-fi nd supernatural. Would still try if possible.

And yes if I write it will be having some twist for sure. Thnx for the idea.

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

You've left me wanting for more 🥺

I went from being scared for Pallavi to crying for Raghav and the twist at the end, oh my god!!!

Thnx.

More of the story or more because how story ended? Anyhow that twist was visible from Very beginning of the FF. Y were u shocked den?