RaghVi FF : I WARS I *Update Chapter 4 - Page 30* - Page 26

No apology required. We all r busy in life. So very much understandable.

There r somethings that has to be maintained to keep core intact. End of statement.

Everything was connected from start and visible. Check the name of FF itself.

Yes I was frustrated with show so ended it. As lost passion for writing for these characters. It was atleast 10-12 chapters.

I had to use that analogy but have shown P a bit taken down because of reasons not explored so cant use it as such.

He is Schrodinger's cat for everyone individually.

Stoic wasn't always the case. It was on places required. A deeper insight of overall story is well in open much before last chapters if u read expressions.

He knew her. And what she was sent for. But as the lines between act and reality blurs, she wasn't able to acknowledge it straightaway but he say those lines blurring. So that fire flickers. She losing control or deviating.

I think there wasn't enough chapters to make it proper theorizing fest. Yes but enough was hidden in plain sight.

Thanks a lot for ur views.

Yes, can see that it all was connected since 1st chapter.

And yes, the thoughts and expressions didnt align, showing the blurring of lines of act and reality. I did see it but wasnt sure of the ‘why’; can see that now more clearly.

Title - yes, it was out in the open. But, its a case of over-analysing than just taking the literal meaning of it.

Schrodinger’s cat. Have to agree. The what-ifs make an interesting discussion. Of what-if there was a last look before the curtains fell. Would it be duty or love that wudve won, if she had received the call at that instant? She got it easy! RR made it easy. I am talking of P/ S as a character in this story.

thinking back, i wasnt reading it as an AU. I was reading it more as a clash of act and reality; brushing aside the mission-mode the chapters gave. Thats my flaw!

See I told u so.

If u hv got the title then wouldn't all be clear?

See title again. I guess u missed it. Its not WARS... its I WARS I.

Ofcourse. Actual story was slightly different.

I wanted to write something related to defence.

The title. 🙇🏻‍♀️ I have certainly missed it. You are right. Just read it as WARS.

Missed the uppercase letters too.

Missed the I both the ends. I thought it as separators. Not I. 🤔 Anagram it is!

The confidence of the writer is in throwing open everything and still holding the mystery. You ace it. 👍🏼

Do you watch all Indian language movies?

This is Y I kept on saying Everything is dere. No one believes me. Very bad reputation.

Thnx. Reason Y I dont write Science fiction and supernatural. It seems like cheating with mystery genre.

I can't. Only english and hindi. Dubbed I cn see. As I hate reading sub and watching.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

This is Y I kept on saying Everything is dere. No one believes me. Very bad reputation.

Thnx. Reason Y I dont write Science fiction and supernatural. It seems like cheating with mystery genre.

I can't. Only english and hindi. Dubbed I cn see. As I hate reading sub and watching.

A well written mystery indeed has a charm. And a re-read, re-watch value.

'Main Hoon Dandadhikari'. If and ever you watch this (no pressure!), I had a connection, sort-of dejavu with your this story. Thats the mention I wanted to make.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

A well written mystery indeed has a charm. And a re-read, re-watch value.

'Main Hoon Dandadhikari'. If and ever you watch this (no pressure!), I had a connection, sort-of dejavu with your this story. Thats the mention I wanted to make.

Agreed.

I read the story but didn't got the connection. Will watch it once have sometime.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Agreed.

I read the story but didn't got the connection. Will watch it once have sometime.

ok. Not the core of the story. Rather, the tools you have used!

Originally posted by: Prriyam

ok. Not the core of the story. Rather, the tools you have used!

Ok. Didnt get from the story read. Will judge after watching movie.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Ok. Didnt get from the story read. Will judge after watching movie.

now I have mixed feelings of having asked you to watch it. A movie or a book, hardly invokes the same strand or thought process. It looked huge to me; may not actually be. 🙈

u can decide not to watch. In which case, i will tell you the reference.