Teri Meri Kahani : My Short Drabble on Rudi

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I received special recognition for my entry to the contest Keep TheSpotlight Glowing.

Below was the poem written by me for "Nanhi Bondita" and " Pati Babu- Aniruddh", I hope you will like it.

नन्ही सी थी एक राजकुमारी, पर थी वो बड़ीसयानी

ईश्वर का अनोखा सृजन, चलो सुनाये उसकीकहानी।

सुन्दर रूप और कद था छोटा, पर बड़ी बडी़थी बातें

विश्वास था उसका इन बातों पर, कि तर्कही फर्क मिटाते।

मन बहुत था भोला, पर सोच से थी वो बहुतबड़ी

स्वार्थ से थी परे, परमदद को हरदम तैयाररहती खड़ी।

हिरनी सी वो कूदा करती, स्नेह भरा था अपरंपार

जब उसके अपनों ने उसे छला, तब आया एक राजकुमार

वो था विलायती बैरिश्टर बाबु, पर अपनी ज़मीन से जुड़ा

देश बदलने का जज़्बा लेकर, लंदन से स्वदेश उड़ा।

Angry Young Man और था फितुरी

दिल से निर्णय लेना, थी उसकी कमज़ोरी।

गलत देखकर रूक ना पाता, गुस्से से बेकाबु हो जाता

फिर जो उसकी चिल्लम चिल्ली, कोई उसको रोक ना पाता।

दोनो थे विपरित, फिर भी थे बहुत समान

अपनों की वो खुशी चाहते, कर जाते कुछ भी बलिदान।

बना राजकुमार रक्षक बाबू, शिक्षक और सखा भी

राजकुमारी भी कम ना थी, बनी ताकत मार्गदर्शक और सखी।

दोनो ने मिलकर सपना ये बुना, बदलेंगे समाज़ रस्ता ये चुना

बैरिश्टर बनेगी राजकुमारी, तो साहस भी होगा दुगुना।

एक दूसरे के थे पूरक, करते थे वो जां निसार

रोना हंसना साथ हमेशा, ऐसा उनका पवित्र प्यार।

मिलन दोनो का हुआ सौभाग्य से, ईश्वर ने बांधी थी डोर

सम्मान और प्यार से परिपूर्ण, ऐसा रिश्ता ना कोई और।

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Posted: 4 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: vishalsangeeta

I received special recognition for my entry to the contest Keep TheSpotlight Glowing.

Below was the poem written by me for "Nanhi Bondita" and " Pati Babu- Aniruddh", I hope you will like it.

नन्ही सी थी एक राजकुमारी, पर थी वो बड़ीसयानी

ईश्वर का अनोखा सृजन, चलो सुनाये उसकीकहानी।

सुन्दर रूप और कद था छोटा, पर बड़ी बडी़थी बातें

विश्वास था उसका इन बातों पर, कि तर्कही फर्क मिटाते।

मन बहुत था भोला, पर सोच से थी वो बहुतबड़ी

स्वार्थ से थी परे, परमदद को हरदम तैयाररहती खड़ी।

हिरनी सी वो कूदा करती, स्नेह भरा था अपरंपार

जब उसके अपनों ने उसे छला, तब आया एक राजकुमार

वो था विलायती बैरिश्टर बाबु, पर अपनी ज़मीन से जुड़ा

देश बदलने का जज़्बा लेकर, लंदन से स्वदेश उड़ा।

Angry Young Man और था फितुरी

दिल से निर्णय लेना, थी उसकी कमज़ोरी।

गलत देखकर रूक ना पाता, गुस्से से बेकाबु हो जाता

फिर जो उसकी चिल्लम चिल्ली, कोई उसको रोक ना पाता।

दोनो थे विपरित, फिर भी थे बहुत समान

अपनों की वो खुशी चाहते, कर जाते कुछ भी बलिदान।

बना राजकुमार रक्षक बाबू, शिक्षक और सखा भी

राजकुमारी भी कम ना थी, बनी ताकत मार्गदर्शक और सखी।

दोनो ने मिलकर सपना ये बुना, बदलेंगे समाज़ रस्ता ये चुना

बैरिश्टर बनेगी राजकुमारी, तो साहस भी होगा दुगुना।

एक दूसरे के थे पूरक, करते थे वो जां निसार

रोना हंसना साथ हमेशा, ऐसा उनका पवित्र प्यार।

मिलन दोनो का हुआ सौभाग्य से, ईश्वर ने बांधी थी डोर

सम्मान और प्यार से परिपूर्ण, ऐसा रिश्ता ना कोई और।

Beautiful poem 👍🏼❤️ and congratulations ❤️

Edited by jdr_26 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Too good Sangeetha.... Congrats ❤️ thanks for tagging me


The first two stanza literally drew the very first promo

of Barrister Babu in front of my eyes and the goose bumps I felt all over again

The promo that dragged me back to itv after years for its promise of this daring content..


Your lines were just them.. the chapters of their life in nut shell

for she was once that stranger to whom his pain questioned " kyun aaya hathon me haat tera" to she becaming his " jeevan sanasar hai tu." . that he always started to feel. "mere dil. main jaaga darad tera" simply because her soul converse to his out of any norms and bondages and chaining of society

for her coming into his life once gave him the incinerating pain of pyaar choot raha mere root rahe hai sare to she unianimoulsy conquered his life like mera dil tu pyar mera tu.. mera jeevan sansar hai tu..

for her world and sense of happiness take its trajectory from maa bin doli na chade to saathiya bhagwan tu he mere..

for his pledge of zid kya hoti hai zid karke hi batana .. his zid of tode zanjeere

jeewan likh naya.. for Bondita, through bonditha.. his sapna through her

eyes.. that became thier mission vision dream and through which she became his jeene ka vajah.. knowingly and unknowingly

journey of Anirudh who was the personification of dil me jo aag dhi dil apna hai jalaya literally jut for his sapna for greater good for tere aakhon mein dekhoon sapna mera

and for the lil bon her whole sense of happiness of handiya se rosogulle khyae

pedon pe jlil chake rising tokuch banna hai samma pana hai... personifying tere kismat teri haton se hi likhi jayegi.. their whole journey, unique, beautiful incomparabl.

where they stood by each other and sang hinge kamyab.. hum. honge kamyab.. ..

just flashed all in front of my eyes..

you reminded me once again how precious they were to me

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece..

Edited by faja - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful di.....I was soo happy to read your poem .... beautifully written 🥰💕

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishalsangeeta

I received special recognition for my entry to the contest Keep TheSpotlight Glowing.

Below was the poem written by me for "Nanhi Bondita" and " Pati Babu- Aniruddh", I hope you will like it.

नन्ही सी थी एक राजकुमारी, पर थी वो बड़ीसयानी

ईश्वर का अनोखा सृजन, चलो सुनाये उसकीकहानी।

सुन्दर रूप और कद था छोटा, पर बड़ी बडी़थी बातें

विश्वास था उसका इन बातों पर, कि तर्कही फर्क मिटाते।

मन बहुत था भोला, पर सोच से थी वो बहुतबड़ी

स्वार्थ से थी परे, परमदद को हरदम तैयाररहती खड़ी।

हिरनी सी वो कूदा करती, स्नेह भरा था अपरंपार

जब उसके अपनों ने उसे छला, तब आया एक राजकुमार

वो था विलायती बैरिश्टर बाबु, पर अपनी ज़मीन से जुड़ा

देश बदलने का जज़्बा लेकर, लंदन से स्वदेश उड़ा।

Angry Young Man और था फितुरी

दिल से निर्णय लेना, थी उसकी कमज़ोरी।

गलत देखकर रूक ना पाता, गुस्से से बेकाबु हो जाता

फिर जो उसकी चिल्लम चिल्ली, कोई उसको रोक ना पाता।

दोनो थे विपरित, फिर भी थे बहुत समान

अपनों की वो खुशी चाहते, कर जाते कुछ भी बलिदान।

बना राजकुमार रक्षक बाबू, शिक्षक और सखा भी

राजकुमारी भी कम ना थी, बनी ताकत मार्गदर्शक और सखी।

दोनो ने मिलकर सपना ये बुना, बदलेंगे समाज़ रस्ता ये चुना

बैरिश्टर बनेगी राजकुमारी, तो साहस भी होगा दुगुना।

एक दूसरे के थे पूरक, करते थे वो जां निसार

रोना हंसना साथ हमेशा, ऐसा उनका पवित्र प्यार।

मिलन दोनो का हुआ सौभाग्य से, ईश्वर ने बांधी थी डोर

सम्मान और प्यार से परिपूर्ण, ऐसा रिश्ता ना कोई और।

it s so nostalgic

ur words are aamaing and soothing


are u watching psot leap episodes

how are u findign them??

it is long u did not come

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishalsangeeta

I received special recognition for my entry to the contest Keep TheSpotlight Glowing.

Below was the poem written by me for "Nanhi Bondita" and " Pati Babu- Aniruddh", I hope you will like it.

नन्ही सी थी एक राजकुमारी, पर थी वो बड़ीसयानी

ईश्वर का अनोखा सृजन, चलो सुनाये उसकीकहानी।

सुन्दर रूप और कद था छोटा, पर बड़ी बडी़थी बातें

विश्वास था उसका इन बातों पर, कि तर्कही फर्क मिटाते।

मन बहुत था भोला, पर सोच से थी वो बहुतबड़ी

स्वार्थ से थी परे, परमदद को हरदम तैयाररहती खड़ी।

हिरनी सी वो कूदा करती, स्नेह भरा था अपरंपार

जब उसके अपनों ने उसे छला, तब आया एक राजकुमार

वो था विलायती बैरिश्टर बाबु, पर अपनी ज़मीन से जुड़ा

देश बदलने का जज़्बा लेकर, लंदन से स्वदेश उड़ा।

Angry Young Man और था फितुरी

दिल से निर्णय लेना, थी उसकी कमज़ोरी।

गलत देखकर रूक ना पाता, गुस्से से बेकाबु हो जाता

फिर जो उसकी चिल्लम चिल्ली, कोई उसको रोक ना पाता।

दोनो थे विपरित, फिर भी थे बहुत समान

अपनों की वो खुशी चाहते, कर जाते कुछ भी बलिदान।

बना राजकुमार रक्षक बाबू, शिक्षक और सखा भी

राजकुमारी भी कम ना थी, बनी ताकत मार्गदर्शक और सखी।

दोनो ने मिलकर सपना ये बुना, बदलेंगे समाज़ रस्ता ये चुना

बैरिश्टर बनेगी राजकुमारी, तो साहस भी होगा दुगुना।

एक दूसरे के थे पूरक, करते थे वो जां निसार

रोना हंसना साथ हमेशा, ऐसा उनका पवित्र प्यार।

मिलन दोनो का हुआ सौभाग्य से, ईश्वर ने बांधी थी डोर

सम्मान और प्यार से परिपूर्ण, ऐसा रिश्ता ना कोई और।


Sangeeta 🤗🤗 thanks for tagging me...

Beautiful poem dear as always! ❤️❤️ you put all emotions...

Sare scenes aane lage aankhon ke samane...😭 what a journey they had! Aur humko bhi deewana kar gaye ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: faja

Too good Sangeetha.... Congrats ❤️ thanks for tagging me


The first two stanza literally drew the very first promo

of Barrister Babu in front of my eyes and the goose bumps I felt all over again

The promo that dragged me back to itv after years for its promise of this daring content..


Your lines were just them.. the chapters of their life in nut shell

for she was once that stranger to whom his pain questioned " kyun aaya hathon me haat tera" to she becaming his " jeevan sanasar hai tu." . that he always started to feel. "mere dil. main jaaga darad tera" simply because her soul converse to his out of any norms and bondages and chaining of society

for her coming into his life once gave him the incinerating pain of pyaar choot raha mere root rahe hai sare to she unianimoulsy conquered his life like mera dil tu pyar mera tu.. mera jeevan sansar hai tu..

for her world and sense of happiness take its trajectory from maa bin doli na chade to saathiya bhagwan tu he mere..

for his pledge of zid kya hoti hai zid karke hi batana .. his zid of tode zanjeere

jeewan likh naya.. for Bondita, through bonditha.. his sapna through her

eyes.. that became thier mission vision dream and through which she became his jeene ka vajah.. knowingly and unknowingly

journey of Anirudh who was the personification of dil me jo aag dhi dil apna hai jalaya literally jut for his sapna for greater good for tere aakhon mein dekhoon sapna mera

and for the lil bon her whole sense of happiness of handiya se rosogulle khyae

pedon pe jlil chake rising tokuch banna hai samma pana hai... personifying tere kismat teri haton se hi likhi jayegi.. their whole journey, unique, beautiful incomparabl.

where they stood by each other and sang hinge kamyab.. hum. honge kamyab.. ..

just flashed all in front of my eyes..

you reminded me once again how precious they were to me

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece..


What an analysis Faja 👏 you spoke my heart... Yes they were indeed special.. non replaceable in heart...

Sabko dekh ke achha laga😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: faja

Too good Sangeetha.... Congrats ❤️ thanks for tagging me


The first two stanza literally drew the very first promo

of Barrister Babu in front of my eyes and the goose bumps I felt all over again

The promo that dragged me back to itv after years for its promise of this daring content..


Your lines were just them.. the chapters of their life in nut shell

for she was once that stranger to whom his pain questioned " kyun aaya hathon me haat tera" to she becaming his " jeevan sanasar hai tu." . that he always started to feel. "mere dil. main jaaga darad tera" simply because her soul converse to his out of any norms and bondages and chaining of society

for her coming into his life once gave him the incinerating pain of pyaar choot raha mere root rahe hai sare to she unianimoulsy conquered his life like mera dil tu pyar mera tu.. mera jeevan sansar hai tu..

for her world and sense of happiness take its trajectory from maa bin doli na chade to saathiya bhagwan tu he mere..

for his pledge of zid kya hoti hai zid karke hi batana .. his zid of tode zanjeere

jeewan likh naya.. for Bondita, through bonditha.. his sapna through her

eyes.. that became thier mission vision dream and through which she became his jeene ka vajah.. knowingly and unknowingly

journey of Anirudh who was the personification of dil me jo aag dhi dil apna hai jalaya literally jut for his sapna for greater good for tere aakhon mein dekhoon sapna mera

and for the lil bon her whole sense of happiness of handiya se rosogulle khyae

pedon pe jlil chake rising tokuch banna hai samma pana hai... personifying tere kismat teri haton se hi likhi jayegi.. their whole journey, unique, beautiful incomparabl.

where they stood by each other and sang hinge kamyab.. hum. honge kamyab.. ..

just flashed all in front of my eyes..

you reminded me once again how precious they were to me

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece..

Beautiful analysis.....isne to meri poem main chaar chand laga diye.....loved each word above written.....love you dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mugkale


Sangeeta 🤗🤗 thanks for tagging me...

Beautiful poem dear as always! ❤️❤️ you put all emotions...

Sare scenes aane lage aankhon ke samane...😭 what a journey they had! Aur humko bhi deewana kar gaye ❤️❤️❤️

Seriously I am remembering our cute Rudhita scene by scene n really with tears in my eyes....even recalling their interviews too....such a cute bond they used to share on and off screen both

Missing all the fun time

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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: vishalsangeeta

Seriously I am remembering our cute Rudhita scene by scene n really with tears in my eyes....even recalling their interviews too....such a cute bond they used to share on and off screen both

Missing all the fun time

yeah that charm and unqiue magic can never be created again in itv

pravi and aurra gave us cutest co star jodi

aura is lcuky to have siuch a vaersatile costar who guided her

her legacy is carried forward by aanchal

this show is aamzing

how are u finding psotleap

i find casting,amazing bas they need to refrom bon character so that it can match preleap charm

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