Short story on current track- HER DRASTIC DECISION

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Posted: 4 years ago
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He was trying his level best to concentrate but it was difficult

A struggle

A real hard struggle it was

To move on!

She was his first love. Perhaps still is and would always remain somewhere in the corner of his heart no matter how much he tried to move on from her.

Tejo!

His motivator!

Supporter!

He was grateful to her for being his pillar of strenght and adviser

A wife!

He sighed

Just a title of a wife and nothing more than that. Well , i refrain myself ftom commiting to her.

Gosh! She has her own desires. Never thought for once. Been selfish for myself. My problems and it was always

I not you or we

Only i

How could i be so selfish!

No i really need to move on now!

Enough is enough!

We will start all over again

A fresh start!


She was glad to see his text message ignoring the noisy surroundings of her students chatting in the classroom

Dinner out only u and me tonight !

Going for practice!

Will pick u up at 8pm

Be ready

Sweetheart!


The last word

Sweetheart!:

Did he mean it !

Ms tejo the meeting is at 5pm!

She was interrupted by the reminder of an office staff to which she smiled and nodded politely


His eyes set on her as she walked towards the car

She wore a black saree Sleeveless blouse Looking beautiful and hot

Hot! Did i just said that!

He couldnt believe his words

A lust emerging in him out of sudden. He calmed himself


They ate dinner quietly. He couldnt take away his eyes from her. She looked

Delicious!

What!:

Gosh !

First hot and now delicious !

Fateh singh virk !

What is wrong witj u !

Control urself!:


He was drawn to her as minutes passed. Then decided to take a step closer. Put an arm around her which startled her as she completed her meal. He pulled her closer and whispered imto her ears

Aaj hot leg rehi ho!

Bahut kuch karney ka dil karta hai!

She smiled shyly as she was head over heels in love with him and her needs were growing

Chulo kisney mena kiya!:

She moved more closer feeling his warmth. Lips inches away . He was exploring the dark eyes . The beautiful moment of an eyelock and sensation was finally interrupted by a phone call

Sati !

Her beloved mother on the line

Who gave her a bad news that shook her all over

Devastating!

Jasmin attempted to take away her own life!

Cut her wrist!


That besutiful moment when they were coming close was unfortunately destroyed yet once again by her nasty sibling


Reason for this fiction

I strongly believe jasmin will commit a suicide stunt to prove her love for fateh

Could be wrong

But seeing her crazy deeds she can take a very drastic decision

The moment fateh takes one step towards tejo

Jasmin pulls him back two steps






















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Posted: 4 years ago
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That is a possibility. But I would prefer if Jas is angered by Fateh's rejection and try to trap him in molestation charge. At least that will lead to Fateh's total detachment with her. Also, Tejo will support him as she knows he can never cross that line. And considering Maami's warning, she may also get out of my sweet but idiot sister rant and see her cunning ways.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I also got that feeling after watching g the episode again.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG girl.... here comes another one from you,

I so wish either the creative's or the makers visit the forum, for these wonderful pieces written by creatives like you 😊


This one is awesome too, and I actually find this one more closer to reality as I feel this could be Chameli's next step.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I love this piece! ❤️ You’re right, I could totally imagine demonbelle doing something like this! Thank you for writing this 😊

Edited by Tahiti-1 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear for ur comment

She said she wants to prove her love to him

So molestation will make him go away

I thnk high possibility of suicide attenpt

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear

For ur comment

High chances are there

Its a trend in itvs these days among triangle loves by villains

An act of emotional blackmail

Something drastic happened before that mud scene

Tejo didnt wear her mangalsutra and chuda

I think its face off between tejo and fateh

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ha ha


Tq once again

This one unplanned

I wrote after reading the episode update before going to bed

Half sleepy

Sorry forgot to tag

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear

Written last minute after reading the update

Its a trend in itvs these days

Whenevee fateh moves away from her they will show him bouncing back somehow😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Tq dear

Written last minute after reading the update

Its a trend in itvs these days

Whenevee fateh moves away from her they will show him bouncing back somehow😂


Fateh is a human pendulum or a basketball 😭

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