Thoughts on Episode- My Take - Page 11

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

I'm all in for a feisty, dom Tejo but due to IF standards the fic can't be too hot to handle so I'm writing a comparatively tame version. 😆

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Tejo: What the hell?

Fateh: What?

Tejo: You just looked at that girl for 6 seconds longer than usual. Is she your type?

Fateh: …

How should he tell his wife that he just liked that woman's dress and thought Tejo would look good in a gown too. They were out on a shopping date and Tejo was trying on her 15th salwar suit.

Tejo glanced at her husband looking like an abandoned puppy after being teased and a naughty smile flashed past her face. She entered the trial room with a few clothes and called out, "Fateh, come here for a second"

Fateh dejectedly went closer, "Now now Tejo, I know you look great in every outfit but do I need to enter-"

A hand came out and forcibly pulled Fateh inside the trial room.

***

Moments later, a smirking Tejo exited the trial room followed by a blushing Fateh in tow.

An eight year old boy observed Fateh from afar and confusedly called out to his mother, "Mom, why does that uncle have red marks on his neck?"

His mom looked at Fateh's disheveled clothes and knowingly replied, "Must've been bitten by a mosquito"

The boy grew even more confused, "But you also have the same marks on your neck sometimes"

"Your father is also a big mosquito" The woman mumbled to herself and went off with her son.

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Hehehe how did you guys like it?

Tagged a few

You cannot leave it here 😣😣😣

Write more na....pleaseeeeeeee.......

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

❤❤❤😘😘😘😊 This was amazing. The best thing about your stories is, I can see the characters doing it. They're not some AU version. It's real.

And as much as I love this little escapade, I kinda want something more. Not just a lil fic, a proper OS. And idk if you are somewhere else, then you can write it there and post much tamer version here. I seriously absolutely love your stories.

I still smile remembering drunk tejo exploring fatehsq pecs in your 'drunk on love' story

Thanks for the compliments Bluekohl!!❤️❤️☺️

You're not the only one, even I wanted to add some more 18+ stuff to this fic but refrained. I'm not on any other platform right now but I'll see if I can post some on wattpad when I'm free and call you guys there. 😃

@bold: ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

You cannot leave it here 😣😣😣

Write more na....pleaseeeeeeee.......

I'll see if I can write better versions of this.😃

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

I'm all in for a feisty, dom Tejo but due to IF standards the fic can't be too hot to handle so I'm writing a comparatively tame version. 😆

________________________________

Tejo: What the hell?

Fateh: What?

Tejo: You just looked at that girl for 6 seconds longer than usual. Is she your type?

Fateh: …

How should he tell his wife that he just liked that woman's dress and thought Tejo would look good in a gown too. They were out on a shopping date and Tejo was trying on her 15th salwar suit.

Tejo glanced at her husband looking like an abandoned puppy after being teased and a naughty smile flashed past her face. She entered the trial room with a few clothes and called out, "Fateh, come here for a second"

Fateh dejectedly went closer, "Now now Tejo, I know you look great in every outfit but do I need to enter-"

A hand came out and forcibly pulled Fateh inside the trial room.

***

Moments later, a smirking Tejo exited the trial room followed by a blushing Fateh in tow.

An eight year old boy observed Fateh from afar and confusedly called out to his mother, "Mom, why does that uncle have red marks on his neck?"

His mom looked at Fateh's disheveled clothes and knowingly replied, "Must've been bitten by a mosquito"

The boy grew even more confused, "But you also have the same marks on your neck sometimes"

"Your father is also a big mosquito" The woman mumbled to herself and went off with her son.

________________________________

Hehehe how did you guys like it?

Tagged a few

Loved it! The last line cracked me up 😆

Yeh IF standards na make an account on wattpad and write 18+ erotic Fatejo fan fiction wahan 🤪

This was sooo damn good !! You are seriously one of my favourite writers ever !! You always take me to Fatejo lala land Ravi and Sargun should take inspiration from you, seriously there ought to be a way to direct them to this forum :/

never stop writing on Fatejo ;)) seriously I prefer the Fatejo track unfolding in your stories than one written by Sargun Ravi :/

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

I'm all in for a feisty, dom Tejo but due to IF standards the fic can't be too hot to handle so I'm writing a comparatively tame version. 😆

________________________________

Tejo: What the hell?

Fateh: What?

Tejo: You just looked at that girl for 6 seconds longer than usual. Is she your type?

Fateh: …

How should he tell his wife that he just liked that woman's dress and thought Tejo would look good in a gown too. They were out on a shopping date and Tejo was trying on her 15th salwar suit.

Tejo glanced at her husband looking like an abandoned puppy after being teased and a naughty smile flashed past her face. She entered the trial room with a few clothes and called out, "Fateh, come here for a second"

Fateh dejectedly went closer, "Now now Tejo, I know you look great in every outfit but do I need to enter-"

A hand came out and forcibly pulled Fateh inside the trial room.

***

Moments later, a smirking Tejo exited the trial room followed by a blushing Fateh in tow.

An eight year old boy observed Fateh from afar and confusedly called out to his mother, "Mom, why does that uncle have red marks on his neck?"

His mom looked at Fateh's disheveled clothes and knowingly replied, "Must've been bitten by a mosquito"

The boy grew even more confused, "But you also have the same marks on your neck sometimes"

"Your father is also a big mosquito" The woman mumbled to herself and went off with her son.

________________________________

Hehehe how did you guys like it?

Tagged a few

Kya hua trial room mein? Reveal spicy details on wattpad ;))

Originally posted by: LostDelirious

Yeh IF standards na make an account on wattpad and write 18+ erotic Fatejo fan fiction wahan 🤪

This was sooo damn good !! You are seriously one of my favourite writers ever !! You always take me to Fatejo lala land Ravi and Sargun should take inspiration from you, seriously there ought to be a way to direct them to this forum :/

never stop writing on Fatejo ;)) seriously I prefer the Fatejo track unfolding in your stories than one written by Sargun Ravi :/

Geez @LostDelirious you're making me laugh and blush at the same time 😆

I'm so glad you like this short story, I'll make a wattpad account for steamy stories whenever I get time. But right now my schedule is packed for the next two months so surely after that. 😉

Thanks again for the compliments.