Shivi SS: Standing by each other Part 6 on Pg 24 20.07.2021(Completed) - Page 13

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww. This was so beautiful!! Loved it. Loved Raavi being the open one and initiating these steps in their relationship. It was lovely how she reassured him that he did nothing wrong and not need to feel guilty. ❤️ Shiva's acceptance to this relationship and Raavi's happiness at his actions were so palpable. Loved how they fed each other and were slowly moving into this domestic comfort as husband and wife! ❤️And Raavi's back in her true element with that silly thand excuse to hug her hubby. 😂😂 Don't think Shiva would have minded if she just hugged him and if he gave her look, she could have been nonchalant and said biwi hu tumhari, haq hai. Maybe they'll get there soon!


Now I wish their punishment was for little longer duration. Seven days are so little. Maybe they can go to Somnath early because store needs Shiva there and Raavi accompanies him. Raavi taking care of the household chores and helping out for few hours in the store while Shiva works and them soending some quality time at night and bonding before the family returns.


And loved that small Krish-Raavi scene too. Aah would love to see Raavi fretting over her fav (and only) Devar as Shiva looks on admiringly seeing Krish bond with Raavi as he does with Dhara!


Lovely update! Please update the next part soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was beautiful! I loved how Raavi did her nautanki of feeling cold in the end to hug Shiva 😆

These days are really bringing ShiVi close to each other.. I'm loving it! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow...... that's amazing... his guilt and how she made him comfort, his protective nature, you penned it so nicely.



Acha ek baat bata Or koi ladki hoti meri jagah toh bhi tu vahi karta? ' she asked. She hoped he would deny it.

'Pagal hai kya tu? Dimag kharab hai tera? Or koi… kya bol rahi hai tu yar' he was angry as well as disgusted.


So beautifully written... this is what one will expect. That's so innocent and sweet. Take a hug dear...🤗 want to praise each and every line. Really touched a lot.


If possible please share your other stories also. Will love to read them.

With Love,

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautifully written

Waiting for next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago

B poor ravi kya kare shiva k guilt k chakkar mein sanyasi ban jae.Naji na.bilkul nahin.loved the update.Pagal hai kya tu? Dimag kharab hai tera? Or koi… kya bol rahi hai tu yar' he was angry as well as disgusted. Loved this line.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was soooo amazing….

Krish is always teasing Shiva.😂

Shiva and Raavi scene were just outstanding..

The way Shiva was feeling guilty and Raavi trying to make him understand…

Aaawww they fed eachother…

The last part was really sweet…

Cant wait for the next chapter..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ooooooo now that's a step in the right direction! 😍

Raavi doing her biwi thing was ❤️!!!

Biwi is insanely attracted to pati and pati is totally clueless😵

Kya karu iss gadhere ka! 😔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update👏

Krish loves teasing Shivi😆

Shiva was feeling guilty but Raavi handled it with her way❤️💞

Loved Shivi's moment ❤️

Raavi's nautanki at the end was hilarious😆

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow 👏 maza aa gaya...

so adorable 😍 💖 💕 they are

m glad they talked and now fine

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

SOO SOO CUTEEE!!!!☺️

I was giggling all the way till end!

Shiva being guilty and Raavi making him understand 🤗

ShiVi’s acceptance and feeding each other 😳

The last scene took my heart away!!! Drama queen Raavi is the best 🤣

Shiva kya slow hai😆

haha, thankyou so much girl🤗

Shiva slow hai🤔 umm pata nahi. but maybe insecure hai😃 par dekhte hai

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