Shivi SS: Standing by each other Part 6 on Pg 24 20.07.2021(Completed) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Scarysea

I liked it ..shiva being all guilty and Raavi letting him know that the moment was not mistake for her 😃

The ending nautanki by Raavi was such a Raavi thing

Thankyou so much dear🤗

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I enjoyed it a lot

Positivity and sunshine everywhere

Thankyou so much dear🤗

And you said in your thread that you don't my name. Vaishali. and yours?😊

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

I enjoyed reading this❤️

Such a happy happy and smiling one....it was so good

I loved how Raavi made Shiva understand that he need not feel guilty❤️

Shivi feeding each other....finally they have decided to give their marriage a chance..I am loving their progress❤️

Nautanki Raavi at her best...last scene was so cute❤️

Beautiful update...waiting for the next one🤗

haha. thankyou so much🤗

Updating in a while

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww. This was so beautiful!! Loved it. Loved Raavi being the open one and initiating these steps in their relationship. It was lovely how she reassured him that he did nothing wrong and not need to feel guilty. ❤️ Shiva's acceptance to this relationship and Raavi's happiness at his actions were so palpable. Loved how they fed each other and were slowly moving into this domestic comfort as husband and wife! ❤️And Raavi's back in her true element with that silly thand excuse to hug her hubby. 😂😂 Don't think Shiva would have minded if she just hugged him and if he gave her look, she could have been nonchalant and said biwi hu tumhari, haq hai. Maybe they'll get there soon!

Now I wish their punishment was for little longer duration. Seven days are so little. Maybe they can go to Somnath early because store needs Shiva there and Raavi accompanies him. Raavi taking care of the household chores and helping out for few hours in the store while Shiva works and them soending some quality time at night and bonding before the family returns.

And loved that small Krish-Raavi scene too. Aah would love to see Raavi fretting over her fav (and only) Devar as Shiva looks on admiringly seeing Krish bond with Raavi as he does with Dhara!

Lovely update! Please update the next part soon!

Thankyou so much for such beautiful and detailed feedback🤗

You know we think alike. I too wanted them to return back and spend some time alone and reading your idea I was sure of showing the same.

Hmm. but Raavi and Krish bonding I don't think I will be able to show. but in any other story I will show pakka🤗

Updating in a while❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

This was beautiful! I loved how Raavi did her nautanki of feeling cold in the end to hug Shiva 😆

These days are really bringing ShiVi close to each other.. I'm loving it! ❤️

Thankyou so much dear🤗

Yes, being alone bring two people close❤️

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Wow...... that's amazing... his guilt and how she made him comfort, his protective nature, you penned it so nicely.

Acha ek baat bata Or koi ladki hoti meri jagah toh bhi tu vahi karta? ' she asked. She hoped he would deny it.

'Pagal hai kya tu? Dimag kharab hai tera? Or koi… kya bol rahi hai tu yar' he was angry as well as disgusted.

So beautifully written... this is what one will expect. That's so innocent and sweet. Take a hug dear...🤗 want to praise each and every line. Really touched a lot.

If possible please share your other stories also. Will love to read them.

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With Love,

Hugging you back🤗

Thankyou so very much❤️

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Beautifully written

Waiting for next chapter

Thankyou so much🤗

Updating in a while😊

Originally posted by: lourel24

B poor ravi kya kare shiva k guilt k chakkar mein sanyasi ban jae.Naji na.bilkul nahin.loved the update.Pagal hai kya tu? Dimag kharab hai tera? Or koi… kya bol rahi hai tu yar' he was angry as well as disgusted. Loved this line.

Haha don't worry Raavi ko sanyasi nahi banne denge😆

Thankyou so much🤗

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This was soooo amazing….

Krish is always teasing Shiva.😂

Shiva and Raavi scene were just outstanding..

The way Shiva was feeling guilty and Raavi trying to make him understand…

Aaawww they fed eachother…

The last part was really sweet…

Cant wait for the next chapter..

Thankyou so much dear🤗

Will update in a while, wait till then❤️

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Ooooooo now that's a step in the right direction! 😍

Raavi doing her biwi thing was ❤️!!!

Biwi is insanely attracted to pati and pati is totally clueless😵

Kya karu iss gadhere ka! 😔

Thankyou dear🤗

Haha. he will too be attracted