Fatejo os : love beyond measures

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first attempt at a ff , I don't usually watch hindi TV drama but udaariyan has kept me hooked bcaz of fatejos chemistry. Please bear me even if my story is not that great I promise to get better with time.


We must let her go fateh, it's been three years and there is no change in her condition keeping her on life support for any longer is just going to give her pain and misery. No no I can't ,I won't fateh choked as he tried to prevent his tears from spilling. Fateh please.. No he gritted his teeth, he hurriedly got up and rushed out of the doctors cabin. He felt weak in the stomach his vision began to blur ,his legs were giving up on him but he still ran down the corridor and headed up to the hospital terrace. The moment he reached there he collapsed as his knees beneath him buckled, he felt his bile rising he tried to get a hold of himself but failed when he could take no more he let out a scream and began crying and howling like a wonded soul.

It was an unbearable sight ,it seemed even the heavens pitied him crying as they looked at him in pain as they darkened with clouds and the lightning stroke.Why? He shouted looking up at the sky in agony roaring and calling out to all the gods residing in heaven.Is this ur way of getting back at me ,is this ur revenge on me for never having believed in ur existence. If it is so u could have ruined me why her, she always believed in u, always prayed to u then why? U know what if u think u can snatch her away from me, ur wrong I'll fight for her till my last breath and burn this whole world down if I have to but I'm not letting u win not this time. If you dont want people to stop believing in u, u have to give her back ,u can't harm an innocent soul. He begged for her. A man who never bowed before anyone kneeled today with his head down .That is how deeply he loved her so much that he even surrendered to the almighty he had never acknowledged .

Today he was a man defeated on the verge on losing that one person who meant the world to him for whom he could give up anything his own life if needed. He sat there for ages crying and whimpering hoping that if the gods did exist they heard and mercied on him and gave him back his Tejo. The light and joy of his life who spread nothing but happiness in all the lives she entered. A soul so beautiful and pious that even the fairies up in the seventh heaven would feel envied for truly there was none like her.

As he sat there dejected and lifeless he felt a slight breeze on his cheek, if felt as if somebody had kissed his cheek to awaken him, as he opened his eyes he was astoned to find himself standing in the middle of a field, he realised it was the same wheat field where he and Tejo had confessed their feelings , a place where they had created their own world enveloped in their unconditional love for one another away from the sight of the rest of the world. This is where they had shared all their firsts, first time they hesitantly held hands, first time they hugged, first time their quivering but exicted lips met, first time they made love, he slightly smiled as the best moments of his life flashed before his eyes. He suddenly heard someone call out to him, he turned towards where the sound had come from to see her standing before him laughing as her eyes twinkled.

He couldn't believe what he was seeing, he rubbed his eyes to see if he was dreaming but no he wasn't she was really there. Tejo he whispered as if he couldnt fatom the sight he was seeing.

Oyy lafandar she giggled as she called out to him are u just going to stand there or are u going to come catch me. He started running after her to catch her as she began to run away from him laughing and teasing him as they ran through the fields like old times. He finally caught her and pulled her to himself and said u love troubling me don't u, u love seeing me worried for u. Do you even know how many deaths I died even at the thought of losing u. The doctor said u weren't coming back but I knew u would for u know ur lafandar is no good without u. I'm not letting u get away this time. Promise me u will always stay with me. Uve broken ur promise once but not again. Promise me he said.

Fateh she looked at him with all the love she had as her eyes glistened with tears. I never left u I was always with u it is just that u kept looking for me in the wrong place. Fateh I'm not on that hospital bed, I'm in every tear that drops out of ur eye, every laugh that escapes ur mouth, every breath that u take, in every heart beat of urs, I'm within u, in ur veins, ur heart, ur dreams, aspirations, ur prayers, ur wishes, I am u. we are not different we are one. Nobody can separate us not even when we walk beyond the horizons after life, we are together till eternity. The only place I don't exist is in that physical body lying on that hospital bed .Its painful lying there watching u mourn, it hurts to see you hurting please let go of that body for I no longer exist in it. Stop holding on to what has already slipped out of ur fist, let go learn to set the ones u love free, don't cage them as when u do that ur just limiting ur self and binding ur self to the non existent. Don't push me away fateh. I wish to be the wind beneath ur wings and not the shackles that hold you back. Please my love set me free for I'm within u. As she said that she pulled him in for a kiss. It was blissful to be able to feel her again. He closed his eyes to be able to hold on to the essence of that very moment. After what seemed like ions they broke apart he felt her whispering good bye my love . He slowly opened his eyes only to realize and look around and see the same old hospital terrace. He shook his head realising he had actually been dreaming.

He stood up and brushed himself, wiped away his tears and headed down towards the doctors cabin to do what was needed .To set his love free only to reunite forever till eternity. As their love was truly beyond measures.❤❤🤲.

Hope u guys enjoy my first attempt at writing and do give feedback so I get better with my next one will post one tomorrow at the latest.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sorry I accidentally wrote ff it's an os, please forgive me.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It is so emotional and I realised I am crying after my husband asked what's wrong?


Very soul-touching.. but please no sad OS on Fatejo.. Write more on Fatejo, we are ready to read always

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Posted: 4 years ago
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emotional os written beautifully

but please don't write sad on fatejo next time

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ohh dont worry my next ones will not be emo. ill give u a tiny hint as u were kind enough to be the first one to read and respond to my first piece of writing. It's got something to do with memory loss. Memory loss plots are way to famous on our itv but just love it. Sorry for making you cry ma'am.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was heartbreaking but so well written. It's a lovely OS.❤️

Also a suggestion, add FaTejo OS to the topic heading so that people who want to read OSes will know that this is one.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Emotional. You have beautifully penned it out🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for ur feedback. I know I accidentally wrote ff in the beginning, only to realise after I had posted it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Thanks for ur feedback. I know I accidentally wrote ff in the beginning, only to realise after I had posted it.

No no, you got me wrong. The heading of your topic is love beyond measures, so I was asking you to edit it to ‘FaTejo OS: love beyond measures’ you can do it by clicking the settings button beside the heading. About the post, you can edit that too using the settings button on the post.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aw this was heartbreaking and sweet at the same time. You did a good job, I hope you keep improving.😉

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