RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 75

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

What do you mean by now? I always stood up to my that position.

yes... yes... u r next dalai lama... always standing...

Ok(deep breath)...let me first praise your words and the way you weave them---so beautiful...I am quite astonished with this chapter.

I think that the this part is all a hallucination of Raghav or reminiscence of Pallavi's previous death and he merges that with Sarika's accident. I feel like you have interwoven the past and present together.

Pallavi thinks it is an honor for her to die as a married person with vermilion on her forehead as she never once expected in her life to get married again, to fall in love--thought she would be living as a widow for rest of her life.

I really liked that instead of addressing as Pallavi or Raghav they were addressed as my soul and my beat---unki zindagi ek dusre main basti hain(I didn't translate it to English cause it sounds better in Hindi)

Her life was offered for her life was the most beautiful and apt sentence to describe their relationship and their whole ordeal.

The prayers of both Pallavi and Raghav to save the other person was so real and heartfelt.

Thank you so much for giving Pallavi's pov and I noticed the fact you didn't fail to mention that Pallavi's bullet being near her heart and Sarika's first one being also near her heart.

This thing is real---sometimes our mind fabricates an illusion--sort of like daydream where we start to assume stuff which has never happened and I think same happened with Raghav where his mind creates the illusion that Pallavi is no more while in reality she must be semi-concious state were she is unable to move and hence unable to hug back.

Somewhere I feel this too that Raghav is assumed to be the relative of dead patient hence attendant told that we weren't able to save the patient because you mentioned that fact 2 beds were rolled into hospital when Pallavi was brought in. and the doctor also mentions the fact they want to save Pallavi because one of the patients is dead already.

Pallavi's heart is completely disheartened when Raghav leaves the hospital leaving her behind but the part confusing was why would attendant ask the patient who she is and her reply is Idk (because Raghav her identity has left alone in hospital).

Last but not the least this was so well written---it bought out emotions so well--I can't definitely wait for what the future chapters hold for us.

Why is Pallavi and Ved are considered to be allies by Raghav? maybe Ved finds her in the hospital and threatens her under Raghav's name and Pallavi succumbs??

I think I have written long one😅

Thanx for everything u said and ur analysis is apt to the point of almost picture perfect.

All of ur theories make absolute sense. Just a small thought which I had regarding darkness engulfing light and patient19. Not sure if that came out properly or not.

Regarding Darkness finally engulfed the light. It has both interpretation and many more which others can point out. As per my interpretation. Raghav perceive her dead and she choosing to loose her identity thus a symbolic death for him. Thus becoming Patient 19. It is story tool I preferred to show she id no longer Pallavi Raghav Rao or Pallavi Rao or even Pallavi thus the last line too. . no answer for who she is. Thus she says she don't know.

It was rally good to see what i intended to came out that way and ppl actually getting to those interpretation. I was doubtful over that.

Thnx.

Yes it was FB of 2 years back when first accident happened. I don't prefer hindi because it sounds great but make my skin crawl to write that way. Not for me.

Yes he hugged real Pallavi but with all his insecurities fear guilt he was already perceiving things and thus attendants words and no hug back was the straw that broke the camel's back.

Regarding ved I already mentioned in last chapter. that arc is done with

It was a good experience writing pure mental journey with very less physical action points.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

yes... yes... u r next dalai lama... always standing...

I really wouldn't mind that.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I really wouldn't mind that.

ofcourse u wont.

Liam Neesam the evil alien.....who wanted to turn everyone into monkeys...but for Dick who turned him into chimpanzee....nah don't be afraid...faith in love will drive you to give us fairytale ending...

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

ofcourse u wont.

Maybe you can be my successor.

Originally posted by: Joyness

Liam Neesam the evil alien.....who wanted to turn everyone into monkeys...but for Dick who turned him into chimpanzee....nah don't be afraid...faith in love will drive you to give us fairytale ending...

U shouldn't have said that just before me starting on epilogue.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Maybe you can be my successor.

no. U already have ur followers. choose from them.