Raghvi drabble series - Drabble 2 added in pg 4 😍 - Page 9

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Thank you so much Trista. 🤗

That long comment is a treat, I was so happy when I saw it that I couldn't respond, that's why I left a small msg about the chosen. I don't know what should I say even now. Thanks alot.

I think many guessed the woman correctly but missed the man in second. Can't say anything now. I will be adding more drabbles to it, so.

We will wait. 😆

That's OK.

Yay, that's a good news!!🥳

Originally posted by: Trista101

Waaaw! I have literally no words!😳👏

It was Enticing, Angsty, Alluring, Fascinating, Poignant , and Solitary at the same time!❤️

Loved how you described Raghav's loneliness in the first drabble. I straight up felt his pain ; visualizing him sitting on the dining table, aloof with no one to accompany him, understand him, care for him, talk to him. I would never ever want to see him like this 😭

"Raghav Rao doesn't care about these things. He was alone, he is alone and he will be alone." His own words felt venom to himself and he walked away, the dinner long forgotten. - These lines are the proof that how it took him a moment of misunderstanding to become a loner to a lonely man surrounded with guilt ; and it has truly become a slow, deathly poison to him.

Btw, was the person hiding behind the curtains Pallavi🤔? I really hope that it's her.

I'm back after reading the 2nd one.😆

Raghav's pain in the first drabble and his tendency to fight with his guilt in the second one was described so well!

I know this is a totally different drabble but who was that man Pallavi seeked comfort and solace from?🤔

Pallavi staying in a guest room ; making it her home and Raghav visiting the room after 6 months ; and him calling 'Pallavi' seemed strange to him ; which was contrary to the banters and rapport they had for each other😒

"His eyes surveyed the room abstractedly looking for something, one more photo frame but found nothing." - This line explains that though he is in contempt and thinks that he doesn't deserve her, deep down he still craves for her acceptance and love ; and he is willing to do anything to experience that moment of peace, care and love.😭

Raghav asking Pallavi to choose between him and the Trashmukhs describes his feelings well, that he truly wants to repent for his deeds and fill her life with happiness but at the same time, doesn't want to leave her without a choice. He is so ashamed that doesn't even want to look her in eye, and silently walks away, hoping that she give him a last chance, so that he can make life colourful for both of them.❤️

You are an awesome writer ; and an expert in writing angsty ones.🤩❤💙

Are you continuing it? You should really consider writing the third part too.😳

Love,

Trista.❤

I think I found words to reply to this awesome comment.😎

You said you have no words, still you have wrote beautiful words. 😆Thank you so much Trista.

I wanted everyone to ignore Raghav after the marriage. I wanted him to suffer, not because I'm sadistic but because, pain makes love strong. I wanted Raghav to feel Pallavi's pain. I wanted him self wallowing in a corner after the marriage. So wrote that first drabble loneliness.

And second one, though it's not a continuation of loneliness it is a future part of drabble one. And I know, the way she avoided Raghav was contradictory. Pallavi can never take revenge, she is not that person but I atleast wanted her to give him a silent treatment for whatever he has done to her till their marriage. I didn't want a sudden forgiveness. So the drabble choice happened, when Raghav realized that he lost the chance and it's of no use to keep her with him. So letting her go.

I may will reveal the man in the next.

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment like that. Means alot. 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I think I found words to reply to this awesome comment.😎

You said you have no words, still you have wrote beautiful words. 😆Thank you so much Trista.

I wanted everyone to ignore Raghav after the marriage. I wanted him to suffer, not because I'm sadistic but because, pain makes love strong. I wanted Raghav to feel Pallavi's pain. I wanted him self wallowing in a corner after the marriage. So wrote that first drabble loneliness.

And second one, though it's not a continuation of loneliness it is a future part of drabble one. And I know, the way she avoided Raghav was contradictory. Pallavi can never take revenge, she is not that person but I atleast wanted her to give him a silent treatment for whatever he has done to her till their marriage. I didn't want a sudden forgiveness. So the drabble choice happened, when Raghav realized that he lost the chance and it's of no use to keep her with him. So letting her go.

I may will reveal the man in the next.

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment like that. Means alot. 🤗

Exactly! Raghav needs to understand the pain she has gone through ; because of him. But at the same time, he realises his mistake and deserves a second chance to make things better.

Waiting

You are welcome!🤗❤️

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