Raghvi drabble series - Drabble 2 added in pg 4 😍 - Page 8

Hi LoveHopeMagic

Coming out of my hibernation with MHRW, and more precisely with this post.

I read both drabbles just yesterday. And the emotions you invoke with very few words, is just magical.

Your drabbles feel like your namesake. Love how you end with Hope and weave Magic, with your drabbles.

I wanted to re-read and respond in detail. But what pushed me here so quickly was today’s episode. All I could remember when that scene was playing was, your ‘loneliness’ drabble. I am not divulging more, as unsure if you have watched the episode yet.

I am sure, will be back after re-reading!

Waiting to read more of your work.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Hi LoveHopeMagic

Coming out of my hibernation with MHRW, and more precisely with this post.

I read both drabbles just yesterday. And the emotions you invoke with very few words, is just magical.

Your drabbles feel like your namesake. Love how you end with Hope and weave Magic, with your drabbles.

I wanted to re-read and respond in detail. But what pushed me here so quickly was today’s episode. All I could remember when that scene was playing was, your ‘loneliness’ drabble. I am not divulging more, as unsure if you have watched the episode yet.

I am sure, will be back after re-reading!

Waiting to read more of your work.

Hi Priyam

You just made my day with this. ❤️

I'm glad that I could help you out of your hibernation. And thank you so much for taking time to read and leave a response here.

@Bold : After this I'm not changing my ID ever.

Yeah, I have watched today's episode. When he told sree to sit with him I was like, "wow, they copied my drabble, and didn't even give me credit."😆My drabble had Farhad and in show we had sree.

I will wait for the detailed comment and will post one soon. 😳

Back again!

Even if you change your ID, you will certainly up the level. 👍🏼

Yes, that scene was yours! Leaving aside the cosmetics of Farhad and Sree, the underlying tone remained just the same.

You had mentioned how lonely he feels; that the ladies of the house do not consider him in the scheme of things - and that exactly was what RR voiced out in the episode! Not just asking for company, which gets turned down. 👏🏼👏🏼

In Loneliness, I liked how simple it was. No jazz of words but it was a play of emotions. With ease, you got us sitting at the table across from RR and feeling the pain he endures. That is some real magic with words!

I love love and love more - angst! And I also crave for happy endings. Yes, a chaotic combination. I was in for a treat in both your work, as the combo worked beautifully. The happy ending neednt be the shouting from the rooftop; but more of a subtle moving-in-the-right-direction; and I enjoyed it thoroughly. The hope! The love! And the magic!

In Choice, I liked how the story has progressed; references from the previous drabble taken ahead. Neat. What I love in the show (till date) is the openness with which the leads talk. There is lot of good and open communication on; such a welcome change.

In your story, you have used it too. RR being very direct and communicating, though he took a few months. And yes, along with him, even my eyes were looking for THE photo. 😊

And done!

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Back again!

Even if you change your ID, you will certainly up the level. 👍🏼

Yes, that scene was yours! Leaving aside the cosmetics of Farhad and Sree, the underlying tone remained just the same.

You had mentioned how lonely he feels; that the ladies of the house do not consider him in the scheme of things - and that exactly was what RR voiced out in the episode! Not just asking for company, which gets turned down. 👏🏼👏🏼

In Loneliness, I liked how simple it was. No jazz of words but it was a play of emotions. With ease, you got us sitting at the table across from RR and feeling the pain he endures. That is some real magic with words!

I love love and love more - angst! And I also crave for happy endings. Yes, a chaotic combination. I was in for a treat in both your work, as the combo worked beautifully. The happy ending neednt be the shouting from the rooftop; but more of a subtle moving-in-the-right-direction; and I enjoyed it thoroughly. The hope! The love! And the magic!

In Choice, I liked how the story has progressed; references from the previous drabble taken ahead. Neat. What I love in the show (till date) is the openness with which the leads talk. There is lot of good and open communication on; such a welcome change.

In your story, you have used it too. RR being very direct and communicating, though he took a few months. And yes, along with him, even my eyes were looking for THE photo. 😊

And done!

Hey, first of all I'm so sorry for responding back this late. Was caught up in a couple of things.

I understand that chaotic combination so well. I love / enjoy reading angst than romance but at the same time I need a happy ending. A happy ending is a must and sometimes I only read some stories till the couples fall in love, because after that the angst is gone.

Thank you so much for liking my drabbles this much. It means alot. 🤗

Yep. I too love the gradual progress Raghvi have in the show. There is no unnecessary drama which is like fresh air.❤️

I hope to find you more in my stories.

No pressure to respond! 😊

Yes, will meet on more of your works. In the meantime, will try to rummage through all the wonderful work thats on the forum already.

I loved the first drabble

Love reading sad stuff😆

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

I loved the first drabble

Love reading sad stuff😆

And I love writing them. 😆

Waaaw! I have literally no words!😳👏

It was Enticing, Angsty, Alluring, Fascinating, Poignant , and Solitary at the same time!❤️

Loved how you described Raghav's loneliness in the first drabble. I straight up felt his pain ; visualizing him sitting on the dining table, aloof with no one to accompany him, understand him, care for him, talk to him. I would never ever want to see him like this 😭

"Raghav Rao doesn't care about these things. He was alone, he is alone and he will be alone." His own words felt venom to himself and he walked away, the dinner long forgotten. - These lines are the proof that how it took him a moment of misunderstanding to become a loner to a lonely man surrounded with guilt ; and it has truly become a slow, deathly poison to him.

Btw, was the person hiding behind the curtains Pallavi🤔? I really hope that it's her.

I'm back after reading the 2nd one.😆

Raghav's pain in the first drabble and his tendency to fight with his guilt in the second one was described so well!

I know this is a totally different drabble but who was that man Pallavi seeked comfort and solace from?🤔

Pallavi staying in a guest room ; making it her home and Raghav visiting the room after 6 months ; and him calling 'Pallavi' seemed strange to him ; which was contrary to the banters and rapport they had for each other😒

"His eyes surveyed the room abstractedly looking for something, one more photo frame but found nothing." - This line explains that though he is in contempt and thinks that he doesn't deserve her, deep down he still craves for her acceptance and love ; and he is willing to do anything to experience that moment of peace, care and love.😭

Raghav asking Pallavi to choose between him and the Trashmukhs describes his feelings well, that he truly wants to repent for his deeds and fill her life with happiness but at the same time, doesn't want to leave her without a choice. He is so ashamed that doesn't even want to look her in eye, and silently walks away, hoping that she give him a last chance, so that he can make life colourful for both of them.❤️

You are an awesome writer ; and an expert in writing angsty ones.🤩❤💙

Are you continuing it? You should really consider writing the third part too.😳

Love,

Trista.❤

Chosen, the second last OS I wrote is a continuation of the drabble 'choice.'

You can get the link from first page.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Waaaw! I have literally no words!😳👏

It was Enticing, Angsty, Alluring, Fascinating, Poignant , and Solitary at the same time!❤️

Loved how you described Raghav's loneliness in the first drabble. I straight up felt his pain ; visualizing him sitting on the dining table, aloof with no one to accompany him, understand him, care for him, talk to him. I would never ever want to see him like this 😭

"Raghav Rao doesn't care about these things. He was alone, he is alone and he will be alone." His own words felt venom to himself and he walked away, the dinner long forgotten. - These lines are the proof that how it took him a moment of misunderstanding to become a loner to a lonely man surrounded with guilt ; and it has truly become a slow, deathly poison to him.

Btw, was the person hiding behind the curtains Pallavi🤔? I really hope that it's her.

I'm back after reading the 2nd one.😆

Raghav's pain in the first drabble and his tendency to fight with his guilt in the second one was described so well!

I know this is a totally different drabble but who was that man Pallavi seeked comfort and solace from?🤔

Pallavi staying in a guest room ; making it her home and Raghav visiting the room after 6 months ; and him calling 'Pallavi' seemed strange to him ; which was contrary to the banters and rapport they had for each other😒

"His eyes surveyed the room abstractedly looking for something, one more photo frame but found nothing." - This line explains that though he is in contempt and thinks that he doesn't deserve her, deep down he still craves for her acceptance and love ; and he is willing to do anything to experience that moment of peace, care and love.😭

Raghav asking Pallavi to choose between him and the Trashmukhs describes his feelings well, that he truly wants to repent for his deeds and fill her life with happiness but at the same time, doesn't want to leave her without a choice. He is so ashamed that doesn't even want to look her in eye, and silently walks away, hoping that she give him a last chance, so that he can make life colourful for both of them.❤️

You are an awesome writer ; and an expert in writing angsty ones.🤩❤💙

Are you continuing it? You should really consider writing the third part too.😳

Love,

Trista.❤

Thank you so much Trista. 🤗

That long comment is a treat, I was so happy when I saw it that I couldn't respond, that's why I left a small msg about the chosen. I don't know what should I say even now. Thanks alot.

I think many guessed the woman correctly but missed the man in second. Can't say anything now. I will be adding more drabbles to it, so.

We will wait. 😆