#2 MineilSS: Hear my Silence PART-2 - Page 9

Lovely birthday

Cant believe dr Ashok’s warning

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Thanks alot dear....glad u loved it❤️

Yeah ....something stored surely (will try though I'm not as good as Anjali in giving twists and turns like in don jaan or perfectionist ) I think this story is more about to enjoy those little things we do in love . That Innocence, rawness , purity. Hopefully Isha won't threaten it🤣.

I am.more keen on factual story always rather than character building and playing with those small nuances and subtleties in which you are an expert.

You write it very well. In fact you are that book writer in true sense and I have figured out over the time that screen writing is more my thing.

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

You are hidden writer or say in @zalimas words chhupa rustam you are and @anjali will also agree with us here and we all love this innocent,rawness ,purity phases we never knew you were this talented ,skilfull ( read in all ways 🤣)

Ya thats the usp of khushi's story. She brings out feelings so well. I like her way of portraying everything even the choice of her words😆

I could imagine SouNoor.. imagine their expressions beautifully written

Originally posted by: Krithzz

I could imagine SouNoor.. imagine their expressions beautifully written

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Ya thats the usp of khushi's story. She brings out feelings so well. I like her way of portraying everything even the choice of her words😆

Shukriyaa rani sa🤗

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

I am.more keen on factual story always rather than character building and playing with those small nuances and subtleties in which you are an expert.

You write it very well. In fact you are that book writer in true sense and I have figured out over the time that screen writing is more my thing.

Yeahh....u r actually an amazing screen writer...the way u plots twists nd brings out them ....the way join all the loop ends at the end is just beyond words...

Main to koi twist sochti hu fir jb tk story m wo twist execute krne k tym aata h main khud hi bore ho jati h...🤣 u know i get bore of things really easily🤣

But the way u maintain the flow of stories with such patience is really appreciable...❤️

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

padh liya

jaldi commentenge😆

Originally posted by: su_94

Everything is going beautiful. Looks like you will drop a bomb soon😆

Loved those tiny mannerisms of MiNeil it's them

Yeahh these tiny mannerisms connects them to tht childhood mineil....makes them them😆❤️

MiNeil all those little things you write it in beautiful way . Just like @Anjali said as if we are reading book. I remember even @zalima said same during home coming FF that was another beautiful work of yours. I like that innocence,rawness,purity , being childish in natural way