#2 MineilSS: Hear my Silence PART-2 - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi1311

etnii tarifff😆 Ye sb to main aapke liye kahne wali thi...

Shukriyaa rani sa🤗


You deserve it🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

MiNeil all those little things you write it in beautiful way . Just like @Anjali said as if we are reading book. I remember even @zalima said same during home coming FF that was another beautiful work of yours. I like that innocence,rawness,purity , being childish in natural way

thanks alot dear for these beautiful words...really added stars to my day🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Read from the starting, I almost forgot about the first chapter as you uploaded it long ago😆

In first part gave the vibe that long distance giving tough time to mineil. May be all is not well or the charm is fading away in between all the calls, keeping up to time. Love is there for sure but distance is too long to keep them going on.

But you surprised us in latwr parts. Neil was acting indifferent just to give surprise to mini and the best part was mini guessed his intentions instead of doubting him. True lovers they are.❤️


Positive ashok was good. I liked his caring attitude towards mini.

And neil...i love how he pampers mini but not show it off, stays in attitude, act indifferent and cool but truth is he is a big bowl of mush from inside.😆

Just love love love these two. And all credit goes to you, the way you have build up their character, those small beautiful things and mannerisms, their emotions are so pure and pristine that we cant help but feel connected to them and more than them ita us who fear what if any problem comes their way and separate them. This is the magic of your writing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Read from the starting, I almost forgot about the first chapter as you uploaded it long ago😆

In first part gave the vibe that long distance giving tough time to mineil. May be all is not well or the charm is fading away in between all the calls, keeping up to time. Love is there for sure but distance is too long to keep them going on.

But you surprised us in latwr parts. Neil was acting indifferent just to give surprise to mini and the best part was mini guessed his intentions instead of doubting him. True lovers they are.❤️


Positive ashok was good. I liked his caring attitude towards mini.

And neil...i love how he pampers mini but not show it off, stays in attitude, act indifferent and cool but truth is he is a big bowl of mush from inside.😆

Just love love love these two. And all credit goes to you, the way you have build up their character, those small beautiful things and mannerisms, their emotions are so pure and pristine that we cant help but feel connected to them and more than them ita us who fear what if any problem comes their way and separate them. This is the magic of your writing.

omg!!! Thanks alot for these beautiful words anjali...

@bold...really means a ton...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Khushi ..we know you are busy with doc but say him to take a break and update for us 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Khushi ..we know you are busy with doc but say him to take a break and update for us 🤣

Looks like she will be back as bride this time

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krithzz

Looks like she will be back as bride this time

🤣 🤣 never know along with wedding she might come with Good news also

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

🤣 🤣 never know along with wedding she might come with Good news also

Arre bahut aage pahuch gaye🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Khushi ..we know you are busy with doc but say him to take a break and update for us 🤣

Doctor doctor khel rahe honge...private mein🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Doctor doctor khel rahe honge...private mein🤣🤣🤣

🤣 now we understand doctor Neil mini story is inspiration of whom☺️🤣

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