RaghVi FF : Nightmare - Page 8

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Just a point. Whole story was pre planned before chapter 1. No changes. I usually like to keep stories for myself just post a small part as OS due to time constrains. But this seemed like story to give it a go. So here it is.

Thought as much; as right after the first chapter, you told me ‘But if u read attentively... its made clear what is what.’

The story is holding on to the suspense! And that is huge success to your way of penning it. Waiting to read it all together, when this journey comes to a close.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

It is like trying to run a race with the story, to see if we read just the words or more than what it conveys.

In effect, can we read between the lines! And it gets challenging when the author places red-herrings knowingly; or like in this case, divulge what is necessary.

A step by step reveal. In every step, all the prior assumptions goes for a toss, unless, one is shrewd and picking on the bits that lay here and there.

Is it ok to share, if you have a crux defined (which will not change) and working around it by layering it? In other words, you are not trying to outsmart yourself by adding a spin every time and then seeing what you can do with it?

So true Priyam.

This writer is testing my intelligence. 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I'm wondering why Onion is your favorite, tears or mystery?

Loved your version Keechu, on captivity.

I would have crossed silently. But, this line about onions, it didnt let me to. Loved. ❤️

I will be watching the space, to know the answer. And I vote NO to ‘both’. 😂

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I loved this line. "the unspoken words are the reason for various ruins in the museum of life known as world." and so true.

Raghav is the ruin of life so as Pallavi since there is no communication. I liked how you added her that confession after this. I doubt if Pallavi believes this though. If she does then she wouldn't have gone nervous after her confession. She was apprehensive of her unspoken becoming spoken.

I still believe that something happened to Pallavi, and Raghav is responsible or are you playing an amnesia card? Why a Sarika entered?

"You will be free from this life of captivity"

I found this line so fascinating when I think about the previous chapters. If I'm right then, in present Raghav is emotionally kept captive by Pallavi and in past she was kept captive by Raghav physically. Wow! I'm waiting to see how this unfolds.

And thank you so much for taking my suggestion and for giving this mostly in descriptive way.

Now I'm wondering why Onion is your favorite, tears or mystery? Or was that you being sarcastic?

Thanx. And of all the questions I can answer the last one. I wasn't sarcastic but y I like onion is open for guessing.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

So true Priyam.

This writer is testing my intelligence. 😆

Your case seems better - ‘testing the intelligence’.

In mine, I feel it is more of ‘questioning my intelligence’. 😂🤪🙄

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Thought as much; as right after the first chapter, you told me ‘But if u read attentively... its made clear what is what.’

The story is holding on to the suspense! And that is huge success to your way of penning it. Waiting to read it all together, when this journey comes to a close.

I myself m curious how it will come out as a single read. U guys r pushing me towards being sadistic and stopping after next chapter.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

So true Priyam.

This writer is testing my intelligence. 😆

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Originally posted by: Prriyam

Your case seems better - ‘testing the intelligence’.

In mine, I feel it is more of ‘questioning my intelligence’. 😂🤪🙄

So much to say.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Your case seems better - ‘testing the intelligence’.

In mine, I feel it is more of ‘questioning my intelligence’. 😂🤪🙄

I like to believe that I'm intelligent. Thank you so much. 🤪

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I myself m curious how it will come out as a single read. U guys r pushing me towards being sadistic and stopping after next chapter.

Really? What was done now? 😲 Appreciating what is dished out, when did it stop being fun?
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