Chipkali Ka Birthday - Shivi TS ( PART 2 - PG 2)

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So basically I will start this story from Shiva getting money from Rasik Bhai and Rishita catching him. I have no clue as of why Shiva have taken money but I will just write what I feel.

( Here Rishita is positive)

At Night Rishita goes into the room of Shiva and Raavi and find bag full of money. As she turns she collides with Shiva.

Rishita : Shiva yeh kya hain? Aur tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hain?

Shiva: Bhabhi voh

Rishita : Voh kya Shiva? Itne paiso ki zarurat kis cheez ke liye?

Shiva: Iss paiso se mein Mami ke liye naye kangan lene wala tha

Rishita : Kyun?

Shiva: Voh Mami meri insult kare chalega par inn sab mein Raavi ki insult ho rahi hain jo mein nahi dekh sakta. Isliye.

Rishita : Par Shiva

Shiva: Bhabhi please aapko meri kasam kisi ko iske baare mein mat batana.

Rishita keeps the bag and leaves the room. Shiva sits down on bed and closes his eyes. As Shiva closes his eyes he sees Raavi.

Shiva: Yeh chipkali mera peecha kabhi chodegi hi nahi. Gadheri kahin ki.

Next morning when Shiva comes to pick Raavi. He hands over new bangles to Prafulla and Prafulla hands him Suman's bangles. At first Prafulla gets happy seeing the bangles but then looks at Raavi who is looking at Shiva with happy face.

Prafulla : Ae Shiva, hamari dushmani continue rahegi par tu yeh kangan Raavi ko pehna de. Mein chahti hoon yeh kangan tu mere saamne Raavi ko pehna. Aur kisiko nahi

Shiva takes bangles and slowly holds her hand. He makes her wear bangles by looking at her. She could feel his gaze on her. So she looked down. As his hands touched hers she closed her eyes. Shiva noticed that. Shiva and Dev then take back Raavi and Rishita to haveli. Here Dhara Gautam Krish and Suman are planning surprise party for Raavi as instructed by Shiva as its Raavi's birthday the next day.

Shiva is in his room when Raavi comes infront of him and hands him a bag.

Shiva: Kya hain yeh?

Raavi: Khol

Shiva opens it and finds money in it and then looks at her and finds her hands empty.

Shiva: Tune kangan bech diye. Kyun? Yaad nahi Mami ne kya bola tha. Aur yeh tu paise mujhe kyun de rahi hain

Raavi: Mujhe Rishita ne sab bataya. Tu yeh paise jaake Rasik Bhai ko de aur property ke papers leke aa. Pandya Store ka khulna important hain. Kangan nahi. Aur vaise bhi Suman kaki ko apne kangan mil gaye na.

Shiva looks at her proudly and smiles.

Raavi turns to leave when Shiva pulls her back and she stumbles upon the mat and falls on him. He holds her waist.

Raavi: Yeh kya tha?

Shiva: Tujhe Thank You bolna tha.

Both share an eye lock and Raavi stands up. Shiva looks at her.

Raavi : Ab ghoorna bandh kar aur ja. Aaj maine tere liye teri favourite sabzi banayi hain.

Shiva: Kyun?

Raavi: Bas Aise hi. Tu jaa na.

Shiva leaves and returns the money to Rasik Bhai and brings back property paper and keeps it back in Dhara's cupboard. All had decided that no one would wish Raavi till next evening and pretend that they had forgotten her birthday. After dinner Shiva goes into the room and sleeps.

Raavi : Shiva tu so raha hain?

Shiva: Log mostly bed pe sote hi hain. Kyun tera kuch aur iraada hain karne ka.

Shiva swiftly sits up and leans closer to her.Raavi gulps down seeing him close. Shiva goes more closer to her , holds her arms and ask her same question again. Raavi realise this and fumbles to speak.

Raavi : Kya? Mein.. mein bas puch rahi thi.

Shiva: Haan kal bahot kaam hain. Time hi nahi hain kal toh.

Raavi : Tu kal yaha nahi honewala?

Shiva: Haan kyun kal kuch hain kya?

Raavi : Haan . Mera matlab nahi. Kuch nahi hain chod jaane de.

She angrily turns her face and sleeps.

Raavi(mind): Iss gadhere ko mera birthday yaad hi nahi hain. I am sure baki sabko toh yaad hoga.

Clock strucks 12.

Shiva(mind): Happy Birthday Chipkali.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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amazing start ❤️

want to know how shiva will wish raavi ❤️

pls continue 😊

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Cutee start ❤️

Continue soon 🤗

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amazing start. excited for next part

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This was soo amazing…

Cant wait to read the next chapter.

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Happy that Rishita is positive here 🤗

So excited for Raavi's birthday celebration and how Shiva makes the day special for her ❤️

Waiting for next update

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Interesting start 🤗

Waiting for Shiva's surprise 🤪

Continue soon ❤️

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Nice hope even in show itna drama na ho

Excited to read about Shiva's plan for his Chipkali bday update asap

waiting for next chapter

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PART 2


Raavi wakes up in the morning and get dressed up. She wears a beautiful lavender palazzo pants and side cut top. She pairs it with beautiful earrings and matching bangles. She smiles widely.

Raavi : Mein toh best lag rahi hoon. Itna tayar dekh kar Shiva ko shayad yaad aa jaaye ki mera birthday hain.

She clicks some pictures of herself and looks at Shiva who is sleeping soundly. Raavi clicks his picture and leave. She excitedly goes down expecting everyone to wish her.

She bumps into Krish on the way.

Raavi : Krishhhh

Raavi smiles widely. Krish acts as if he is tired.

Krish: Aree bhabhi mein jaata hoon aaj bahot kaam hain. Aapko pata hain abhi mera test hain fir online class hain fir dukaan ke kaam se bahar jaana hain. Direct raat ko aaunga. Bahot late ho raha hain jaata hoon byee.

Raavi: Are Krish par.

Raavi gets upset as even Krish didn't wish her. She then bumps into Dhara who is in kitchen.

Dhara : Aree Raavi aaj kitni pyaari lag rahi hain tu. Ekdum sundar lage che.

Raavi : Thank you Dhara Di.

Raavi smiles from ear to ear as she thought Dhara knows about her birthday.

Dhara : Vese aaj kyun itni tayar huyi? Aaj kuch hain kya?

Raavi's face falls flat as Dhara ask her this question.

Raavi : Kuch nahi hain Dhara Di. Bas Aise hi.

Dhara gets engrossed in her chores. Raavi is standing still when Dev and Gautam come there. Raavi thought Dev might definitely remember her birthday because he has been his childhood best friend.

Gautam : Dhara mein aur Dev dukaan ke kaam se bahar ja rahe hain, shayad aate aate late ho jaayega.

Dev : Ha Bhabhi shayad raat toh ho hi jaayegi aate aate.

Dhara nods and both leave. Raavi looks at them with shocked expression. Raavi didn't expect Rishita to remember her birthday because she was new to the family and she barely knew Raavi. Raavi sadly goes away from haveli and sits on the bench. Prafulla comes there along with Anita.

Prafulla : Ae Raavi beta, Happy Birthday beta.

Anita : Happy Birthday Raavi.

Anita hug Raavi. Raavi hug her back and cries.

Anita : Raavi kya hua?

Raavi : Anita di kisiko mera birthday yaad nahi. Shiva ko bhi nahi.

Anita : Shiva ko tera birthday kyun yaad hoga?

Raavi : Usse toh yaad hona hi chahiye voh mera pati hain.

Raavi folds her hand and angrily looks away.

Prafulla : Haaye meri bachi ko birthday ke din rula diya. Raavi ek kaam kar tu aaj hamare saath chal. Aaj ke din hamare udhar reh. Kal subah aa jaana.

Anita : Haa humne tere liye cake banaya hain. Aur tera favourite khaana bhi.

Raavi is upset. She expected that all might remember her birthday but no one remembered her birthday. She half heartedly informed Dhara that she is going to stay with Prafulla and Anita for a day. Dhara didn't bother to ask her further. She just nodded. Raavi went into her room and bumped into Shiva who had just woke up.

Raavi angrily removed her some clothes and threw it on bed. She tried to remove the bag which was above the cupboard. Shiva came from behind and removed the bag for her.

Raavi took it from his hands and angrily stuffed all the clothes.

Shiva : Kaha chali?

Raavi : Maami ke saath rehne ja rahi hoon ek din ke liye

Shiva : Bas ek din.

Raavi looks at him with shocked face.

Raavi : Theek hain ab toh ek hafte tak nahi aaungi mein. Enjoy karle apni freedom.

She took the bag and went away. Shiva called everyone and informed them that Raavi had went away and now they could do decoration. Everyone quickly gathered and started the preparation.

On the other hand Prafulla made Raavi cut the cake. Raavi smiled just for her sake. She went into her room and sit by the window crying.

Raavi : Kisiko meri padi nahi. Koi mere se pyaar karta hi nahi hain. Mera birthday sab bhul gaye. Shiva toh khush haina mujhse dur hokar toh ab mein usse baat bhi nahi karungi. Gadhera kahin ka.

Raavi was sobbing and soon she slept by window's support. It was evening when Raavi felt something on her eyes. It was a cloth. She started doing her kung fu steps to scare away whoever it was.

Raavi : Oh hello? Kon ho? Chod mujhe? Aankh pe patti kyun bandhi hain?

Soon her leg was lifted and she was in his arms.

Raavi : Shiva tu yaha kya kar raha hain?

Shiva : Tujhe kidnap karne aaya hoon. Aur tujhe kaise pata chala mein hoon?

Raavi : Bas pata chal gaya.

The whole way Raavi was irritating him with her silly questions and he tried not to answer her. He kept her down, stood behind her back, huskily whispered in her ear.

Shiva : HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHIPKALI

He removed the blindfold.

Everyone : Surprise!!!!

She was stunned to see everyone. All were decked up with a big cake on centre. There were lighting and lamps all around. Her favourite lily flower bouquet at the centre. Her all photos tied with thread. Back was hugely written 'HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAAVI'. She smiled widely.

Raavi : Aap sabko mera birthday yaad tha?

Shiva : Tera birthday koi bhul sakta hain kya? Ek mahine pehle se hi tera broadcast chalu ho jaata hain.

Raavi gives him a look.

Krish : Haan aur vese bhi aap toh meri sabse pyaari bhabhi ho na. Aapka birthday kaise bhul sakta hain koi.

Rishita : Oh hello mein bhi tumhari bhabhi hoon.

Krish : Aree bhabhi aapka birthday aayega tab aapki bhi taarif karunga mein. Thoda difficult hoga par thik hain kar lunga.

All laugh. Raavi greets everyone with smile. All wish her and compliments her on how beautiful she is looking. Shiva clicks her pictures.

Dhara : Shiva, Raavi kitni sundar lag rahi haina?

Raavi proudly flips her hair.

Shiva : Haan ekdum bandariya jaisi. Aaj hi maine iske dosto ko dekha ped par.

Raavi glares at him.

Raavi : Tujhe taarif karni aati nahi hain toh mat kar. Sabne bola mein sundar dikh rahi hoon. Toh tere na bolne se kuch farak nahi padta.

Anita : Acha subah toh bol rahi thi Shiva tera pati hain. Usne tujhe wish kaise nahi kiya. Tu usse bahot naraz hain. Usne tujhe wish nahi kiya toh tu upset ho gai. Aur ab bol rahi hain farak nahi padta.

Shiva smirks. Raavi looks at Anita.

Raavi : Secrecy naam ki bhi cheez hoti hain Anita di.

Everyone laugh. Shiva looks at her face which has become red like tomato due to embarrassment. Gautam tells Raavi to cut the cake. Raavi looks at Shiva who is standing behind. Shiva notices this and comes and stand beside her. Raavi smiles and cut the cake. Unknowingly her hands first reach Shiva only. He looks at her while she feeds him. He holds her hand and make her feed herself.

Krish : Mera number kab aayega Raavi bhabhi? Aap toh Shiva se nazar hata hi nahi rahe ho.

This results him in getting a smack on head from Gautam. All eat cake, talk and then go into their respective rooms. Raavi enters and see Shiva lazily lying on bed scrolling through pictures. Raavi goes to him and start beating him.

Raavi : Kitna rulaya mujhe. Birthday ke din aisa koi rulata hain.

Shiva holds her hand and pulls her towards him.

Shiva : Sorry

Raavi adores how cutely he said sorry.

Raavi: Ek min yeh tere phone mein mere photo. Tune photo kheeche mere dikha.

Raavi tries to take his phone. He throws his hand in air.

Shiva : Nahi mein nahi dikhanewala.

Raavi : Please Please Please.

Shiva : Nahi

Raavi : Theek hain phir maine bhi jo tera photo liya haina voh social media pe daal dungi.

Raavi shows him his sleeping photo.

Shiva : Delete kar abhi ke abhi.

Raavi : Tu photos dikha delete kar dungi.

Shiva shows her pictures but then she refuse to delete his picture.

Shiva : Kyun delete nahi karna tujhe?

Raavi : Kyunki kitna cute photo hain.

Raavi realizes what she spoke and turns away. Shiva comes behind her. He puts all her hair on one side.Raavi shuts her eyes. Shiva makes her wear a simple pendant. Raavi looks at it. Shiva bends down and tightens the hook with the help of teeth. Raavi breathes heavily. Shiva notices this and smiles.

Shiva : Mere taraf se tere liye gift. Kaisa hain?

Raavi : Bahot hi pyaara. Thank you.

Both smile seeing each other.

Raavi : Vese mein sach mein bandariya dikh rahi hoon?

Shiva : Mere kuch bolne se farak padega tujhe?

Raavi : Hmm Haan

Shiva : Bahot achi lag rahi hain.

Raavi smiles.

Shiva : Kaash aisa mein bol sakta.

Shiva laughs. Raavi turns to leave when Shiva holds her hand and pulls her back.

Shiva : Bahot hi pyaari dikh rahi hain.

Shiva leaves her and smiles looking at her blushing face. Shiva turns to leave.

Raavi : Shiva ruk

Raavi comes near him.

Raavi : Tera return gift lekar ja.

Raavi quickly kisses him on his cheek and leaves the room smiling leaving behind a Clueless Shiva.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Haaye

Kitna pyaara birthday ❤️

Awesome update 👏

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