Fatejo - meri pyari tejo

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Posted: 4 years ago
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A continuation from the first move


10am

Sunlight piercing through the thin pink curtains . Fateh woke up instantly . Looked around . No sign of tejo

Oh god ! What have i done

Frowning on his past action the day before

She will not leave me for the self made prophecy of the padosi . Tks to babuji for the bad joke played upon him which made him took a drastic step

How to face her now ? Will she forgive me or decide to leave me coz of my crazy deed


Dress in blue collar shirt and blue jeans he sat at the dining table swallowing hard on his breakfast looking down at his plate and barely looking upfront feeling embarassed faced by blushing looks given by family members . Virks found out. Mahi was the eye witness of that very moment as she walked into their room to borrow tejos hair dryer

Grandparents blushing. Mahi grinning .Nimmo and amrik annoyed and Gurpreet expressionless . Mahi said out loudly teasing bhabhi toh aaj jeldi college key liye nikal geyi without breakfast. He remained silent. Pretended not concern. Deep inside he was hurt. She must be hungry. He went up to the terrace to do push ups


12pm

Her slim fingers running towards her students assigments in the staff room . Annoyed with his action

It was disturbing . Never thought for once he will do that And stomach growling indicating hunger. She grabbed a burger at the canteen

At 1pm he packed chicken briyani with vege kurma and fresh orange juice from a restaurant . A lunch treat for her with two verbal letter words i am sorry

He parked the white innova at the entrance gate waited impatiently for an hour. She came finally walking towards him in a conversation with a colleague ms sneha . They waved as sneha walked towards her scootie. She saw him

Ageya peti dev ji . Whats next ? What is he upto now?

He was smiling . His eyes still set on her through his sun glasses and waved

She walked past his innova and stopped an auto to fetch het home . He frowned . Itna gussa ?

He decided to spend the time with a friend and ended up eating the lunch he bought for her


10pm

As fateh walked into the living room babuji and dadi were watching tv and dadi started to chat with her hubby pretending to give her grandson a hint to solve his issues with wifey.

Apko yaad hai jab mey apsey neraz hoti thi toh aap chitthi liktey tey meri pyari bindu and all that

Babuji smiled and understood . Haan voh filmi wali line likh ker aur meri pyari bindu from film padosan kishore ka superhit gaana . Voh tera favourite hai na

Yess ! A letter. Fateh ran up to his room excitedly

Dadi asked . Did he understand ?

Babuji replied . Dont worry he s a smart boy


He frowned as he entered the room. She was sleeping on the couch. Red signal given

I am very angry with u

A pen and a note then he wrote

Meri pyari bindu

Naah ! She will think i have a gf named bindu and next she will pack her things and leave. Cant take the risk

So decided Meri pyari tejo. Would be it

Ji ran away after he took the unexpected move

Meri pyari tejo

Aek pal ki kushi key liye aek pal ka gham sehna ped raha hai. Andar sey jel raha hun bahar sey dhuva nikal reha hai. Vo sath vachan ki kasam hai phirsey galti nehin karunga per aur agar tu green light deti hai na toh peti hokar tumhey kush rekhunga. Jahan jahan bolegi vahan karunga

Fateh with his filmi style didnt realise what was written

Passed the letter to mahi who voluntered as a postwoman on a condition of ice creams treats

As he left she opened it excitedly and then frowned. A total blunder. She cant edit. Afraid he will be furious

Let it be . The next morning she passed it to tejo and ran asap from the room


At 2 pm he was already at the college gate. She arrived and ignored . Took the auto instead. He was puzzled .

Went to his friends place who advised dont give up.

At 11pm sat on his bed second note on the way

She was sleeping soundly .

Meri pyari tejo

Ped podhey hil dhul rehey hain tez hawayon key asar sey

Bahar rang layi hai pyara sa mausam dohrah raha hai key ao aur mujhey puri terah sey explore karo

And went on adding two of rafi hit numbers

Aaj mausam bedha beimaan hai

Anney wala koi tufan hai


Anney se uskey aye bahar

Jane sey uskey jaye bahar

Badi mastani hai meri mehbooba

Meri zindagani hai meri mehbooba


And passed on to mahi along with a white rose bouquet

Mahi frowned again as she read.


9am

He woke up instantly to check the dustbin. Thank god she didnt throw the flowers. Excited maybe she will give in this time . Its time to explore the mausam. Take her out for a ride


2pm

Dressed in a leather black jacket and brown jeans he looked dashing . Eyes wandering . Where is she?

A message pop up from jasmin

A selfie with message wriiten going on a date today will send pics later

Fateh switched off his phone . For two days those messages continued to be sent and it was annoying . His mind was on mission biwi pethao now. One left him at the mandap now hoping this one doesnt do the same

There she was

walking towards his car with a small polithene in her rite hand . He was happy. Watching her through his sun glasses .oh how sweet She purchased a gift for me. Leaning from the drivers seat he pushed open the door for her to sit

Unfortunately she turned away and stood in front of his car facing him. Five tomatoes instantly smashed one after the other on the wind screen . Then stopped an auto and left

He frowned once again. Upon returning home in the evening found out from mahi that the roses were donated to a roadside beggar who sold it for double price


10pm

The third note

Meri pyari tejo

I am sorry for everything . Pls forgive me . It was not deliberately done though


When he handed to mahi she smiled and said

Bhai this is what u should have written before

He sighed and went to sleep.


2pm

Waited outside the college gate. She ignored as usual and took the auto instead.

He was so frustrated. This is a real hard headed one

God why did i marry her and now only u can help me pls


9pm

Mahi came to see him sitting at the porch listening to soft music and said

Bhai i have a solution . Get a third party involved. Sat narayan swamiji ki katha and bribe pandit to discuss on marital bonds. Put some sense into her head. She will give in

Great idea. The next morning was a saturday

He called a known pandit and bribed 2 lakh rs for the deed. Pandit agreed and rang up kusbeer to do a poja to remove all bad omen. Kushbeer agreed as well and ask for the muhurat. Pandit replied excitedly muhurat hi muhurat hai aj ka din bahut shubh hai. Decided poja at 6 pm . And guest list prepared Babuji requested kushbeer to invite sandhus as well. To mend relationships and tejo will be delighted as well. Nimmo interrupted and was told to shut her mouth by dadi


6pm

Panditji started the katha and went on for about 30 min

Tejo was seated next to her mom. Fateh was annoyed

Pandit smiled indicating i will handle it smoothly

Dont worry. After katha completed he started on the marital bond but before that he requested tejo to sit next to fateh . She had no choice coz her family was present

Pandit ji started

Sat pheron key sat janam ko aek bandhan ki dor mey bandhey geye agni ko sakshi maan ker us uperwaley ka sabsey beda tofa hai hum manushon key liye. Ledayi jhegdey toh aksar peti petni ka normal routine hai jisko kiye bina digestion kharab ho jata hai

Aksar ziada gelti peti ki hoti hai kyunkey shadi key baad sab admi ka dimag kam karna bend kardeta hai. Isliye petni ko chahiye apney peti ki galti ko nezar andaz karkey usko maaf kiya jai. Isi mey petni ki samaj dhari hai

Ab bhagwan vishnu ko hi dekhlo. Chale geye pataal apni paanch saliyoon key pas jo key unko apna peti maanti thi

Phir bhi laxmi mata ney unko maaf kardiya aur mahadev ko ageya di unko wapas lane ke liye

Isliye gelti bhagwan sey bhi to hoti hai .

Vivah toh vivah hota hai chahey vo majburi mey kyun na ho . Uperwale ki teref sey usko aek tofa samajlo aur apna apna dharam nibhao.

He went on for another 10 mims and finally did the closure

Pati permeshwar hota hai lekin do latey pedney ke baad permeshwar sey gulam benjata hai. Petni key uper depend hota hai key petni usko kya samajti hai


Everyone sighed a relief as he went into a mute phase.

Virks grinning coz they knew fateh was behind. Sandhus a little confused but was happy that SIL will get some sense from pandit ka gyaan . Little did they know SIL bribed pandit and their own daughter was the target


Dinner served by mahi and fateh as chipku assistant Food catered from THE PUNJAB DEY JATH PUTH DESI MARKEY A ONE.

Food was delicious as per the title of the dabba. Sandhus were happy to see fateh helping tejo not aware of his biwi pathao mission. Kushbeer spill the beans as they were about to leave and rupi assured to talk to tejo

They left happily for the new journey of their beloved daughter and SIL


9pm living room

All guests left. Virks sitting down chatting. Kushbeer walks in with a wide smile

Handed over a train ticket to nimmo and said loudly

Panditji advised bad omen to be removed immediately

All virks happy finally . Nimmo looked at gurpreet and she turned away hinting indirectly

I cant help u otherwise i will be thrown out as well.

Nimmo rcvd exit note of 48 hrs to do last minute shopping and packing her luggage. Kushbeer continued saying

Ur husband left u long back and now he needs u. You can always return but on a holiday package of 3 days 2 nites and not more

You will be cordially invited to the next marriage function where u could stay longer depending on the manpower required.

Nimmo ran to her room and cried


9pm in the kitchen

Fateh washing dishes with tejo standing behind wiping them . He decided to take a selfie as she was not paying attention. With his lips in a smooch posture and right thumb pointing at the back towards tejo he clicked the picture. Well she didnt utter a word past few days perhaps the snap would enlighten her mood.


At 10 pm he walked towards his room. Mahi came running. Will go and buy ice cream now. He asked for the reason.

Bhabi bed pey transfer ho geyi hai. He rushed to have a look. She was sleeping soundly on her side of the bed.

He sighed a relief

Finally green signal

I have forgiven u

He grinned and said make it double.

Mahi asked for the reason

He took out his phone from his left pocket and sent the selfie he clicked moments ago to jasmin with a message written beneath

HUM WOH AEK KAMREY MEY BAND HO AUR CHABI KHO JAYE

SUHANI RAAT APNI BEGUM SEHBA KEY SAAT

VIDEO BENAKER BHEJU GA

and press the sent button

Mahi gave a high five laughing


Jssmin sitting on her bed on a verge to click her picture to be sent to him stopped when his message pops in. She was excited. Oh he will be so sorry now

Little did she realise she was going to get a hard blow

She checked through its details

Seconds later jasmin sandhu fall unconscious on the ground


THE END


I was reluctant to write . Current story frustating. We all know. Perhaps this will be my final write up for this show. Need a break. Those who enjoyed reading this pls share ur comments on which part of this write up u would want makers to show onscreen coming tracks












































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hola dear!

I understand how you feel.

Even I am losing the bug to write.


Coming to your work...I loved it. I enjoy the way you write Fateh. Pyar ata hain uspe.

Someday I wish they show it. Biwi patao mission would be hilarious!

- Niki

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aww this was cute. Given how bad the current episodes are, I'm consoling myself with these OS's.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hola dear!

I understand how you feel.

Even I am losing the bug to write.


Coming to your work...I loved it. I enjoy the way you write Fateh. Pyar ata hain uspe.

Someday I wish they show it. Biwi patao mission would be hilarious!

- Niki


Tq dear for appreciating

Its better to take a break for a while at least

For on screen i would want nimmo exit and fateh sending jasmin his selfie with tejo

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Aww this was cute. Given how bad the current episodes are, I'm consoling myself with these OS's.


Tq dear

Yes current episodes annoying so these os will comfort us all

Makers should pay a visit to IF and read all of our

os

Mine yours nikkis and others to get some creativity for their story

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