SS - My name is HT012, NOT SPONGE! Part 12 - Pg 29 - Updt 22 08 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go. And now I'm conscious of my own writing.💔😆 Congratulations and Thankyou🤣

What a wonderful writer you are👏👏

What a command over language, narration and characterisation, not just that of Sai and Virat but also of HT.

I love how our Central character grew to like our Sairat. And it's amazing that he's the one who's the smartest in the room😆

I know that HT was talking about Virat, but I could literally see all the emotions that Neil portrays on screen with finesse.

He literally makes Virat look like a gone case😆

And you did the same through your words.👏

You are a medical professional, I'm assuming, because of the medical space command that oozes out of your narrative. There was medical jargon and I appreciate that you didn't make it too difficult to understand for readers who are not from that profession (like me😆)

This is so wonderful. Witty, free-flowing yet tight and brisk; and sprinkled with smart humour.

Thankyou so much for writing this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing chapter 😍😍

No matter what HT is loving Sai and Virat ❤️❤️

HT now even know of their nicknames 🥰🥰

Loved it, update soon ❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Read all the parts in one go. And now I'm conscious of my own writing.💔😆 Congratulations and Thankyou🤣

What a wonderful writer you are👏👏

What a command over language, narration and characterisation, not just that of Sai and Virat but also of HT.

I love how our Central character grew to like our Sairat. And it's amazing that he's the one who's the smartest in the room😆

I know that HT was talking about Virat, but I could literally see all the emotions that Neil portrays on screen with finesse.

He literally makes Virat look like a gone case😆

And you did the same through your words.👏

You are a medical professional, I'm assuming, because of the medical space command that oozes out of your narrative. There was medical jargon and I appreciate that you didn't make it too difficult to understand for readers who are not from that profession (like me😆)

This is so wonderful. Witty, free-flowing yet tight and brisk; and sprinkled with smart humour.

Thankyou so much for writing this.


Oh wow! That's really high praise coming from a fellow author!

Thanks a ton for those kind, loving and motivating words dear!

And no, I'm not a medical professional, I'm an Architect actually. But both parents are doctors ,so I grew up listening to the jargon and running around hospitals, that helps.

I'm an author over at IPKKND forum since 2012, but this the first time I've written from the point of view of a non-character and it was an experiment that is working out well so far 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks dear!!! And let me thank you for.your VMs!!! I'm in love with them!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AparnaRenu


Oh wow! That's really high praise coming from a fellow author!

Thanks a ton for those kind, loving and motivating words dear!

And no, I'm not a medical professional, I'm an Architect actually. But both parents are doctors ,so I grew up listening to the jargon and running around hospitals, that helps.

I'm an author over at IPKKND forum since 2012, but this the first time I've written from the point of view of a non-character and it was an experiment that is working out well so far 🥰

you're welcome. And your deserve all the praise.

You have been writing since 2012 and it shows in your work. The professionalism and finesse comes with experience and can be seen easily. And I could guess that you were on ipkknd forum, easily. And you know how😆

Your experiment is wonderful.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Today when I saw a HT in general ward, I got reminded of your SS.

Read 4th and 5th part in a go. So brilliantly written👏

Loved it❤️

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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Today when I saw a HT in general ward, I got reminded of your SS.

Read 4th and 5th part in a go. So brilliantly written👏

Loved it❤️


Oh wow!! The writer in me is doing a happy jig! Isse badhkar kya compliment mil sakta h! Thank you...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just read 3rd,4th and 5th in a go.

Gabbar and his baiko.

HT is attached to both now gone case.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Wow, I wish we could somehow borrow your HT, atleast I wish I could. This has better understanding of Viru amd Sai than any of us😆

This was a fabulous update❤️

lol, didi is actually considered didi by HT, sahi hai🤣

Amazing one this is.

Continue soon👏


Thanks Shristi!! HT is a smart professional... sahi pakad leta hai 😁

Aur Didi ko Virat ki Didi banane se badi beizzati kya ho sakti hai, h na? 😁😁🤭

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