Hi dearies,
Just made an attempt to write a light hearted story on ShiVi. I would like to write this story in present tense in conversation format. I feel that comedy timings can be appreciated well in conversation format. Please give your suggestions on this. No offence to anyone. This Story is just for fun. Hope you like this. Please share your thoughts. Thanks.
Part -1
In this story, Shiva and Raavi are in love with each other since many years. But they are yet to inform their respective families as Shiva is having an unmarried elder brother who is none other than our Dev and Raavi is having an unmarried elder sister Anitha whose marriage with Gautham was stopped by the latter’s mother. So ShiVi decided not to reveal about their love to their families till their elder siblings get married. In front of everyone ShiVi behave like Tom & Jerry and when no one is around they go into their Romeo & Juliet avatar.
On the other hand, Raavi’s mausi Prafulla is still obsessed with her childhood dream of Living in United States of America. She still keeps cursing her long time Ex-boy friend for breaking up with her while leaving for USA. Often Prafulla has a dream in which she sees her own statue in place of the Statue of Liberty in New York. So in order to fulfill her dream, Prafulla desperately keeps looking for NRI alliance for Raavi and Anitha. Prafulla’s mobile has almost all the matrimonial Apps and she got the paid membership in almost all the matrimonial sites. Searching for a suitable NRI boy for her daughters on matrimonial sites is Prafulla’s 24/7 duty/entertainment. She even cancelled Anitha’s marriage with Gowtham as he had expressed his inability to open a branch of Pandya Store in USA.
One fine day, Prafulla’s BhogiLal listens to her nonstop prayers by making an NRI groom send interest to Raavi’s profile on matrimonial site. Seeing the interest sent by the NRI groom, Prafulla becomes extremely happy and she imagines as if Statue of Liberty welcomes her with a namaste and moves away from her pedestal so that Prafulla can stand there holding her mobile above her head with her right hand and carry her VISA to USA in her left hand. She comes out of her trance and sends a reply to the NRI groom expressing her wish to take things forward. Further Prafulla immediately enrols herself for a Spoken English Course ‘SpeaK English with Confidence” on Coursera.
Raavi gets the shock of her life when Prafulla informs her about the latter’s doings on matrimonial site.
Raavi: Mausi ma! Mujse bina puche aap yesa kaise kar sakte?
Prafulla: arey kar sakte hai bhai...USA jaane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte
Raavi: aap pagal hogayi mausi ma! Is Umar me US jakar kya karna hai aap ko?
Prafulla: Is Umar kya? Itni bi buddi nahi hu. Agar bhogilal ki kripa hai tho US President bi ban sakthi hu. Waise US Presidents ke age profile nikalkar dekh, Phir tumhe sab samaj aajayga.
Raavi: mausi ma! Par mujhe koi NRI se shaadi nahi karni hai
Hearing Raavi’s words, Prafulla’s statue (which she imagined to be in the place of Statue of Liberty) breaks into trillion pieces and the resultant particles float in the air engulfing the New York city and darkness spreads everywhere including Somnath and the wind starts to blow fast brushing away the hair on the forehead of a hot guy in Pandya Store and thus the full face of our hero Shiva is revealed to us.
Hope you like it. Please suggest if I can continue with this story.
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