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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Okay...I have another...It's just ONE take on the PA track from this point...it could be the two of them alone anywhere...use your imagination...

"Prachi..."Milind whispered and Prachi felt a tug in her heart. He did not think she had heard him and the surprise was clear in his eyes. He felt like running but his legs felt like lead and he just stared at her. He couldn't do this...but he wanted answers.

Prachi did not know why Milind was looking at her with such intensity; she wondered why he had called out to her but Prachi's legs moved towards him involuntarily and had she not stopped herself, she would have collided against him. He was looking at her with such confusion but the hope shone through like a beacon. She opened her mouth to speak but the words had already flowed from his. "Kya tum Neev se pyaar karti ho?"

The question had struck her like an arrow and she stole her eyes away from him. She could not continue to look at him and turned, for if she did, she would not be able to say yes.

She felt his hand on her shoulder and her heartbeat quickened. Milind felt the goosebumps form across her under his touch and he bought her back towards him. He lowered his head, bringing his mouth closer to her ear. Prachi shook from the closeness of his body but Milind held her in place, he would not let her go without knowing, "Jawab dou Prachi..." he said as his breath fanned against her ear.

"Aap...aap..yeh sab kyun pooch rahe hain Milind...?" she stammered but his hold was unyielding and Prachi was afraid she would break soon. She had waited so long for him to hold her like this but now that he had, she was afraid. But he released her not long after; his own mind in turmoil. He did not have a right to ask her that, but why did he want to know? Why did he care?

He had expected her to leave but Prachi stood there, turning back to face him and in that moment he felt the overwhelming desire to gather her in his arms. She looked helpless and when she spoke, he could tell that she was trying hard not to show him her tears. "Aap ko kya farg padega Milind..." It had taken all her courage but she deserved answers too.

"Kya tum nahin jaanti Prachi? Kya tum mesoos nahin karti isse...yeh jou hamare beech hain..." he asked, seizing her shoulders again.

"Aisa kuch nahin hain Milind...hum dost hain...bas..."she trailed off but she was pleading with him to accept that, she could not risk harming him. Closing his eyes, Milind took a deep breath; when she had said the words, he felt as though she had slapped him. "Dost Prachi?...aisi becheni...aisa esaas...kya yehi dosti ke maine hote hain?"

She looked visibly shaken but Milind could not allow himself to let go of her. He wanted to hold her forever and his desires were overriding his sense of propriety. He leaned his forehead against hers in defeat and he felt Prachi's chest heave, she could no longer keep her tears from flowing and they fell thick and fast. "Engagement pe, tumhari aankhon main aasoon kyun the? Tumhare aasoon is baat ki gawahi dete hain ke tum khush nahin..."

"Aapko mere aasoon tou dikh gaye Milind...lekin aapne nazaar andaaz kar diya? Milind...mene aap ke taraf dekha bhi...kya aap ko kuch samaj nahin aaya? Aap kitni aasani se muje kissi aur ka hone dete...tou ye sab kya hain aaj?" her voiced was raised and the suddeness of her speech and accusation in her tone shocked Milind. He had been angry at her but he had not realised that she too could have the same sentiments. "Kya sun na chahte hain aap? Ke main aap se pyaar karti hoon? Haan karti hoon main pyaar...Milind...aapko apna pyaar tou nazar aaya...lekin mere aasoon ke peeche aap ke liye mera pyaar nazar nahin aaya..." but Prachi could not continue, Milind had pulled her to him with such force that she gasped and as she felt his arms wrap around her, she felt as though she had finally come home.



wow rima🤗.🤗..hope BT reads this thread
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
@ Sangs...finally you got to see Milsi in a bathing robe 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

@ Sangs...finally you got to see Milsi in a bathing robe 😆 😆

I know GD....My imaginations are running riot now!!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

I know GD....My imaginations are running riot now!!😆



I swear Sangs..I cant get over Shabbo's shower scene and him in a maroon bathing robe😍..that guy is hot😛..Panchi..go go..dont let him loose!😳
Edited by Grateful Dead - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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O.k..here is the scene...(When he still has PA)

Milind is watching prachi cook from the table. He slowly opened the refrigerator door and pulled a juice bottle. He sips the cold juice as he watches prachi from the corner of his eyes.

Prachi looks up and she is startled seeing Milind watching her. The onions she has been cutting with precision with a sharp knife cuts into her skin.

With a yelp she yanks and holds her hands and rushes to the sink.

"Prachi!!" he places the juice on the counter in a hurry and rushes towards her.

"First aid box kahan hai! Tera haath dikhao" he said in a hurry.

"Kuch nahi hai Milind. Theek ho jayega" Prachi said in a wobbly smile. "Mein kuch sooch rahi thi...isiliyae yeh saab..." she continued...

"Hoon nikal raha hai....First aid box kahan hai" he asked flustered at seeing so much blood.

"Milind, It's o.k.." Before she could say anything he put her fingers in his mouth and sucked it.

Prachi was standing against the sink and as her eyes closed Milind automatically let go of her hands from his mouth and slowly traced the hair that had fallen across her cheeks.

"You are going to faint..." saying he lifts her up and carries her to the chair. Once she is sitting he gets her a glass of juice of her to drink.

Ayesha comes there and sees all this.
Edited by panache - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead



I swear Sangs..I cant get over Shabbo's shower scene and him in a maroon bathing robe😍..that guy is hot😛..Panchi..go go..dont let him loose!😳

Well , if only Panchi will listen to us!!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: panache

O.k..here is the scene...(When he still has PA)

Milind is watching prachi cook from the table. He slowly opened the refrigerator door and pulled a juice bottle. He is slowly sips the cold juice as he watches prachi from the corner of his eyes.

Prachi looks up and she is startled to seeing Milind watching her. The onions she has been cutting with precision with a sharp knife cuts into her skin.

With a yelp she yanks and holds her hands and rushes to the sink.

"Prachi!!" he placed the juice on the counter in a hurry and rushed to her.

"First aid box kahan hai! Tera haath dikhao" he said in a hurry.

"Kuch nahi hai Milind. Theek ho jayega" Prachi said in a wobbly smile. "Mein kuch sooch rahi thi...isiliyae yeh saab..." she continued...

"Hoon nikal raha hai....First aid box kahan hai" he asked flustered at seeing so much blood.

"Milind, It's o.k.." Before she could say anything he put her fingers on her mouth and sucked it.

Prachi was standing against the skin and as her eyes closed Milind automatically let go of her hands in his mouth and slowly traced the hair that had fallen across her cheeks.

"You are going to faint..." saying he lifts her up and carries her to the chair. Once she is sitting he gets her a glass of juice of her to drink.

Ayesha comes there and sees this.

hey lovelyyyyyyyy hun. i soooooo wanna see ayesha's face😳😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
OMG Sangeetha darling that was wonderful dear. 👏 Why can't the destructives steal all of these scenes? 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: panache

O.k..here is the scene...(When he still has PA)

Milind is watching prachi cook from the table. He slowly opened the refrigerator door and pulled a juice bottle. He is slowly sips the cold juice as he watches prachi from the corner of his eyes.

Prachi looks up and she is startled to seeing Milind watching her. The onions she has been cutting with precision with a sharp knife cuts into her skin.

With a yelp she yanks and holds her hands and rushes to the sink.

"Prachi!!" he placed the juice on the counter in a hurry and rushed to her.

"First aid box kahan hai! Tera haath dikhao" he said in a hurry.

"Kuch nahi hai Milind. Theek ho jayega" Prachi said in a wobbly smile. "Mein kuch sooch rahi thi...isiliyae yeh saab..." she continued...

"Hoon nikal raha hai....First aid box kahan hai" he asked flustered at seeing so much blood.

"Milind, It's o.k.." Before she could say anything he put her fingers on her mouth and sucked it.

Prachi was standing against the skin and as her eyes closed Milind automatically let go of her hands in his mouth and slowly traced the hair that had fallen across her cheeks.

"You are going to faint..." saying he lifts her up and carries her to the chair. Once she is sitting he gets her a glass of juice of her to drink.

Ayesha comes there and sees this.



👏..ill name this Epi " JUICE & JEALOUSY"😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Chits...yeh I wana see Ayesha face too... 😆

@GD...aptly named! 👏

@Sangs...Okay...in the world's shortest FF...you had romance, passion, jealousy, lust, love, curiosity, hunger, thirst, blood, gore, juice...everything!! 👏 LOVED IT!! 😊
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago

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