ShiVi OS Series: Reimagining Them [Part3Page24 06/08/2021] - Page 17

Originally posted by: Dreamer3003

Lmao this was cute😆

Jealous Shiva🤣

Beautifully written loved reading it❤️

-Aishu-

you are literally the cutest - thank you so much for reading and commenting on both parts 🤗

jealous shiva is always the best shiva 😉🤣

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Dance won't have much of a monologue or events in itself, so if you write that, you'll probably need to add new things, so your wish.

Proxy samajh lo is also rather small scene, I doubt it could turn into an os, you can always try though.

Vegetable scene, Raavi is kinda more engrossed in Dev, but its worth trying.

Knife is scene is nice, you should definitely do that one.

Its your choice in the end of course, just offering my suggestions😳

haye meri sautan 🤗 these are excellent suggestions and I have kept them in mind while writing the next part

I skipped the dance scene for now 😆 and including in some of the small scenes

knife scene is so hilarious, I will for sure write on that one 🤣

Originally posted by: Swathu

Shiva throwing haldi on maami

Raavi supporting Shiva against maami

Kids dancing around Dhara

I personally feel all these can be connected... They are few happy moments between these two..

I haven't included any flashback scenes in this next part that I will be posting but I will be for sure doing all of these scenes

my goal is to write on even the littlest scenes and use them as flashbacks to connect the story a bit more 😳

Originally posted by: nafees5

Something revolving around haldi.. Maybe mixture of them putting haldi on each other and the one where pot breaks and he protects her from getting injured

you already know I'll be heavily writing on this scene 😉 don't you worry my jaan - this scene will definitely not be overlooked

Originally posted by: Sparklle801

If the scenes are too short, you can combine them maybe or whatever you prefer of course, we would love to read anything you write for us🤗

thank you so much jaan 🤗 I will for sure play around with the scenes and see how they best fit 😆 thank you all for being patient with me and supporting me

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

you already know I'll be heavily writing on this scene 😉 don't you worry my jaan - this scene will definitely not be overlooked

Yesssssss maloom hai muje😆

Shall be waiting

Originally posted by: katheriene

Whatever you prefer

If that scene is not significant than skip it

thank you so much for your suggestion jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

I want a reimagine of mehndi scene.. Shiva was so intense there.

his eyes yaar I could just melt from one look

I will definitely be writing on his thoughts during that moment - taking cinematic liberties as I go 😆 because I feel that scene was way too intense for him not to feel anything

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

You can do the scenes in any way, your preference really. But one of my favorite scenes in the whole show was the "I can be Shiva's proxy" scene. I dunno, it just touched my heart that they are there for each other always, regardless of their fights.

As an idea, you could have the vegetable throwing scene, explain what happens post-vegetable throwing, and then have one of the characters, maybe Krish, tell Shiva that Raavi stood as his proxy and describes his emotions as he reflects on those words. Then after that scene, you could make the knife scene be a lot more playful where he is essentially teasing her for calling herself "Shiva's proxy." And then when you get to the scene where Shiva finds out about the Dev-Raavi wedding, you could explain how he feels betrayed as just a few days ago, she was so ready to represent him.

You could scrap these ideas. but those are my thoughts.

haye meri milkwa 🤗 your suggestions, as always are impeccable

your ideas have guided the next part of my series very heavily and I can't thank you enough for that - I honestly had no idea how to move forward and after reading your comment it was as if a fire had been lit under my ass and I quickly starting writing the next part, you're truly the best jaan

Originally posted by: nafees5

Yesssssss maloom hai muje😆

Shall be waiting

thoda tharkiness bhi dal dungi 🤣🤣

except this is an innocent series of mine so I might have to refrain 😆

par abhi time hai - I never realized how many scenes shivi had before the wedding track