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Posted: 3 years ago

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What Have You Done?


Rolling in the bed with my eyes closed tight, I lay there beside you. Surely, sleep had resolved to disown me, long before the onset of the night. So, I lay there listening and listening intently, to the melancholy music your soft snores made in agreement with the ticking clock. Yes, I lay there completely motionless until you turned to your side and mumbled her name under your breath.


That-That is when I practically sprang out of bed and came here, to stand near this window. And now, I must admit, I feel lost as I look out, so lost and so broken. I don't know what to do, where to go, whom to turn to, nothing.

Oh, what have you done, what have you done, my love? I don't know what would be just appropriate for me to say. 


That afternoon, I caught you in the act. You kissing her lips and her long fingers in your hair. She was quite young and quite pretty, I must say. And oh, she looked quite cunning.


I saw it, yes and in the whole wide world, only I know that I did. And that moment, it caused such a terrible carnage within me that I don't think I will be able to recover from that in possibly a hundred thousand years. Neither can I recover from it, nor do I have the courage to confront you about it. Oh and I don't think I am going to be able to muster that courage for a good long time. I don't know, I don't know. Oh goodness, maybe I am going to begin crying again. 

Maybe, now is a good time to ask you this. Before you had her ushered into the extravagance of the mansion of your heart, did you perhaps bother to gather all the love that I gave you, very willingly and toss it out of a convenient window? Did you? If you did, I must beseech you now to go and fetch it. And then, give it back to me. I promise, thereafter, I will walk out of this home, of your life, of us. And I won't utter a word. I will just walk out and never ever, return. 


~*~


Inspiration: Sugarland- Babe ft. Taylor Swift 

(You absolutely must listen to the song and the music video, it is something else)






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Posted: 3 years ago

This is so beautifully written, I can feel the emotions in it! 👏

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OMG what was this?😳


Had the shock of my life seeing you writing such a piece!

Ofcourse it was toooo goood but this and you was so unexpected and SOOOO GOOD I'm speechless!😲

Maybe that song is indeed something else!😆

Yet to recover from the shock like the lead

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Posted: 2 years ago

It's been a really long time since I penned down something. I stumbled across this to find an inspiration to write something but forgetting my need I ended up loving this and wondering the way - one can simply play with the words beautifully especially the last couple of lines. Thanks for a good read.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: metacrisis

This is so beautifully written, I can feel the emotions in it! 👏

It is good to know that you could feel all the emotions❤️Thanks Pro!!

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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

OMG what was this?😳


Had the shock of my life seeing you writing such a piece!

Ofcourse it was toooo goood but this and you was so unexpected and SOOOO GOOD I'm speechless!😲

Maybe that song is indeed something else!😆

Yet to recover from the shock like the lead

🤣

OMG you flatter me as always😆Thanksss!!❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: HerFiction

It's been a really long time since I penned down something. I stumbled across this to find an inspiration to write something but forgetting my need I ended up loving this and wondering the way - one can simply play with the words beautifully especially the last couple of lines. Thanks for a good read.

Thanks for reading and thanks for making my day with your comments!! 😃Makes me so happy to know that it was a good read for you. ❤️

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Thanks!☺️

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It's so desperate and so real. Thanks for sharing this!

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Originally posted by: amaranthe

It's so desperate and so real. Thanks for sharing this!

Thanks for reading! Good to know that you found it to be real.