Drive to Delhi - TS - Page 2

Awesome update ......❤

This was love ❤️

The typical Shaurya Romeo Sabherwal was perfectly put in to words. His cute antiques, his new found teasing methods 😆 They can make one giggle easily, he's being skinny adorable.

Ofc Anokhi loves the guy & your story just showed how much. Their comfortability was so nice, the way they fed eo, how Anokhi accepted his ring were all nicely depicted 😊

Waiting to read the next..

Awww so cute

Shaurya ko sari rasme pata hai😆 sarwagun sampanna.

So cute.....totally Shaurya like antics

Smiling throughout the read.

Thanks for penning down this lovely piece 🤗❤️

Let's start from the precap! (In my imagination, shaurya doesn't have the ugly ring on his finger!)

Haven't read the TS yet but I'm dying at this line 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 badi maa ki choice ki epic bejjati 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Oh wow Anuja! You write soo well😍 it actually felt like the episode was playing right in front of my eyes ! It was so good! We got all what we wanted and more and there’s still a second part too! * Bumper bonanza waali feeling 🤪😍😍
Particularly loved Anokhi’s inner dialogue , thinking of Aastha’s words, their khaana khilana to each other, their banter, Shaurya’s ring proposal 😍❤️ Super stuff! Thanks for the tag dear..🤗 looking forward to he next one

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Let's start from the precap! (In my imagination, shaurya doesn't have the ugly ring on his finger!)

Haven't read the TS yet but I'm dying at this line 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 badi maa ki choice ki epic bejjati 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Lol Mahi.. reading your comments and looking at your dps makes it even more funnier 🤣🤣

What a wonderful update Yaar Anuja.

You have such an amazing imagination. And the dialogues sounded so apt for Shaurya and Anokhi, I could hear the words in their voices, I could imagine them in the story.

And I loved how you wrote a progress in their story and their acceptance and acknowledgment of each other. I can’t wait to read what happens next. Please do update soon. The best part is the whole time I was reading it, I had a smile.

Thanks for this one dear. Loved it a lot. 😍😍😍😍

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

So cute.....totally Shaurya like antics

Smiling throughout the read.

Thanks for penning down this lovely piece 🤗❤️

Hey Prats how is your prep for exam going? I have updated my thesis on your post, do check it out when you get time. 😊

Originally posted by: butterturnips

Wow Anuja ❤️ First of all, congratulations for writing your first ever TS on this forum 🤗 Secondly, I was blushing all the time while reading this it's so wonderful 😆

Bechara Shaurya, I thought while tying up her seatbelt he'll steal a kiss from her lips, but wo hote hote reh gaya humare KPs ke tarah 🤣 but anyways, it was so cute ❤️ at least, he gave a peck on her cheek ☺️

I was thinking ki yeh Anokhi ko padhne nahi dega, aur agar padhayega bhi toh physically tease karta rahega har time 🤣

Aur tune toh sach mein Shaurya ko submissive bana diya, biwi ka sara kaam karne wala h yeh - from driving to cooking to feeding her 😆 isliye I'm always Team Anokhi 🤣

I can't wait to read the second part of your TS, jaldi tayyar karna aur please ek hot passionate wala liplock iss bar include zaroor karna aur detail mein write-up hona chahiye kiss ka ☺️

Thanks for this absolutely loved it ❤️

Thank you love🤗

I was planning for a kiss in the later half...n I wanted to give your anokhi a chance in my story... because show mein toh humara shaurya hi sab karega😆 So I avoided lip kiss in the car😆

Anokhi ko padhne nai dega toh biwi dhakka maar degi use😆

Yes, outside the bedroom he will be all submissive... bedroom mein uska raaj hoga😈😂

I'll write the second part soon❤️ aur aapki saari manokaamnaein poori hongi balike😆