RaghVi TS :: I Love You...(completed shot 2 page 4)- Page 2

Originally posted by: Me000w

Arey..arey..so well written..but you ended it at such a moment where we dont know what to expect. Update soonish please! 🤗

Haha..thanks...will update soon🤗

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Ek Aur sad ending 😭

Abhi complete kaha hua hai 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

What the hell? 😲

I was once again expecting a happy ending but got the opposite. Though your some lines in between said that pallavi is going to be separated from the child but as soon as Raghav came i thought the end will be different.😭

Update the next part soon with a happy ending.😡

Hehehe🤣

Thanks dear 🤗

You love sad ending haii.. Always break our heart 🥺

Beautiful os ❤️

Beautiful 👌Plz plz plzzzzzzzz happy ending plzzzz🙏

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

You love sad ending haii.. Always break our heart 🥺

Beautiful os ❤️

Arey, aur ek update baaki hai 😆

Originally posted by: vinlora

Beautiful 👌Plz plz plzzzzzzzz happy ending plzzzz🙏

Sure. I will try

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Arey, aur ek update baaki hai 😆

When you ended with Raghav's pov and then shifted to Pallavi's and then back to Raghav's---that was sheer level of torture a reader ever has to go through--i had to read through the whole part to get to know what had happened next

So beautifully penned--the descriptions especially little RaghVi's (since no name is given)--the change from joy to anguish on Raghav's face--the silent communication between RaghVi--all written so well

I would actually would like to know what had happened it last 3 months and no pressure for happy ending---because even you unhappy endings are beautiful (although it hurts us--it's ok cause it's your story)

Originally posted by: ReemShah

When you ended with Raghav's pov and then shifted to Pallavi's and then back to Raghav's---that was sheer level of torture a reader ever has to go through--i had to read through the whole part to get to know what had happened next

So beautifully penned--the descriptions especially little RaghVi's (since no name is given)--the change from joy to anguish on Raghav's face--the silent communication between RaghVi--all written so well

I would actually would like to know what had happened it last 3 months and no pressure for happy ending---because even you unhappy endings are beautiful (although it hurts us--it's ok cause it's your story)

This was quite long--forgive me for that but some stories just bring out so many words from you that you don't realize how long it actually is

Sorry for the chapar chapar again😆