RaghVi TS :: I Love You...(completed shot 2 page 4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ReemShah

When you ended with Raghav's pov and then shifted to Pallavi's and then back to Raghav's---that was sheer level of torture a reader ever has to go through--i had to read through the whole part to get to know what had happened next

So beautifully penned--the descriptions especially little RaghVi's (since no name is given)--the change from joy to anguish on Raghav's face--the silent communication between RaghVi--all written so well

I would actually would like to know what had happened it last 3 months and no pressure for happy ending---because even you unhappy endings are beautiful (although it hurts us--it's ok cause it's your story)

I am always awed with your reviews! 😳 thank you so much Reem ❤️ will update soon. And ofc. will try to give a happy ending😆 (though it doesn't suits the story)

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was quite long--forgive me for that but some stories just bring out so many words from you that you don't realize how long it actually is

Sorry for the chapar chapar again😆

I am loving this kind of long messages. It shows how much one has enjoyed reading the story. No need to say sorry🤗

@bold damn true. And also, when it is something real which happens in our life .

Beautifully written❤️.

Loved it!

This was lovely. Please continue soon

Originally posted by: psychoruchi

Beautifully written❤️.

Loved it!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This was lovely. Please continue soon

Thanks.. will do

Heart wrenching hoping for some miraculous happy ending

Originally posted by: Joyness

Heart wrenching hoping for some miraculous happy ending

😳

Waiting for the happy ending.

under editing - to be posted soon