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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Please Priya.... try to update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hoping that you can update


this sometime when you have


time on your hands

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Posted: 4 years ago
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teri meri kahani (bhoot aaya series 3)

part 17 on page 53

part 18 on page 54

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hi Priya.... will wait for updates

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is not a any story

Just random.shots

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hi Priya.... waiting for next random shot

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Shot #5

Today I going to tell you about memories…har kissi ke life me yaadein hoti hai, pal chahe acha ho ya bura- yaado me ek panna aur jud jaata hai, after these depend on us which page we want to remember. losing someone in own life always painful for anyone… and am missing my mom so much… time passing out, but whenever we fall and our heart cries, we take only one name MAA

Kashmaa aap yaha hoti

Toh mein ye handle kr paati

Sayad jo fasle maine liye

Wo shi nhi the

Tbhi toh aaj mein pareshaan hu

.

He never understands my pain, he just sees what his parents says… I want to go my father house because he shifting the house and last time, I want to visit that old house where I spend many years, when my mother is alive… I just want to feel those moments…

Jaha mein jb bhi jaati thi

Asa lagta tha

Meri saari tension khatam ho gyi

Ye stress durr ho gya

I feel am happiest girl in parents’ house

Jaha sirf pyaar hai

Unke gusse me pyaar hai

Unke daat me bhi pyaar hai

Unki rok me bhi pyaar hai

.

I never forget anything but with time dust come on memories. tears not stopping from her eyes remembering those moments…

But her husband and his families denied to go …. Her father called him and said to him send her for two three days for help… but her husband Maan denied because his parents said she can’t go because going out not safe for her in this condition…already outer atmosphere is not good due to disease…

But Maan can go with own friend when his friend loses own parents, he ready to help him … because now nothing going happen to him …,

I don’t want to fight with him on that matter, I can understand his friend needs him but why he not feels my pain, why?

Can’t he see my tears

My longing

My attachment with house…

I know memories creates with loved ones, but not with non – living things like house… but emotions attached… when some favourite things fall down and cracked, we feel little pain… but here I lived… my mom running after me at morning

Geetu khali pet nhi jaate office

Ek parantha khale

Nhi mom

Am getting late

Her mom feeds her …

.

And you know what more painful is when someone laughing on situation … how his son come to her and ask related geet home visit and how I deny and said all things, my son sit with me now and attached with me…

First thing when I stopped him, and why I stop him… no idea why his family put blame every time on daughter in law… because how many tries DIL do for home but in laws eyes only sees mistakes.

.

I want to write more my dairy but not able to write… so topic closed here for this shot..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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wo lamhe - Part 7 on page 4

20 may


Khamosiya -

Summary Season 1

Summary Season 2

part 30 on page 2 (16 may)

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please check once this thread for all stories link and anyone left , tell me

click here - maaneet dreamworld

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Wo lamhe season 2 & part 6 on page 1 (11 may)

teri meri kahani - 9 may

part 23 on page 70

Ye dil kya kare

Summary & Teaser on page 126

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

hi Priya.... hope you are feeling better


thanks for the update

Shot 5

tremendous update.... well written

feeling for Geet

sad that Maan never understands her

why does he listen to his parents?

hate the double standards

her thoughts are reasonable

Maan cannot see her pain

her in laws always blame her

will Maan realise what he is doing?

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi Priya.... hope you are feeling better


thanks for the update

Shot 5

tremendous update.... well written

feeling for Geet

sad that Maan never understands her

why does he listen to his parents?

hate the double standards

her thoughts are reasonable

Maan cannot see her pain

her in laws always blame her

will Maan realise what he is doing?

update soon


Never dear

Maan not going change

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