RaghVi TS: Zara Paas Toh Aao

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey folks! Myself Rosy! I was recently watching this show and I was so much attracted towards the leads! I mean the way Shivangi and Sai are performing is actually so goodšŸ‘! That's how this idea peeled into my mind to write a short TS(three shots) for them. Maybe with something sizzling hotness mixed up with passionā˜ŗļø? Well the story will have NO MATURE CONTENT and is SAFE for kids and bhramacharis! IT IS A HUMOUR STORY BTW!šŸ˜†


Plot(it's a rough sketch but still....):

Raghav and Pallavi are forced to go for their honeymoon. Uninterested still forced to go just for the sake of Raghav's mom's happiness, the couple leave for Assam (to meet me🤣). Sab abhi jaan loge toh maza thodi ayegašŸ¤”? So I leave with this much for plotšŸ˜†


Hoping you all would enjoy!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


"Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai..." said Pallavi while packing her sarees into a suitcase.


"Acha! Matlab tum Amma ko mana nahi karta aur saara galati mera hota?" said Raghav who was staring at his wife confusingly. How would he handle the angry bird who had the power to slap him in public? That too in anjaan seher!🤣


Pallavi looks at him and finds his staring at her. She gets annoyed by his looks.


"aise kya dekh rahe ho? Dekho woh buzurg hai unki baat ko main mana nahi kar saki....soā˜ŗļø"


"wah! Mairi Amma itna buddha bhi nahi hai ke tumhare no karne se mar jayega"


"Tum chup raho. Sab tumhari tarah heartless nahi hote. Tumhe feelings ki kya hi kadar hai? Jante bhi ho ke feelings kya hota hai?"


"nahi. Main toh insaan bhi nahi hai na....Sab toh tum hai."


"Mera woh matlab nahi tha....tum hamesha mujhse jhagdne kyun baith jate ho?Jao na apna bag bhi pack karlo. Ab jab jaana hi hai toh ache se ghum ayenge...(ā˜ŗļø)"


"Oo Madam! Udhar corana virus tumko welcome karne nahi khadha hai ke saari ka dukaan ghumega toh main bhaag jaata!"


"Toh jao manao apni 'amma' ko manao ke Abhi situation kharab hai aur hum nahi jaa sakte..."


"Haan jaisa woh meri baat maanliya ghar and ke liye waisa hi honeymoon cancel ka baat maanlega!"


"Ek baat batao tumhe honeymoon par jaane se problem hai ya meri baat na manne ki tum kasam le rakhi hai?"


"doino ho sakta hai😵"


"Kya kaha tumne?" Pallavi looks furiously at him. Smoke coming out of her nose when she exhaled!šŸ˜†


"kuch bhi toh nahi..." Raghav trying to cool her down, making her belief whatever she heard was a misunderstanding. But poor him Saare ka dukaan had strong ears!🤣


"nikalo yahan se abhi ke abhi" yelled Pallavi. She threw a saree at his face. He instantly left the room.


"iske saath jana toh jaanleva hai!" said Raghav to himself!


*That's all for Part 1*

NVM I wanted the TS to be short and sweet so please bear up...😃

Edited by beinguraloo - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: beinguraloo

res for chapter 1šŸ˜Ž

hey rosy happy to know about you and even your TS topic we are further interesed..ohh lovely my assam babe ...my pending trip for 2 long years to majuli 😭..assam ka nam sunke ankho me ansoo aye ..i so want o be there ...will catch you for few talks ahead...continue the uninterested honeymoon ts ....na toh hum brahmchari hai nahi bachhe ...hum pe toh zulm hoga but koi nhi aap dedo jo bhi hum kam chala lenge...waise naam se toh hume kuch aur hi lga tha..per aapne toh pehli hi gend me clean bold kr diya humešŸ˜­šŸ˜†
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi Rosy...šŸ¤—šŸŒ¹

Hilarious shot dear🤣

Pallavi+Angry+Haath me samaan = Jaan bacha ke bhago🤣

Loved it

Jaldi jaldi updatešŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Great start....🤣

It was ended so quickly🤣....btw

When is next part coming????

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Masst Haan Masst!🤣


Yeh Gusse wali Pallavi & Raghav ko dekhne mein Already mazza aaraha hai šŸ˜† ....


Next update jaldi dedo taaqi aur khush hojaayein hum

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pallavi bhadki hui hai at Raghav🤣🤣

excited to read next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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defiantly janlewa hai

haha too good

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome!! Look forward to the next part šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raghav aise Roz maar khayega...... bechara football ban Gaya....edhar se Saree Ka dukan aur udhar se Amma šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Funny one shot..... amazing šŸ‘šŸ»

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