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( NOTE : This os is highly inspired my @viewpoint Trial By Fire so some lines can be similar. But i didn't plagarise the work any way. Trust me. I just rewrote it in my way.)


Raghav's : Inner Turmoil


I was in my study sipping whiskey after taking revenge on one women,whom i secretly admired.

I admired her courage how she stand in front of me The Raghav Rao holding her grounds, I admired how she honour her character, the women full of self respect.


I should be happy after all i pushined her for her sins. For hurting my loved ones in a most vicious way. For defaming my sisters character. I never in my dreams had imagined that she will stoop so low for some stupid revenge. The girl who always stands for right and honours her character will defame another girls character. The girl who took the blame of being pregnant just for saving her so called sister will do something like this.




But why im thinking all these things, why I'm not feeling happy. Why my heart is paining. Why im not being able to put her thoughts out of my mind. why her face, and those innocent eyes briming with tears, and disgust for me is haunting me . Why my heart is screaming that she is innocent and did nothing wrong. why strange pang is sweeping into my heart. Why her crying face in coming in front of my eyes asking me why i did this to her. why i said all those things. why i questioned her character and her purity. why i broked her trust. yes i broked her trust on me ,


Yes i questioned her character her purity. whatever i said is untrue. she is pure as white. I did what i did is just to punish her for hurting my family. She should know,no one dares to hurt Raghav Raos family.


If i know im right then why im feeling this strange feeling. Why for the first time after punishing one for ones sin, im not happy. Did i do something wrong. Did i just punish an inocent as Farhad told, Did i punish her for something she never did.


Should i have listened to Farhaad and investigated the matter properly before coming into conclusion and acusing her and runing her. Did i just ruined her because of my anger. Did she just became the victim of my warth without any falut.


This is driving me crazy now, her face her innocent eyes full of tears and disgust . Her eyes screaming question me why i did this, why i broked her trust Farhadd telling me i did wrong, i punished an innocent Pallavi is innocent. I need closure. I need proofs solid proofs now stating the fact that Pallavi is the one who is wrong here and I did nothing wrong accusing her. But do i really want her to be proved wrong or do i want her to be proved innocent. Her to be the women who did nothing wrong , who is still the one whom i secretly admired , the one who honours her character one who stands for right, no matter who she is standing agsinst.


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THANKS FOR READING .


[ UNEDITED, NOT PROOF READ DO IGNORE THE TYPOS AND GRAMATICAL MISTAKE .]

CHECK OUT PART 2 Raghvi OS : Realization

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Hey! You should write more often 😊

We hope to see an episode where Raghav rethinks every single action against Pallavi. Raghav is a complicated character, it’s not always easy to understand what transpires in that brain of his.

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Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Hey! You should write more often 😊

We hope to see an episode where Raghav rethinks every single action against Pallavi. Raghav is a complicated character, it’s not always easy to understand what transpires in that brain of his.


Frankly speaking i sucks at writing, Cruenttly also im having one plot in my mind.. but i just don't know hiw to pen it down. I just don't know how to start the story 😅. Btw thank you for appreaciation and i hope you didn't mind, that i used some lines from your work

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I don’t mind. Just start with whatever comes to your mind, then review it, correct and rearrange. If you like writing or doing something, first step is to just start. With time, you’ll surprise yourself 😊


Originally posted by: cozy_vibes


Frankly speaking i sucks at writing, Cruenttly also im having one plot in my mind.. but i just don't know hiw to pen it down. I just don't know how to start the story 😅. Btw thank you for appreaciation and i hope you didn't mind, that i used some lines from your work

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cozy_vibes


Frankly speaking i sucks at writing, Cruenttly also im having one plot in my mind.. but i just don't know hiw to pen it down. I just don't know how to start the story 😅. Btw thank you for appreaciation and i hope you didn't mind, that i used some lines from your work


Oftentimes we tend to underestimate ourselves. You are great! Keep writing, it will become better and better, even tough I think there is no better or worse than the other when writing is concerned. Everyone has just different wordings and perspectives. ☺️


I loved both, the original and yours as well !!!❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoldenHour


Oftentimes we tend to underestimate ourselves. You are great! Keep writing, it will become better and better, even tough I think there is no better or worse than the other when writing is concerned. Everyone has just different wordings and perspectives. ☺️


I loved both, the original and yours as well !!!❤️❤️❤️


Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad youiked my work and will for sure write more stuff in future also.

Again Thank You

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The inner turmoil in Raghav's mind is written so good...looking forward to your next os

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Originally posted by: ReemShah

The inner turmoil in Raghav's mind is written so good...looking forward to your next os


Thank you Reem.

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