Enough - SaiRat TS Part 1 (3 May) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was SO beautiful. Emotional, witty in parts and so well written. Thank you. Please write more!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

It was awesome , beautiful ❤️

Continue

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

You being the Covid warrior .The only thing we can say is A big Thank you nothing else can matter.



Regarding story- You have put them in such beautiful manner that I wish the writers look into small details you have mentioned.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Amazing start 👏👏👍👍

Loved it💞

Hope you are keeping well💌

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved it so much

uff these two

i am felling in love with this couple due to these amazing stories.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Wow....awesome.....superb....loved it a lot....❤️

Brilliantly written.....

Unconsciously she has completely accepted him as her husband...... she allowed him to get into her personal.... at that time her uncertainties and insecurities less important.... those things which did not let her come close to him are forgotten at that moment....

In their pain they are each others comfort.... loved the way how they slept... so close.....😍

Thank god... Sai locked the room.... otherwise pakhi would come again and spoil their special moments.....

Excited for next part... please give really soon.... waiting....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Fantastic story

Virat and Sai needed some time to vent out their feelings and frustration

Please update next part soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome update dear

loved it

so finally she told him what she felt at that time

do write more dear

glad to come across someone like u a brave covid warrior

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

This.was.awesome.

Glad to know that you are a covid warrior,so thankyou for sticking with us and helping our way through these difficult times. Salute to you and many more like you.🤗

I mean words are so less to describe this beautiful piece of work. I loved each and every part of it, and at the end ,I had a huge smile on my face.❤

Pls update the next part soon🤗

Thank you!

It's not my best work, but I really liked writing SaiRat. Glad it made you smile!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Lots of virtual hugs and kisses to you and alll your colleagues and friends..... It's commendable job that you all do and no words can suffice to appreciate that....


Sai was great in your story... Giving back to Didi in subtle yet effective...


Virat and sai were also sooo sweet and open with talks and for a change did not end up fighting...


Do continue more.....


Happy writing!!! 🤗🤗


Thank you!

Sai is really fun to write actually. She says a lot of things that we normal humans think. Pakhi, on the other hand is harder to write, because although I want to sympathize with her, her character is shoddily written and it's harder to portray her as a three-dimensional character 🤔

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