Fictional Paradise CC #20 (IO) - Page 27

Good morning to all🤗

Hope you all are safe😊

Ande, that's an amazing piece of write up! Even I wanted Roli and Aryan scenes but CVs only like butchering everything.

This wish is what inspired me to write Obsessive Love. Initially, the plot was different, I changed it totally for Roli and Aryan scenes🤣

Btw, Aryan is not villain. He's a Anti-Hero😈

Originally posted by: Confused_Soul

You may get that in Obsessive Love😉😆

Really !!?????? 😲

Then update that soon na akka

Originally posted by: Confused_Soul

Good morning to all🤗

Hope you all are safe😊

Ande, that's an amazing piece of write up! Even I wanted Roli and Aryan scenes but CVs only like butchering everything.

This wish is what inspired me to write Obsessive Love. Initially, the plot was different, I changed it totally for Roli and Aryan scenes🤣

Btw, Aryan is not villain. He's a Anti-Hero😈

❤️

Wow 🤩

Yeah anti hero .. You know this time almost 80% of sheep game qns have aryan as option 😉

Originally posted by: Andetheres

So while seeing that track , there was a scene in which manoranjan mausiji will be like they have to choose either milk or oil .. but after a long time we can see a sherni roli there .. she opposes her and reminds her how she and simar had once insulted her in front of the guests by helping her with makeup ,which infuriates mausiji . So when roli goes and brings both milk and oil .. mausiji orders aryan to stop her and take those from her and keep it in the table and if she doesn’t obey , he knows what to do ..

roli at first tried to say that the milk is for the kids and all but aryan was like “ no .. “ . Roli eyes brimmed with tears and it starts flowing down .. and Siddhant was like he doesn’t understand these tears and only understand that he should follow his boss Rajveer’s mother’s order .. and there again we can see sherni roli for atleast a minute .. she will be like no matter what she will give that to the hungry kids .. but aryan manages to take the tray from her hands and they have a emotional eyelock .. and the tray from aryan’s hand falls down .. and roli will be like she go and get another cup of milk .. and aryan raises his hand to slap roli but simar stops him ..

I don’t know I felt that they should have been more scenes between aryan and sherni roli ... that would have been so nice

and after seeing that .. I wanted something like this 👇.. hope u all like it too ..

when aryan raises his hand to slap roli,she should have held his hand and twisted it to his back .. shocking everyone especially mausiji who was using aryan as roli’s weakness .
roli : abbey , what and all promises you made haan ? Roli .. I will be your kavach , your Bigg boss And today you raised your hand to hit me !? And that day you tried to kill me too ... and the biggest of all was you tried to leave me by attempting suicide .What do you think of yourself haan !?

( everyone asks roli to leave Siddhant )

roli : will everyone be quiet for sometime ? ..I am..

before she could complete her sentence .. aryan turned and held her throat .. and starts throttling her shocking all ..

Roli : now I won’t please you to leave me .. kill me fast .. I will die within few minutes but after you became normal and comes to know about all these .. you will die each and every second of your life .. and you deserve it for thinking to leave me alone and stab yourself to death ..

Everyone asks aryan to leave her .. but his hold got more tighter until mausiji asked him to leave her .

roli coughs ..

Mausiji : arrey roli beta , in what world we are in , a husband is trying to kill his wife ?! Oh god

roli : mausiji today you did a great blunder by stopping him .. you know what .. you just know about roli Bhardwaj who does everything for her family in fair ways but you doesn’t know roli Dwivedi who has her own ways to deal people ..

Mausiji laughs

Mausiji : are you trying to threaten me ? Roli .. my one word is enough for you to reach heaven ..

Roli : ohh !! No problem kill me .. that would be the best ..

everyone got shocked hearing her reply

roli : what ? If you kill me now .. then I can also became like Sunaina the ex-wandering soul and haunt you all around especially you mausiji or else I can enter Siddhant ji’s body and then he will dance In my tune not Rajveer‘s ..

Mausiji frowns

roli :just imagine na mausiji .. I will enter into your body and jump from the balcony .. obviously from the first floor as I don’t want you to die that easily .. then I can make you hit your head in the wall , slap Rajveer till my heart cools down .. and kill him .. wow !! In what world we will be .. when a mother kills her son with her own hands ... oh god ..

Mausiji : roliii

roli : otherwise .. no matter how many times you kill me .. I have maya who can revive me ..

mausiji (smirks ): she can’t , because the powers are with my son bewakoof

roli : hmm... then (she takes a knife ) it looks like it’s time for me to become a murderer . After killing you .. If I burn your dead body .. Rajveer can’t revive you right?!

Roli moves forward

mausiji gulps her saliva

Mausiji : arrey Siddhant , why are you just standing like a statue .. stop her

Roli : arrey mausiji .. a small correction it is not Siddhant it is aryan ..

Mausiji hits her head and says aryan to stop her ..

Aryan moves closer to Roli, she takes a vase from the table

Simar and everyone tries to stop him

Roli : sorry Siddhant ji .. Waise bhi ... if I hit this in your head and you go into memory loss it doesn’t matter as already you a case of memory loss only ..

she hits the vase in his head .. he falls down Shocking mausiji ..

Simar : what did you do roli ? What if something happens to Siddhant ji

roli : arrey didi , Siddhant ji is my hero nothing will happen to him and this aryan is a villain .. I hope nothing happens to him also .. and next .. mausiji now it’s your turn ..😉

I forgot to tag others 🤦🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: Shivi72

Ande you were right that Sid is using Roli as a tool to bring Aanya back but Roli - Aanya aren't going to meet so soon... Siddhant won't let Aanya meet Roli as he fears Roli will go with her ...😕

Oh... Now Sid will stand between roli and aanya....

Originally posted by: Jenolin

Good morning to all sisters 🤗

Good morning....

Originally posted by: Soujanya_ROSID

Oh... Now Sid will stand between roli and aanya....

Yeah ...😕

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Ohh yeah !! Soujanya akka .. even I am waiting for ur story

Now you started.... 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Ohh !! Then did sid say to roli that aanya’s friends were from dharsh’s side or what 🤣due to which she preferred to stay there ..

When he got the time to tell.... 🤔🤔🤔

Ande this one is for you...hope I didn't made you wait for long ...given long to compensate the delay ...🤪

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/17250

Others too can read 🤣