Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 10

read all the parts in one go

its superb

the relation shiva and raavi share is unique

i could really imagine them enacting the scenes in the story

so coming to the last part ...dhara is gonna be a mom soon

and raavi happiness knew no bounds listening to it

family should be like this...

and seems like rishita is positive character here...i loved it

waiting for ur update

love

KAVYA

Most beautiful chapter

❤️Sweet! Amazing and Lovely!❤️

Cute update! Shivi are married and dhara is pregnant ❤️

Shivi's bitter nothings and krish's dialogues were hilarious 😂🤣

Loved the chapter!

Just read all 4 chapters together.... and I am loving it... can’t wait for more

Faha! This was beautiful. They're married and loved the camaraderie. Even as a reader, I am like are we sure this gadhedo and gadhedi didn't love each other. The comfort they have around each other is ❤️❤️. And their teasing remains their USP.

I loved all of it. And Rishita here seems like a sweet girl. Can't wait for the next part.

“tum dono phirse soch lo, Abhi bhi mauka hai. Card pe nahi chapa sakte par wedding poster pe Bhoothnath weds Chipkali likwa sakte hai, haa!!”,

@bold: I almost spit my water when I read this 🤣 and the counter Raavi gave after that 🤣 damn they both would definitely be the best "worst devar-bhabi" duo 😆

ShiVi are married and that too a happy marriage , do continue soon I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update ⭐️

Love, Neha ❤️

mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha tu Tik jayegi. Chipkali hai, jaha nazre dale waha chipak jaye - This line 🤣

Loved this part tooo ♥️

Beautiful concept yar🥰🥰🥰

Kitna accha lg rha h , in dono ki shadi aise peacefully hoti , aur dheere dheere dono ek doosre ko accept kr liya

Waiting for their love story to progress🤩

Very nice

Update soooooooòooooooooooooooon ❤

When are you going to be updating next? This is such a sweet story and I cannot wait to read more 😆❤️