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Posted: 4 years ago

Glad characters are not going through metamorphosis and remaining true to their orginal self.

As expected Raanav came back from dinner happy and calmer. Viveka dinner with dad is now not for crying on his shoulder...but he is now grateful that she made an effort and had food with him. Plus rather than having a conversation as expected he thinks all is well again and need to end the day with love making. He does not really like to take any problem head on..does it always with Smrita and Viveka.


So I guess his foul mood was that he found out that Sid had met Viveka at her exhibition. Viveka is right if it is plain jealousy..given Sid is a guy who is friendly with his wife. Meeting or bringing lunch /dinner all is ok...but when one looks at your wife longingly or "say you are not available" ...then his discomfort is understandable. Hope Sid intentions are as of a friend.


True was surprised that Viveka was not at her parents house after Dadi was sick. The differences she listed are all true. Including that Raanav has fractured her relationship with Naina...wonder what is her solution.


Anyway I hope Viveka was just being sarcastic of inviting Sid for dinner @Mathurs' ...and if not I hope she and the Mathurs will be able to handle snide remarks of Smrita etc. Kudos to her that her budding friendship with Sid is not colored by Inder or Nupur's bad behavior towards Naina and her parents. She is large hearted and is happy to finally find a friend in him I guess

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sid brings out insecurities in Raanav which he never expected. He doesn't know how to deal with it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

She has a generous heart and is fiercely protective ❤️

Her problems in life are not due to her lack of trying or making efforts.. she takes responsibility for what she does, keeps making efforts where she can! Be it with Naina or be it Smrita, Lekha or the Dhamijas..


And he was right! She really puts him in his place 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

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She stumbled back suddenly reaching for the wall.

“Are you OK?” he ran to her

“Hmm… I need to get my eyes tested I think, I just feel dizzy” she nodded

“Lets go to bed Vi” he wrapped his arms around her, drawn to her by a imperceptible yarn

“I should just say I don’t feel good and we can stop fighting”

“Shut up” he ordered

He brought her water, helped her lay back with her head up, checked on her multiple times at night

When she attempted to reach out and caress him he held her wrist warningly

“Get some sleep”

“Arey mujhe hua kya hai?”

“Can u take the day off tomorrow?”

“It’s a two day craft show, I haven’t done much for the team Raanav, we sold out today. Kal I hope we have a good day”

“Is that why you have your fingers crossed?” he asked with fondness and amusement, as she quickly untangled her index and middle finger

“NGO work is hard DUDE” she sighed leaning back

“Did u just dude me?” he leaned over

“I did…” she nodded gently feeling his handsome jawline

“I could help”

“Nahi” she said softly

“Oh no, not with a dime… for sure”

“Pa… Dad has given me names and numbers as NY gift remember? If I can find time after crashing my car I might get something done”

“And having lunch with my cousin” he whispered fingering her lower lip

“He is a sweet man”

“I don’t recall you ever using that term for me”

She turned bright pink under his gaze

“Umm.. there is a difference”

“I am sour?”

She smiled

“You want to be something?”

“I would like to”

“You are wicked and handsome and hot”

“None of it sounds sweet”

She laughed

He gathered her in his arms and they slept until 7

She scrambled to get ready, feeling a little dizzy but recovering after breakfast

By the evening it came back full blown

She returned home after a successful close of fair, to just lay in bed with cramps

Raanav returned early around 7 ish when he didn’t hear from her, he had back to back meetings all day, he texted her twice and she said “I am good”

When he called her at 6 there was no response

Smrita was in the atrium dressed up to meet friends for dinner

Parashars went from either inviting people over or going to people’s

Rakshit and Lekha were ready and waiting too, all of them ready for a 8:30 PM dinner…

He wondered who was expected

“Looks like everyone was waiting to greet me I will take it” he hugged his Mum

“U are my most favorite” Smrita hugged him tight

“Um..hhhmm… hh” Rakshit cleared his throat loudly

“Where is Dad,

“getting ready… the Minister for External Affairs” Smrita said proudly

“Oh? I didn’t see Dad today at the office”

“He has been so busy” she claimed

“Where is Viveka”

“I don’t know” “Meri purse mein nahi hai” she laughed in her usual affected manner winking, showing off her bejeweled purse

“thanks I was not worried about her ever being there” he said softly

Smriti got the jab

An hourish later after the family doc visited followed by an OBGYN it was determined the birth control she was on was not at all right

She was asked to go off it

“I am looking at you Smri…. Be a Mom…. Jao bhai go be with her” Satyen ordered

The Minister had not arrived yet, and was running a “bit late” Satyen’s assistant informed him

Smrita did not want to go

But Satyen stood in the atrium challenging her with a fiery glare

She approached her son’s suite

Raanav was in the shower, Viveka was sifting through a stack of journals

“How are you?”

“I am so much better” Viveka giggled embarrassed

“Tumne dara diya bhai sabko” Smrita said pointedly

“WHY?” Viveka was confused

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Posted: 4 years ago

Why did Smrita say tumne dara diya sabko?

Did she think Viveka was pregnant and didn’t want her to be ?

Anyways Ranaav is going to lose respect for his mom if Smrita continues to act this way.

He does love Viveka and care for Viveka. If his mother can’t see that and acknowledge that she might as well be ready to let go of her son.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Why dara Diya?

You mean she scared you into thinking she’s pregnant where as others will actually rejoice the news?!

You are on a wrong route Smrita... the sooner you get of it, the respect your son has for you will remain...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Tumne dara diya bhai sabko” Smrita said pointedly

Oh God! How much does she twists words!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka and Raanav are bickering and loving. Raanav is not happy that Viveka is going out to eat with Sid and Viveka teases him that his cousin is sweet. Viveka is not feeling well and the doctors were called and diagnosed that contraceptive pills are not agreeing with her. That relieved Smrita because she thought Viveka might be pragnant.

Thank you, Nisha.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Did Smrita get scared that Viveka might be pregnant? That would throw a wrench in her plans to get them divorced later.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Raanav and Viveka need to talk calmly and not fight for every issue. Each time a health scare of one or the other person should not be like a reminder of their love or care.


Also Satyen should really stop pushing Smrita to show any kind of care for Viveka. What is the use of this kind of fake concerns when the fake concern becomes a jab by the time it reaches Viv or her family.

Maybe it is time for him to accept that his wife is an asshole (not sure if this can be used for a woman too) and move on.


For a moment as a reader even I thought maybe Viv is pregnant and was kind of thrilled. But true, in between all that is going on, an unexpected pregnancy will only complicate matters further.


When will Raanav acknowledge to himself first that his mother will never be fair and nice to his wife? He might not able to change anything regarding his mother, but at the least he can stand in support to his wife.

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