ShiVi SS: Mere Dev Ki Liye *Complete* - Page 4

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Woah! Woah! Woah!

Such amazing uodates.

Both are villains in each others story.

Will it have link up to your other story, DMUS?

It would be fun to watch them reminisce these moments. Specially Shiva teasing Raavi with her misplaced but rightly said complements

Loved how Krish was stuck between the jhagda couple

Hoping in future, even when ShiVi falls in love, Krish can get stuck between their fights!

Thank you so much for the kind words! As for the link up in DMUS, I don't really know... I'm writing that story as I go 😆, but it would be quite adorable to link up the two scenes. As for Krish, poor guy, I imagine him to be awkwardly in the middle of all three couples 😆

Originally posted by: UmIbrahim

This is an interesting and delightful take on the forum favourite couple of the moment. Keep writing @milkcakejamun (would be delighted to know your name or what you prefer to be known by).

My name is Raghavi, but feel free to call me Raghu or Avi, either is fine :)

Originally posted by: aashkairaan

Loved this one! Raavi spending her time seeking shiva's approval instead of wooing dev 🤣😍 It's funny how her attention immediately shifted to dev from shiva when she realized who the real dev was.. was wondering if there can be an epilogue where raavi is unable to "woo" the real dev despite her best efforts and keeps neglecting him for shiva 😏😍😍

That would be quite a funny epilogue! I'll probably have to think up on how these three would interact

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

That would be quite a funny epilogue! I'll probably have to think up on how these three would interact

Would love to read something like this!

Heyy, sorry I waited so long to comment. I am generally a slow reader and I had a crazy week. Now that I have finally read it all in one go, here goes.

I loved the basic set up of the story. I've wondered this many times while watching the show as well. Why is Raavi always seeking Shiva's attention? And what beautiful flashback/backstory to answer that question.

The school version of ShiVi and their tashan. Shiva coming up with a clever plan to get rid Raavi. And to think people call his unpad gavaar. He seems to be the only one who has street smarts.

I found the Raavi mistaking Shiva for Dev just laugh out loud funny. 🤣And her insulting Krish. Hayee, bechara.🥺 Raavi's naughtiness 🤣

Seriously, props to you for writing this bit so well. It just stood out to me. I think you write lol moments very well and should write more such moments as well. 👏

I loved reading the entire story. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Keep writing 💕🌼

Love,

Abhi

Very nice 👌 ss