ShiVi SS: Mere Dev Ki Liye *Complete* - Page 3

Loved the story! Loved how one comment inspired you to write a full length story ♥️

The characters and the way they speak, you made it so much like the show, I could actually imagine them speaking those lines.

And having Krish to keep them in line was hilarious! “You’re right, she’s evil” 😂

Duhhh! 3 updates! Hats off! And yes, it made up for a quiet Sunday 😂♥️

Haha yes let’s save up the hashtags, ShiVi seems to get my creative juices flowing 😂

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Lol, nope 3 updates in one day to get us through the drought of not getting spoilers/SBS segments/or anything!

And god, I didn't even think about #RaaviFedShiva, you're right, she did! In my other story, it'll be a lot more romantic, but glad I could make use of that hastag!

And lol 🤣 #VillianGetsTheHeroine, where do you come up with these hashtags, hashtag queen? We need to keep this one too!

Amazing Amazing Amazing,

Ohhh I liked cunning Raavi soo much, she was right, revenge for all those years

Enjoyed this story, it was really good

Thank you♥️

Wonderful wonderful..haha I wasn't expecting all three parts today. What a treat. Lol if Shiva is sher, then Ravi is sava-sher. 😂

Lol, @raindropsroses, when you coined #RavifedShiva, no way did I ever think it would be this way. She not only fed him spicy vada pav, but Bhabhi se dant bhi khilvayi. 😂😂

Thanks milkcakejamun for this lovely story!

Yahh!!! AMAZING!! IM LIKE REALLY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. 3 updates that too back to back. Wow.

I really enjoyed it and the way Raavi thought Shiva was Dev... I would hide from embarrassment but Raavi was still awesome!! You gave each one of them a personality and I could imagine the whole thing in my head as I was reading 👏👏.

I like the determination and nautanki side they each have and Raavi's words in the last part about Shiva thinking shes the most beautiful girl and he will follow her like he follows Dhara is really telling of their future.

You're an amazing writer and I do hope you'll continue to write in the future ❤️.

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

Yahh!!! AMAZING!! IM LIKE REALLY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. 3 updates that too back to back. Wow.

I really enjoyed it and the way Raavi thought Shiva was Dev... I would hide from embarrassment but Raavi was still awesome!! You gave each one of them a personality and I could imagine the whole thing in my head as I was reading 👏👏.

I like the determination and nautanki side they each have and Raavi's words in the last part about Shiva thinking shes the most beautiful girl and he will follow her like he follows Dhara is really telling of their future.

You're an amazing writer and I do hope you'll continue to write in the future ❤️.

I'm really, really glad you ended up loving it (especially since it was inspired by the comment you made the other day).

I honestly have been so exhausted not being able to see ShiVi interact in the way they had done in the past. This story gave me the avenue I needed to enjoy their banter, hence the fast updates.

No worries, I'll be writing in the future! Will focus on "Distance Makes Us Stronger" then take a break in May (as it is exam season for me), and hopefully will come back in June. Readers of the forum, please comment/review episodes, I literally can be inspired by anything, and I'm pretty sure the other talented writers on this forum can be inspired too

Woah! Woah! Woah!

Such amazing uodates.

Both are villains in each others story.

Will it have link up to your other story, DMUS?

It would be fun to watch them reminisce these moments. Specially Shiva teasing Raavi with her misplaced but rightly said complements

Loved how Krish was stuck between the jhagda couple

Hoping in future, even when ShiVi falls in love, Krish can get stuck between their fights!

I’ve seen other forums where they have link to the FFs in the main page, under the Fan Fictions section, you could do the same! ♥️

This is an interesting and delightful take on the forum favourite couple of the moment. Keep writing @milkcakejamun (would be delighted to know your name or what you prefer to be known by).

Brilliant, Avi!! So much fun and I could picture them.

Loved this one! Raavi spending her time seeking shiva's approval instead of wooing dev 🤣😍 It's funny how her attention immediately shifted to dev from shiva when she realized who the real dev was.. was wondering if there can be an epilogue where raavi is unable to "woo" the real dev despite her best efforts and keeps neglecting him for shiva 😏😍😍