SS: After april 10, 2008(New UPDT)4-24-08

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this starts from when kanay was natasha in the hospital

hope u like it

SS: After, april 10, 2008

Kanya is in the hospital and is still Natasha

Suddenly, kanya faints, the doctor says it is okay

When she wakes up she will not be Natasha

Kanya wakes up

K: mummy, papa, mujhe kya hua hai??

P: kuch bhi toh nahi, who doctor neh tumara check up kar liya hai

A: tum bil kul tik hoh

A: tumari mummy bhoot jaldi dar jathi hai

P: aap chup kar hoh

K: mummy , papa jalhai

P & A: jalhu, thank you doctor

P: kanya beta, ghar mein kissi ko nahi patana

K: kyu??

P: jami raja, bhoot parashn ho jai gaay

K: okay

Kanya thinks it won't matter to the saand if I came to the doctor or not, but I will listen to my mom

Kanya, pammi, anand go to the supermarket to buy veggies and home supplies

By doing this no will suspect about where they were

They reach home

Right when they step in

R: Pammi the mummy, papa, kanya aap loog kaha gaya thae

K: hum supermarket gaya thea

R: I got worried you all left really early in the morning

Ranbir looks at kanya giving her a expression I was worried for you

K: channu, channu, channu

C: I am coming hold on

C: kya hua??

K; mein tumare liya kuch lea kaar ayi hu

C: tell me, tell me

Kanya takes this shirt out of the bag and says this would look wonderful on you

Ranbir seeing this is burning and just goes to his room

Ranbir with a gloomly face just stares outside the window

Kanya comes in with another shirt, which looks much better than what she gave channu

K: ranbir who….

Ranbir turns around and just looks

K: who..who..who

R: kya hai kanya, is you speak faster then, I won't be wasting your kimthi waqt,which you could be spending with your best friend channu

K: who mein tumare liya yeh shirt liyi thi

K: magar tum toh yeh nahi panho gaay

R: tum mere liya shirt???

R: WWOOOWW

K: never mind, I won't tell you to wear this,

R: why??

K: you never wear anything that is not brand named, so why would you wear this??
R: no, I am not like that

Ranbir walks up to her and says

R: this is the first thing you ever brought for me

R: of course I will wear it

Kanya is so happy to hear that and says

K: tum yeh aaj raat paan ho gaay

R: yes kanya I will

R: thank you so much

Ranbir gives her a light hug

Kanya respondes to it

Doesn't know why she did that but she knew she liked it

Ranbir is thinking that he should buy her something to that he can ask her to wear tonight.

😃😆

SH😊ULD I CONTINUE

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tanyadas13 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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how can u ask tht question!!
DUH CONTINUE SOON!!!!!! 😉
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YES... i'm waiting for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon
That was gr8
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that was really good!
plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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shame on you for asking if you should continue!! Obviously! Please do continue! 😆 😆
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continue... soon pls... i loved it...
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Ranbir is still thinking what to buy kanya
Then gets the perfect idea

Ranbir calls and asks one his workers to bring him something

Any guesses???

Well,by now the worker has come and dropped of the wonderful things

ranbir takes the things and places them on their bed
R: kanya, kanya, kanya
K: coming
K: ah bolu
R: woh mein tumare liya yeh saab(and takes her to the stuff)laya hu
K: yeh saab
K: why
R: i also wanted you to wear something special tonight
K: yeh saab toh booth expensive ho ga na
R: yes, it is but it is for my wife
K: mein to tumari wife bas ek sal ke liye hu
R: Can I ask you a question
K: haa
R: jab humari contract marriage kathum ho jagi
R: will you marry channu after that????
K: NO WAY, he is my bestest friend that does not mean i will marry him
K:We treat eachother like brother and sister
K: haven't you notice that ??
Ranbir is so relaxed now and happy
R: will you wear this dress and the other accesories
K: haa
R: jaldi pannho, i want to see you in it
K: ok, ok
Kanay goes to the bathroom and comes wearing the dress
(it is a salwaar kammeez)
Kanya comes out looking stunning seeing this Ranbir is really mesmerized
Kanay sits infront of the dresser and was putting on the diamond necklace and earrings
Kanya wore her earrings and puts her hair to the side to wear the necklace
Ranbir is just looking on with a smile on his face
He sees that the zip of her dress is not properly closed
Ranbir walks up to her and bend toward her neck
kanya is just thinking what is he planning on doing
he bends and closes her zip
kanya is blushing
then kanya tries to put on the necklace but can't put it on
Ranbir who is still standing behind her bends and puts on her necklace
kanya gets up and turns around
K: thank you
R: no problem
R: you look beautiful
Kanay is blushing like crazy
K: now you go and wear the shirt
R: ok
Ranbir goes and comes back looking dashing
Both of them go outside holding hands
everyone: aaaawwww!!!
Channu says they should send them out on a candle light dinner
Everyone agrees and send them out


How was it???
Do you like it please
do reply please 😃
Edited by Goldfish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww that was really cute..great update!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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u made Chunnu munnu tunnu Kanya's Brother 😆 ... GUD JOB😆..

oh for one minute u had me thinking that Ranbir was gonna see the mark on Kanya's neck while he was helping her zip her dress n wear the neckless 😳 😳 (i wanna see that sence in)
i was like NOOOOOOOO , she's gonna kill the Romance 😆
but u didn't , good thinkin

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