RaghVi FF: Innocent Hearts (Chapter 11: Page 26 updated) - Page 9

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was a creative chapter...using imagination to make a flashback so it is accord with the story...I really loved it. this was written so well...and am excited for next parts and learn more about role of other characters in Raghvi's life

Originally posted by: Mihika

Thanks Reem...❤️ I was confused about how to put in "that girl" into the picture...also thought of not including too but then somehow I ended up making her an important character in my story😆 Her part is not over yet😉

Is she returning? in his current life?

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Is she returning? in his current life?

Pallavi realising she was just a scapegoat for Deshmukhs for 2 years and her in-laws were aware. So painful to know. Krishna feeling for her Didi ~ awwww I love their precious bond so much! Please explore more on her past and present too, would love to know if she sticks around post this, and if so, what are her motivations?

The amount of rage I feel at Nandini! 😡

How can any self-respecting, educated girl want to stoop so low to excel at academics? My heart goes out to Raghav and his innocence was gifted with death, deceit and loneliness. In one moment, all was lost ~ family, friends, self-worth. Such things truly drive young kids mad 🥺🥺🥺

Add to it the lack of stability in his current life 🥺

RaghVi ko milao Mihu 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Pallavi realising she was just a scapegoat for Deshmukhs for 2 years and her in-laws were aware. So painful to know. Krishna feeling for her Didi ~ awwww I love their precious bond so much! Please explore more on her past and present too, would love to know if she sticks around post this, and if so, what are her motivations?

The amount of rage I feel at Nandini! 😡

How can any self-respecting, educated girl want to stoop so low to excel at academics? My heart goes out to Raghav and his innocence was gifted with death, deceit and loneliness. In one moment, all was lost ~ family, friends, self-worth. Such things truly drive young kids mad 🥺🥺🥺

Add to it the lack of stability in his current life 🥺

RaghVi ko milao Mihu 😭😭😭

Thanks Tanu❤️

Nicely written. Intrigued when the prologue will come. Loved that you made the Ds more evil here. Kinda annoyed with them though I haven’t complete all the episodes. Can’t wait for these 2 to meet and fight. Looking forward. Continue soon.

PS: now I know what you were looking for the musical instruments name yesterday😊

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Nicely written. Intrigued when the prologue will come. Loved that you made the Ds more evil here. Kinda annoyed with them though I haven’t complete all the episodes. Can’t wait for these 2 to meet and fight. Looking forward. Continue soon.

PS: now I know what you were looking for the musical instruments name yesterday😊

D's evil.....????😲 yeh kab hua....😉 anyways let's see if they really turn out evil

Read it in a goooooo and I dil mange moreeeee

They did the puja in temple already, liked each other's voice already 😆 He is interested in anklets now

Mandaar at least here he is dark and a bit intersting, it's ok dude she doesn't even belong to you anyway

Waiting for these two to cross paths again 😳

Amazing story Mihu 🤗

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Read it in a goooooo and I dil mange moreeeee

They did the puja in temple already, liked each other's voice already 😆 He is interested in anklets now

Mandaar at least here he is dark and a bit intersting, it's ok dude she doesn't even belong to you anyway

Waiting for these two to cross paths again 😳

Amazing story Mihu 🤗

Amazing ❤️✨

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