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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ShanviSia

Beautiful OS Tannu! ❤️🤗RaghVi portrayed in your story made me read this OS twice 😳😆 hoping to see more of RaghVi from you


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

So happy that you enjoyed it so much 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

You are so good with writing yaar tannu great 🤗 haaye specially that confession CLARITY indeed chahiye re and that some scenes ek toh bada imagine karti hu when i read such stuff it just flashes the moment i'm reading


Thank you so much for reading and appreciating 🤗

I'm super happy you enjoyed reading it! 👍🏼

Simple, subtle but direct. Someone like Pallavi wont let her inhibitions fade easily especially when it comes to Deshmukh fam, and Raghav too would not have the courage to accept his own feelings in front of a sober Pallavi. That's what I would love to see onscreen too ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Assumptions are the creators of the chaos in the itv...how Pallavi assumed that Amruta and Raghav are together and would be perfect, how Raghav won't reciprocate her feelings...

Raghav was somber when Pallavi confessed to him...and Pallavi was drunk...would love to know if Raghav will tease her if she knows what happened yesterday or will Pallavi remember anything

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Assumptions are the creators of the chaos in the itv...how Pallavi assumed that Amruta and Raghav are together and would be perfect, how Raghav won't reciprocate her feelings...

Raghav was somber when Pallavi confessed to him...and Pallavi was drunk...would love to know if Raghav will tease her if she knows what happened yesterday or will Pallavi remember anything


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

Pallavi did not assume they are together 😆, she is only thinking about what Amruta wants, and that is Raghav, so she is trying to play matchmaker without realising he might want a chance with her. It is less about her feeling like RR wont reciprocate, but the fear that if he does, what will she do? Because she does not want to compete with Amruta, who she considers her sister, for him. Also the entire narrative about her being an orphan added to the fact that she is a young widow; the Deshmukhs are her only family, she does not want to lose them for a boy. Pallavi wont remember anything the next day, it is the first time she has ever touched alcohol. As for Raghav, he confessed knowing very well that she is drunk, so whether he will be reminding her or keeping it as his sweet secret, will reveal that in the OS when I write it out 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Such a sweet one ❤️..loved reading it ...


Kaash aise show mein bhi hota 😆...would love to see pallavi in drunken state one day 😆...raghav ka tho harkat hum dekh chuke hai 🤣..khud hi ghar laaya aur bhool gya ...😆


The way pallavi confessed n he got it ..thats the best ❤️...wonderful writing tanu ...!! keep up the good work dear ⭐️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: princy48

Such a sweet one ❤️..loved reading it ...

Kaash aise show mein bhi hota 😆...would love to see pallavi in drunken state one day 😆...raghav ka tho harkat hum dekh chuke hai 🤣..khud hi ghar laaya aur bhool gya ...😆

The way pallavi confessed n he got it ..thats the best ❤️...wonderful writing tanu ...!! keep up the good work dear ⭐️


Thanks a lot for reading and commenting 🤗

I would love to see such a simple, subtle and beautiful confession onscreen too, irrespective of her state of consciousness; will be best if it is when she is sober taaki dono na bhule. Just thought Pallavi would not confess all so easily since she otherwise considers Amruta her sister and she does not want to admit she has fallen for someone like Raghav with her current state. Glad you like it! 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

This is such a sweet little piece 😍 Pallavi's words were so beautiful, so poignantly written... Loved it ❤️😍


P.S. I love that song!

Edited by Bee222 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Bee222

This is such a sweet little piece 😍 Pallavi's words were so beautiful, so poignantly written... Loved it ❤️😍


P.S. I love that song!


Thank you for reading and commenting! 🤗

I am glad you liked it so much!! 👍🏼

Simplicity and subtlety is a core trait I identify with RaghVi, and I hope whenever their confession is to happen, it does in a beautiful manner 😳

Edited by nautankitadka - 4 years ago

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