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Posted: 4 years ago
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If I were a writer, I wouldn't have written the hostel scene at the end. Anokhi should have said, no, he is not here and why would he be or something like that.


The way it should have worked out is, Shaurya would call them saying ACP just found him unconscious and explained how the family was looking for him and ACP could have told them where they are and promise to get him home. That is easier to buy rather than this scene, nobody would believe in this.


Devi's questions were spot on, I would ask the same question. Creative writing without proper logic, analysis kind of goes ...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Champa2012

If I were a writer, I wouldn't have written the hostel scene at the end. Anokhi should have said, no, he is not here and why would he be or something like that.


The way it should have worked out is, Shaurya would call them saying ACP just found him unconscious and explained how the family was looking for him and ACP could have told them where they are and promise to get him home. That is easier to buy rather than this scene, nobody would believe in this.


Devi's questions were spot on, I would ask the same question. Creative writing without proper logic, analysis kind of goes ...

This scene is incorporated in hurry...thts very much visible. Nothng fits here.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Surely something was missing !

Could have been better.... Looks like hostel scene was to make Anokhi realise her side of things for Shaurya !!

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Originally posted by: bsfan

Surely something was missing !

Could have been better.... Looks like hostel scene was to make Anokhi realise her side of things for Shaurya !!


I have no issues with the hostel scene but how it ended in front of his family. That was a shoddy job of writing. I am okay even bringing Ahir there, he needed to know that he should not waste his time.😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsfan

Surely something was missing !

Could have been better.... Looks like hostel scene was to make Anokhi realise her side of things for Shaurya !!

There are lot of ways to do that...no need to add some illogical stuff....they can do that while fest preparation and then holi celebration. Shaurya coming to Anokhi's room not being noticed by any students, spending night is such an illogical plot😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Champa2012

If I were a writer, I wouldn't have written the hostel scene at the end. Anokhi should have said, no, he is not here and why would he be or something like that.


The way it should have worked out is, Shaurya would call them saying ACP just found him unconscious and explained how the family was looking for him and ACP could have told them where they are and promise to get him home. That is easier to buy rather than this scene, nobody would believe in this.


Devi's questions were spot on, I would ask the same question. Creative writing without proper logic, analysis kind of goes ...

Totally agree with you.........the way Anokhi said..... anyone can get that she is lying or something.....it should be better.....

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