night girl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi evey one this is my first time writing a fan fic so i hope you will like it. this story is never been herd or thougth of so i thought you guy might like to read a fin fic that is new and fresh.

tell me if you like it then i will continue

angad khanna and prithiv khanna are both bro angad is the same play boy and prithiv is the same kind guy but trust me he is not evil.

prithiv is 23 and married to a girl by the name of kajol

angad is 20 years old and just likes haveing fun in life

dlip khanna:prime minister of india he is a nice man but very serious when it come to his job

angad's mom died the day an gad was born so angad dosnt know any thing about his mother

the unknown:is a person like spider man but instead he had no power he rides a motercycle (the motercycle is like the one in dhoom) and saves peoples lives but the unknown also leaves a great mess for the people to clean up. no one has seen the unknown and dlip has a hard time finding the unknown.

kripa sharma is very rich and is 19 years old

kripa's mom is very rich and is old frinds with dlip khanna.

kripa's dad died in a car crash when kripa was only 2 years old so kripa dosnt know much about her dad

i will start the story when i come back from school if you want to know any thing more about the unknown person please tell

please tell if you might want to read the story then i will continue

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow nice fanfic dear only one misake u would had kept prithvi's wife name divya not kajol šŸ˜• šŸ˜†
anyway continue plz šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it is about 7:00 pm in india. we see a 3 story house the out side color is peach and kind of brown

then we see the in side of the house in the liveing room we see a lady on her cellphone the lady's back is faceing the camra so you cant see her face

Lady:oh yes I will see you tonight dont worry I will bring Kripa with me

the lady turns around and its no other than Kripa,s mom.

km=kripa's mom
k=kripa

Km:KRIPA KRIPA!!!!

Now you see a girl in frount of the mirror it is no other than kripa.

km:KRIPA!!!!

k:comeing mom.

kripa runs down to the living room

K:what happend mom

Km:go get ready we are going to Dlip's house tonight for a party

K:do i have to I hate going there

km:I know you hate going to Dlip's house can you at least tell me why you hate that house

k:2reasons
#1 newspress
#2 angad khanna

km:like it or not you are going to that party

k:fine(saying this in a sad and angry way)

kripa and kripa's mom reach angads house around 8:00

kripas mom finds some of her friends and starts talkeing to them.kripa leaves her mom to look and find some one she knows. As kripa was walking around the lights go off and some one grabs kripa by the waist .Before kripa could yell the person covers kripas mouth it was to dark and no one could see any thing kripa tried to free her self but it was no use the person grabed kripa harder harder every time kripa tried to run off by the time the lights went back on .Kripa was locked inside a dark room and could only see a person come closer and closer to her

K:who r u

person:relax it me

the person turns on the light of the room we see the person is angad. angad is wearing a white shirt and black jacket with blue jeans

K:gurrr WHY THE HELL DID U GRAB ME AND PUSH ME IN THIS ROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A:well i was geting bord and i saw you and thought i would have some fun. dad's party is so boreing

K: why grab me go call one of your girl friends. dont tell me that angad khanna lost his lover girls

A:please angad khanna can get any girl he wants it just so happen that my dad picked up one of my calls and

K:let me guess it was pooja who call you right

A:wrong it was tina

k: so what did uncle say

A:nothing all he did was take my cellphone away and tell the watch man to make sure i dont go out side of the house and my dad wont let any girl around my age come in the house unless they r on the guess list

K:why r u telling me all this go tell prithiv

A: you dont get it do u

K: what dont i get

A:u r the only girl i met this week that is close to my age(come closer to kripa)

now under standing what angad ment

K: dont u dare touch me(walking backward)

kripa kept walking backward untill she hit the wall angad kept walking frount ward untill he was one inch away from kripa

A:(wispered softly)come on kripa why wont u just say that u love me and get on with your life no girl has dumped angad. heres a challange from me to u kripa if u dont fall for me with in one week i wont kiss u but if you admit u love me u will have to kiss me in frount of every one

K:I WILL TAKE YOUR CHALLANGE BUT IF YOU LOSE U HAVE TO SAY IN FROUNT OF EVERY ONE THAT U ANGAD KHANNA R A PLAY BOY!!!!!!!!!!

A:challange starts now



can_gal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sooooooooo good plz continue! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please tell if you like it or not
soni595 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Really nice fan fiction - do continue soon, am enjoying it 😃

Sweet cares!
Soni
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey me is the unknown me is unknown...me is unknown....tara..tarataratarararara....here i come to save u ... šŸ˜†...see mistry solved at first page!!!!!

ok i will stop thinking me is a superhero opps heroine.... šŸ˜†

continue soon gr8 story....

<RITU>
Edited by ritu29 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: can_gal

sooooooooo good plz continue! 😳

yes....i love it!!!

night girl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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in the fan fic you will find out who the unknown is but for now you will have to wait and see how the unknown enters in the story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: night girl

in the fan fic you will find out who the unknown is but for now you will have to wait and see how the unknown enters in the story

sounds interesting....šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

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