A Purvir Story - New Beginnings (Mar 23 - Updated Ch. 3/Pg1 2nd post) - Page 4

Wow shree...can visualise them completely...

I am so missing them today...

This was simply wow

Shree please write often.. ❤️❤️

I just loved this one yaar 🤧🤧

No words left Di it's just

Kaha the aap abhi tak 🤩 koi na Der Aaye durust Aaye 😌

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Shree!!!

Part 2 is as wonderful, if not more, as part 1.

Each n every dialogue n scene is perfect. Vir's apologies to the kids n Prakashi👏 - he did hurt them as well by his actions!

The terrace scene between PurVir is fab! Purvi is so hurt that I'm feeling heartbroken. And it feel good that she is getting her anger out of the system

Also, I like the way you are using the word 'paap' instead of galti! Sach mein paap hi hua hai Vir se!

So, he has got her parents here...good move 😳

Manasi🤗

Purvi does need to get quite a bit of the negative emotions out of her system. It is therapeutic and it is important.

What happened impacted Purvir the most but there was/is collateral damage , ripple effect too. It , ofcourse, is not at the same level as Purvir's misery but it can not be swept under the carpet too.

For someone like VPS, all that name calling after the slap was a "paap" in my eyes.

I am on a mission to tie as many loose ends as I can, left by Saba..🤣🤣..

Purvi's mom is very important in her life. I *think* she can also help Purvi heal, get closure. Moms are the best!

thanks for all the love, appreciation and support guys!

Ok this part was really good

Love vps and purvi in this one alot

So what's the deal with prakashi is she is good or just pretending

I like VPS taking his time

So the gift was pur ki mom and bhai 😁😁😁

Haye ❤❤❤

Show wale to bhul Gaye hai puri tarah

Superb shree

Now waiting for the last part

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Ok this part was really good

Love vps and purvi in this one alot

So what's the deal with prakashi is she is good or just pretending

I like VPS taking his time

So the gift was pur ki mom and bhai 😁😁😁

Haye ❤❤❤

Show wale to bhul Gaye hai puri tarah

Superb shree

Now waiting for the last part

Prakashi ko I am keeping positive. Too many people out for Purvir's blood!

I think I have 2 more parts for sure😉

Just amazing😍😍👍 waiting for your update☺☺

Shree di apne to kamaal hi kar diya👏

Hats off to ur writing..

Eagerly waiting for ur next part..Actually I m excited to see what will be pur's decision now.😉

Wow Di finally Purvi has a spark of hope ignited in her brilliantly written Di 🤩🤩🤩🤩