A Purvir Story - New Beginnings (Mar 23 - Updated Ch. 3/Pg1 2nd post) - Page 3

This is so amazing shree...loved it....

Vaise to I avoid reading os jab tak 2-3 part nai ajaye because I love to read in one go but aj padhliya and now I can't wait for the next part😭😭😭😭

Superb shree👏👏

Loved every bit of it❤️❤️

Beautiful😍❤❤

Just loved it..

Originally posted by: Sweetypie34

Loved it and way dialogue are Sketched from u

Thanks! appreciate you taking the time to read it

Where were you till now Shree...This is so beautiful written❤️ Made my weekend..

The conversation between MS and Virendra..Wish we could get something like this in the show too..

Can't wait for the next part..🤗Please do write more often😳

Beautifully written 👌🤩 loved the Vir & MS soulful talk ⭐️👏& Vir's guilt & inner conflict 🥺do continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Where were you till now Shree...This is so beautiful written❤️ Made my weekend..

The conversation between MS and Virendra..Wish we could get something like this in the show too..

Can't wait for the next part..🤗Please do write more often😳

Awwww🤗..Glad you like the story.

@bold - I have my fingers crossed. Can only hope.

Updated chapter 2

Originally posted by: RamonaG

Beautifully written 👌🤩 loved the Vir & MS soulful talk ⭐️👏& Vir's guilt & inner conflict 🥺do continue soon 😳

Thanks!

I just updated 😉

Beautiful portrayal of emotions and outburst 👍🏻. Keep up the good work

Nd update soon 😊

Shree!!!

Part 2 is as wonderful, if not more, as part 1.

Each n every dialogue n scene is perfect. Vir's apologies to the kids n Prakashi👏 - he did hurt them as well by his actions!

The terrace scene between PurVir is fab! Purvi is so hurt that I'm feeling heartbroken. And it feel good that she is getting her anger out of the system

Also, I like the way you are using the word 'paap' instead of galti! Sach mein paap hi hua hai Vir se!

So, he has got her parents here...good move 😳