A Purvir Story - New Beginnings (Mar 23 - Updated Ch. 3/Pg1 2nd post) - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nezuko

Oh shree👏👏

Finally Maine padh liya

And the wait was worth it

The meeting and conversation between mother and daughter was beautiful

I love that you bring her in the story this is something that I was expecting from the show but I don't know when this will happen

Manas and juhi playing with purvi ke bhai ( nam bhul Gaye mai) ye teeno relation me kya lagenge 🤔🤔🤔🤔

Ok mukhi ji ki public apology was good dialogues felt natural

But humare chad viru panch parmeshwar 😎 ese mafi mang sakte hai show me bhi Jaane ke liye dekhiye molkki rat 10 baje

Whole chapter was really good waiting for the last part ❤❤❤❤


Purvi ka bhai will be like a mama/unlce to them, isnt it? Since she is like their mom


Thanks, Nez, for tkaing the time to read it and your feedback

Weekend tak aayega next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi_16

I thought I had commented on Part 3…but it seems I missed!

A very good part as usual…Purvi’s conversation with he rmother was so cathartic…Purvi really needed to get it out!

Vir’s apology to Purvi’s mother…extremely touching! In a country where sons-in-law are considered second only to God, his apology comes straight from the heart and also teaches his kids that if one has made a mistake, there should be no shame in apologizing!

Ab toh Purvi maaf karde Vir ko😳

Looking fwd to the next part!


yep, especially for someone so young..


Purvi maaf karegi and VPS will be back to his alpha self making her go week in the knees❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nycgal


yep, especially for someone so young..


Purvi maaf karegi and VPS will be back to his alpha self making her go week in the knees❤️


Hey will you be updating this?
such a lovely story

I love hot men who grovel

Pls do continue

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harinivas


Hey will you be updating this?
such a lovely story

I love hot men who grovel

Pls do continue


yes, I will be continuing this. I haven't found a block of time to write the next part but hopefully in the weekend.


Thanks for your feedback!

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