This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 103

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Both are confused souls

On top Geet making him more confuse

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 54)

Winners: Creampuff,Taahir004

Runner Ups: Alamelu, umadevi97

Special Mention: Kkiran

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): kkiran,sanum23, ferdouz

Congratulations to all the winners

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Part 55

Geet wears a nice cocktail dress for the pub outing


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Bohot exotic sa pub hai

Geet is with her med friends

Andheri si jagah hai

Geet is in high heels, hair in waves, makeup , and bold lips

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Maan aata hai, plunging neckline and upar coat and jeans mein

He comes and gives her a bear hug

Geet ke group ka poora attention on Maan

G- This is Maan. Maan, this is everybody from my med seminar

Geet sab ko introduce karaati hai

Maan greets everyone with a handshake

Men are scanning him; woman too but both for different reasons

A friend asks:

“So, you are also a doctor?”

M-No, I have a business

Kuch friends are khusur pusur ki humein toh pata nahi tha Geet ka boyfriend hai London mein...ye wo

Ek banda was like ki, I was toh thinking of asking her out

The pub is inside an exotic cave

So, the floor is uneven

And Geet had to wear a wretched heel

She was not all comfy in heels

She held onto Maan’s arm while walking for support

Ek jagah baithte hai toh, ek banda group mein puchta hai ki kisko kya piina hai

Sab apna apna order dete hain

Geet says ki virgin mojito

Maan uthke kehta hai ki

M-I will help you get the drinks

Maan ke jaate hi gossip start ki :

“Geet! You didn’t tell us ki you have your boyfriend here”

G-Nothing like that. Since I am in London and he is too. So,we decided to meet up

Maan aur wo banda aata hai drinks leke

Maan aake Geet ke bagal mein baith jaata hai casually putting his arms around her

Aise hi faltu small talk chal rahi hai

Kuch log group mein dance karne chale jaate hain

Kuch log disperse ho jaate hain, fishing for dates

G-This pub is inside a cave. Let’s get up and explore. What say?

She says to Maan

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Geet aur Maan cave mein madra rahe hain

Cave ke walls pe aquarium hai with lights


Geet is playing with the fishes

G-You look nice....hot

Geet was waiting for Maan to compliment her, ab Maan ne kiyanahi toh Geet ne hi keh diya

She says while playing with the fishes

M-You too.

He casually puts his hands inside his pocket and casually putshis weight on one leg

M-Your style has evolved...not that I don’t like your Indialook

G-Yeah, in India I work in my clinic and ERs. People anywaysdon’t take me seriously

M-People don’t take you seriously coz you are hot?

G-I don’t know hot or not but yeah patients have made passesat me

He smiles

M-I don’t blame them

She looks at him

He looks away to sip his drink

M-If you feel more comfortable in London then you can plan on staying here longer...work at the hospital or something

She shrugs, sipping her drink and putting it down

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha, wo dono iss tanhaayi mein kya work related baat karne aaya hai?

Ye Maan to haath tak nahi pakad raha

Maan doesn’t initiate anything coz he doesn’t want to come out as creep since Geet is always in her everlasting dilemma

M-Don’t put down your drink. Keep it in your hand always

She is startled by seriousness of his tone

G-You think someone might roofie my drink?

He nods

G-Don’t worry. I am wearing roofie detecting nail paint. it changes color

She shows her hand

He holds her hand to take a closer look

M- I dont see any color

G-Arre coz it will change color if there is roofie, else it transparent

M-Hmm interesting

Ab toh Geet ka haath securely Maan ke haath mein hai

M-Does it change color now?

He asks kissing her fingers slowly

She blushes hard

He smiles

M-Oh it changes color here

He says kissing her cheek lightly

She wonders, is he is implying that he is a bad as a roofie?Or as addictive as a drug?

Isn’t he? isn’t she badly addicted to him, even when sheknows it will not do her any good

She answers her own question

Their lips move closer to meet for a kiss


PS: Tried adding images to this post, but its not showing up on IF🤔

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice. Both dressed really well for the fancy pub. And her friends are shocked to see she has a boyfriend here. But Ofcourae geet tells them that she met up with him here since he is here too


Yeah right!!! So believable geet!!! Lol

But maan not getting too close to her, afraid of being mistaken by her Does not complement her. Poor girl. She had to do the honors first to get back a return one from him. Finally he holds her hand and gets close to her.

These two na. At this rate they will be old by the time they speak their minds and accept their true feelings for each other and confess it
hopefully this wedding trip they will make some more progress


otherwise it is 2 steps forward no four back


Edited by Alamelu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 53 & 54

Geez, I really don't understand these two.... Actually karna kya chate hai yeh dono ek pal lovey dovey hojate hai aur dusri pal jhagda karte hai yah phir ek dusre ko satate hai.... I don't think Geet understands the gravity of this situation now... When she's busy building up an iron wall around her heart she's not doing it only for herself, did she ever realize that the process to build that bloody wall is to hurt someone who loves you and it doesn't matter if that person in question told you verbally or not but still it's love... And Maan woh ek aur ullo hai agar dard hota hai toh kehna chahiye na ki mujhe dard horaha hai aisa mat karo lekin nahi Geet kuch bhi kare woh ok kardi... Relationships don't work like that... If you can't understand the situation then think deeper about it analyze and find out what to do with it or solve the problem if any... Running away wouldn't be any help.... Sign.... Geet kabhi sudrengi nahi ab Maan hi kuch karna padega..... A much twisted update Di.... 🤗


Loved these lines❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 54

Superb update 👍🏼

From spooning to rock climbing to pretending nothing happened to building walls around hearts to unanswered phone calls this update certainly is showing their internal struggles with their feelings . 😕-- absolutely , this part was dedicated to show their internal struggles

Who needs enemies when they keep fighting with themselves 😆

But I loved ❤️ the line where maan said he can be whatever geet wants him to be

And of course my favorite line was when maan almost called her mrs geet Khur Handa 😆😆...,...... I was like just say it you want her to be mrs geet Khurana!!! --ohhh I am so glad, you noticed that little nuisance🤗

Well there is progress if they are officially boyfriend /girlfriend & our sassy gal is blushing 😳

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 54


Heart Warming and so Lovely


It almost seem like Maan wants Geet just to be normal with him

talk straight that she is too into him and they both can have their time enjoying together

but instead she complicates everything first tells him when she returns home whatever happened

between the two of them will be over then she ask him if they can be each others bf/gf just

so that others can see them as partners

I get the feeling that both Geet and Maan are trying too hard to carry on as if the other does not

effect them

so Maan and Geet will be going with her friends to the Pub


This line sooo soo sooo true👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh wow 😍

Just hoping Geet doesn't pull back 😅

Loved the way they are comfortable with each other.

Expectation tho full on hai Geet ke from Maan but accept nahi karegi 😄

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 54


Well Done Everyone !!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 55

Awesome update

Maan & geet are dressed to kill

Are they still trying to impress each other ??? ( Creampuff whispering to them : no need to try to impress each other , you already have the hots for each other 😆)

But the exotic dark club is perfect setting for some romance 😳

My absolute favourite part of this update was when geet showed maan her nails saying they change colours to detect roofies but maan starts kissing her hand & he draws attention to her blushing as the colour change !! 💕💗 what a amazing scenario - well thought out di

But you left us hanging .......,

Can’t wait till next update

Thank you 🤗

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